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  1. I find Trevor an extremely interesting guy for some reason and we really don't have that much background.
  2. Cann't wait for tomorrow's chapter. Great story Lee!
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    Chapter 10

    The self-dialogue and the dialogue that Johnny had with Sam was so revealing and captured Johnny's reality @Albert1434. I feel like I truly know Johnny now, not just the character. This feels like a perfect chapter. Thank you @Albert1434.
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    Wounded

    I think you are on to something about James, I think he may be jealous of Taggert. James in a past chapter had no problem getting rid of Taggert. I agree Taggert feels responsible for hurting Ash, but it may be just his nature, or it could be from the hurt and injuries Taggert has had in his past that makes him want to comfort Ash.
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    Chapter 19

    Brett is brighter than I ever gave him credit for, although not much. Colt is a good kid with morals that hopefully will keep him from cutting those brake lines.
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    Chapter 5

    Matt is very carefully being a dad for Levi. Listening closely to what Levi says and does then responding appropriately in the moment. Very powerful and carefully crafted chapter @Mark Ponyboy Peters.
  7. I hope that the man at the house is Marc. I guess we will have to wait and see. Many unanswered questions remaining. This is one of the most beautifully written chapters yet @Nuno R.F.C.R. It flowed so effortlessly. Thank you!
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    The Call

    Great start, lots of action! I'll watch for parts 2 and 3 the next two days.
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    Chapter 9

    I just binge read this story to this point, and I am definitely enjoying it. The strength Johnny demonstrates as he endures the constant rejections is amazing. His determination will eventually pay off.
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    Chapter 18

    How teenie is George's weenie for this to be true, or is Colt just extremely well endowed?
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    Chapter 18

    Noah is definitely manipulative; he bottoms for Colt for the first time just before he asks Colt to cut the brake lines of George's car. If Colt can hear me, DON"T KILL GEORGE. Find an alternative method to get him.
  12. Marc is correct in waiting for Frank's shell to crack. Frank is Marc's perfect hot, dominate, older, alpha male. Marc needs to heed Chris's advice about keeping heart and dick in separate boxes.
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    “Assay”

    Catherine is as intelligent as I gave her credit to be. I never expected Julian to find out in this way though. As Peter says, the author will decide how things go from here.
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    Guilty Heart

    Glad Theo finally quite listening to the voices of evil trying to misguide him. Hoping Vee and Jack get back to the village to see what is truly happening in the past.
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    “Ripple”

    That closed room, that hole in his memory, it has a name of Luka. Unfortunately, the name Luka means nothing to Devin right now.
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    Chapter 17

    I worry about that also Andy. I just hope they don't attempt George's murder next, even if George does need to die a slow and painful death.
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    Chapter 17

    Let's hope that Vincent's conversation regarding the truck crash will make Colt think before doing anything else rash.
  18. Such a touching portrait of true love. I went through a box of tissues reading the last few chapters. Thank you @ChromedOutCortex for the beautiful story.
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    Chapter 12

    I agree with this. I believe that Austin had an attraction to Nathaniel years ago which faded away and Austin believes the same will happen with Xavier. This stronger feeling Austin has for Xavier is love which does not register to Austin because he has never been in love before.
  20. I have seen a couple of his music videos on CMT but didn't associate the name. Very cool.
  21. LOL....now I will have to research Orville Peck I honestly do love this story!
  22. BTW....Love the artwork Joe!
  23. Wonderful story. I have to admit, Orville is the type of man I fantasied about at Jim's age, a sweet ole muscle bear.
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    Chapter 16

    I agree Rylee may not be genuine, but the fact that she did not go homophobic against Colt and try to change the friend's minds was a nice surprise. Otherwise, I agree with your Rylee views. I want to see George dealt with, but I don't think Colt and Noah murdering him is necessarily the correct move. Noah's mom catching George abusing Noah and killing him would be justified as would be an unfortunate accident for drunk George.
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    Chapter 16

    Pleasantly surprised at the reaction from Colt's friends and sister to him admitting he was gay. Happy that Brett was not badly hurt. Have a feeling our illustrious author is about to really shake things up.
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