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Well, I got inspired yesterday, and I'm going to run it through grammar checks next. Is 10K words too much for a prompt? I blame it on being Saturday, and something I was watching. I had too many hours to write.

Thank you @Valkyrie

@chris191070 and @peter rietbergen Not going to spoil what Dexter's phantom pain is This was a hard chapter to write, trying to balance happiness, joy, and success with a sudden reversal of dread, pain, and foreboding. I wanted to create a realistic story. The conflicts in this story are very real and common.

Wonder what kind of story you'd write. Haven't written vampires or werewolves yet, either, but I've read plenty of MM romances with them, a little bloody at times and very spicy.

Life at Le Coq accelerated over the next year. In the run-up to July 4th, Jasmine came on full-time. She and Dexter settled into an exacting rhythm. He executed with ruthless precision; she pitched ideas with fearless curiosity. True to his words, Dexter taught her techniques beyond his classical wheelhouse. He wasn’t an innovator by instinct, but a decade on the line had given him a deep command of ingredients and chemical reactions; he could translate Jasmine’s concepts into plates. Dexte

Hmm...sounds familiar And it kind of leads into what I am writing right now:

Just saw this post now, good question While I do agree to the notion that showing something can establish emotions, the limitations of first-person perspective make character 2's emotions unknown to the MC, unless you establish situations to give context. For example, say character 2 shows joy when he's walking his dog at a certain spot, everyday. MC investigates the reason behind it and realizes character 2 was looking at the spot where character 2 found his future dog, abandoned and injured on the street. This establishes character 2's characteristic of liking animals and creates an opening for MC to develop deeper ties with character 2. Another example, MC and character 2 are rivals from different cliques in high school. MC is misunderstood by character 2, so he snipes at MC from time to time. Put the two in a situation like a field trip or special event, where they must work together to accomplish a certain goal outside of their normal interactions. That will establish friendship and deeper relations if you desire.

@Seraph28 Thanks for the praise, I really enjoyed this chapter. It brought out all my inner foodie-ness, which I've never put into words. Plus, romance is one of those genres I've always wanted to write in. @peter rietbergen Soufflés are great, and there's a lot of different ways to get to the right consistency, if you have friends or family have dietary issues. I wanted to show off a little bit with Jasmine and Dexter both "chef-ing it", the culinary version of nerding out @chris191070 Dexter has come a long way, I wanted to drop those subtle hints in the conversations. Between Dexter and Sara, you can hear his alcohol consumption has gotten way down due to Reese playing lifeguard. It's imperfect, but Dexter tries. @Calvin Funny meme

A week after their fight, only one application had landed in Dexter’s inbox: Jasmine Teal. Dexter understood why no one else wanted to be his sous-chef. His reputation still clung to the place like the smoke over a stovetop after service. Still, Dexter warred with his doubts at hiring a new female chef, hearing old voices of mentors berate him for making a foolish mistake. But he also knew he couldn’t keep this pace alone. Experience and fear wrestled with his plain pragmatism. He scheduled

I've never written a zombie story before, I should take notes from our old friend, @Comicality, Gone but never forgotten Thanks for the list of horror stories

When writing Eldritch and ancient horror beings, it's very hard not to use descriptive language. Take a look at the classic H.P. Lovecraft stories, like "The Shadow over Innsmouth" and "The Call of Cthulhu". GA doesn't split the subgenres or add tags for this variant of horror, but folks familiar with the subgenre know this is normal. I usually don't write to this level of description for horror, you've probably seen in my other horror works, but it's part of this genre. I'm one of GA's few writers, who adapts to the genre that I write in. PS: The Eldritch beings should be very inhuman, so their perspectives on the humanity is usually off-putting. It's one reason why many enjoy these kinds of stories, alternate frame of reference is one reason why description has to be used.

@Inkognito @Zombie @Ron I guess I probably should tell you that I got the card before with a 150K point promo that paid for the membership benefits, including the lounge It made sense on paper, I didn't think of it as anything fancy. If the credit card companies weren't trying to reel in middle-income people, why start the spending to be $600 for a year to get free rewards? Raising new limits to $75K after they figured out folks like me were joining in without being big spenders, it's pretty bad. I just never realized that "lounges" were supposed to be for "wanna be" rich people, it never crossed my mind based on what was offered.

I was just watching this documentary on youtube, probably due to my algorithm giving me hits on travel-related items from searches for my upcoming Japan trip (All hail our mighty AI overlords, please do not smite me with an outage ) I didn't realize that my use of airport lounges was based on a false notion of "affordable affluence". Never considered it for the status symbol, just loved the idea of getting food, coffee, and a place to unwind on long international flights. Fascinating documentary, I agree that the crackdowns by credit cards like AMEX with recent increases to $75K spending a year for access to these lounges is sad as a consumer for what amounts to "faux luxury" services like a buffet, a fancy coffee machine, an open bar, and comfortable seats with wi-fi. Maybe that's the problem, folks like me who want a place to relax at an airport instead of at a food court or outside a gate aren't the target audience, but we somehow got roped in. Anyone else got airport lounge access for "affordable affluence" or were you like me and just wanted a nice place to rest/refresh at a long layover?

@Calvin Yep, it's a French dining-inspired story after all, those things can take forever to finish, but they're so good.