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    A lot to unwrap in this chapter. Shayna is even worse than she seemed at first. I always figured some of her relatives were involved in Mannly's attack, but I hadn't thought she had been involved. At least she has her dreams of owning a business to fall back on.
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    Chapter 20

    dboggs9700 commented on Painawakened's story chapter in Chapter 20

    You are absolutely correct. They always have been. I hope the file isn't something Xavier can't get over. It doesn't seem to be since Xavier moved closer versus moving away.
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    Twelve Seconds

    dboggs9700 commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Twelve Seconds

    Elina deserves a huge raise for how she handled Marcus. Ivo and Henry are extremely hot together. Great chapter Soren!
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    Summer's End

    dboggs9700 commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in Summer's End

    Loving this series. Great writing @jkwsquirrel. On to part 5.
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    Great chapter, perfect mix of story and sex. Will look for part 3 next weekend.
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    I hope things go well with Tessa. Julian might be AI but he is good for Ben and they fit well together. Julian and Ben also have to put up with "the family" the same evening. Tomorrow will certainly be a pivotal day for both Ben and Julian.
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    Routine

    dboggs9700 commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Routine

    Hoping this is not the calm before the storm.
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    I am glad you are going with longer stories. The comments on your stories are always asking for follow up stories on some of your characters. Interesting start to your second paragraph.
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    I really enjoyed Roberto's flirt. Great start Joe and I can't wait to see what all Matt can get into on campus. This is the longest story you've posted here isn't it?
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    Dexies

    dboggs9700 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Dexies

    Travis is spiraling down so quickly he is going to hit bottom really soon. I see Kendo and Travis going at it like rabbits during the sleepover next weekend. Ideally, I hope Will walks in on them, but I think Travis will let it slip out in a phone conversation with Will while Kendo is still there.
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    It looks like Julian has passed the Vera test. I assume Vera is his father's mother because of the last name. I am sure Vera is very happy to not to have to take the blame for the way Diane behaves. I am enjoying the way that Ben and Julian are settling in together. I am excited for the dinner at Diane's coming up. I know Julian will behave perfectly and that will infuriate Ben's siblings and mother. They'll probably be looking for Julian's off switch before dinner is over.
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    Knots

    dboggs9700 commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in Knots

    Or, will Danny turn on the charm and end up getting Jake in bed again? History has a way of repeating itself and Jake seems in a vulnerable state right now. Who's to say Danny and Jake do not belong together and Danny just has not figured that out yet?
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    You have written such a thought-provoking story, and the characters all feel so real. It is hard to believe that you wrote this ten years ago because it is such a current story. I feel lucky I do not have to wait for chapters to be released for WAR, so on to part four. I am looking forward to the next chapter of Unraveled to come out.
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    Chapter 22

    dboggs9700 commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 22

    Levi is going to meet privately at some point with Casey. Levi is confused by his feelings about Casey and the temptation is there. Even Father Costas said there will be missteps along the way and that will play into Levi's mind too. We must hope that Levi is extremely careful and cautious in where and when they meet. He needs to be mentally prepared to leave the minute he becomes uncomfortable. Previously, I have been giving Casey the benefit of a doubt. Things in this chapter makes me second guess myself completely. Just like everyone else has expressed in the comments today, Levi is probably going to get hurt and regret ever meeting Casey. I hope I am wrong though.
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    Besides building Ben a spine, Julian needs to find Ben's balls and return them to him also.
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    Interesting chapter. Seems Julian has won over Sophie and Grace, Rachel not so much. I kept expecting Ben's mother to call and complain that Julian had upset Rachel by wanting her to be considerate of Ben. Cal is as bad as Ben's family. The dinner that Cal set up at Ben's place will be interesting. I am sure Orion and Cal will give Julian and possibly Ben something to think about.
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    Great book! Onto book three.
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    Chapter 3

    dboggs9700 commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Great story telling @kbois. Tyson was definitely an evil surprise.
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    As always Philippe, I thank you for putting things in focus for me. Thank you @Tony S. for setting such a clear scene for us.
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    The Mother seems to have cast Ben into 'the father' role. Ben deals with everything the kids want and Mother bitches and nags until he does what she sees as appropriate.
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    Truly an excellent chapter @Paladin. I hope we see more of Hugo in the future. Hopefully there is a way they can convince Justin to accept some help with university costs.
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    Very enjoyable chapter with Dixie Mae getting what she deserved. The introduction of the new characters will make things interesting in the future too.
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    Chapter 26

    dboggs9700 commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 26

    Good chapter but there are a lot of repeated dialogue and paragraphs after Sam and Johnny get home, example “After Krakatoa,” I said, “let’s disappear. Somewhere with water. Somewhere quiet. Just us.”
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    Move Along

    dboggs9700 commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in Move Along

    Great story! On to book two. Thank you.
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    Julian passed the Grace test. She trusted him with the most special thing she owns. I expected Ben to have feelings for Julian first, not the other way around. I hope the company can only extract data from Julian and not be able to attempt to control his feelings. Great chapter!
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