Hey Jordan,
Let me start by saying I've really enjoyed reading In Due Time. You have a writing style that captivates and I feel like I'm right there, in the story.
While being engrossed in the world you've built in Chapter 12, I couldn't help but pause (or fall out of it a couple times) when my mind found comparisons to things I've read in other stories (The Ordinary Us & The Log Way).
In the beginning scene where Caydence was keeping Jake company, it felt similar to the scene in The Ordinary Us where Trina was keeping Quinn company at his house (Ch9-Ch10). While reading it, I thought "hmmm, I wonder if Chloe & Ryan are going to show up (just like Marissa & Brad showed up in TOU - where a heated discussion ensued with Marissa making disparaging comments about Trina)." Then Chloe did show up and had some unpleasantries with Jake & Caydence. I thought "well, it's not the same, only Chloe showed up", but then again, Ryan was there waiting in the car.
And then in this scene:
When reading that, my first thought was that Owen had that same observation about Aiden in TLW. Here's the actual scene in TLW Ch 4:
And then this...