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First I must say you did an excellent job on the love scene. The transformation during their lovemaking, beginning with the glow on their chest to their full actual forms, was very creative. I enjoyed that immensely. That scene ending with "We need to talk." was almost comical. So somehow George Russo has been set up to do Beliel's bidding. I'm a little confused as to who exactly Beliel is working with. He even may have his own agenda. Thanks for this chapter. It was great!!

A sweet happy ending! Thanks for the story, I enjoyed it very much!

The crib thing was hilarious!

Lisa is being a real shrew right now. What's making matters worse is she doesn't have anyone to talk to about this. Of course, it may be that she won't talk to anyone about it. She's in a very horrible place. Ok, Danny is the sweetest thing. I just love him to bits. As for Nick, he's finally taking charge of his life. I'm very proud of him. Great chapter.

The love scene was very sensual, very erotic.

First the bad news - you refer to Danny as Luke in this chapter - several times actually. Once in the previous chapter as well. So I'm thinking that Luke asked for a raise to be in your story, so you fired him and hired Danny. Good move! Otherwise, nice chapter.

I'm glad that chapter is over. Frankly, I couldn't have imagined the initial exchange going any other way. They both feel betrayed; that's such a horrible emotion to bear. It's always difficult to get past betrayal. Very well done!

For the first 2 chapters I thought Tyler was a bit of a nut case, but we really got to know him better in this chapter and he is a solid friend. Nicely done. Well there's going to be some tough moments, tough decisions coming. I'm looking forward to how you're going to take me through this obstacle course. You've been keeping this story to yourself since 2007? How could you?

I absolutely loved this exchange - Ok, Lisa is pregnant. Great for Lisa , not so great for Nick. Your characters are coming along nicely. Danny's a hoot!

You've set this story up nicely! Your first story here at GA and you posted the whole thing!! Now that's courageous! Good for you. The Robbins quote is quite apropos.

On the reality issue - we all have a map of the world neatly tucked inside our heads. We use that map to interpret the world that is happening around us. Needless to say, our individual maps differ relative to our own experiences. That map, yours or mine, is never the territory it's supposed to represent. Well, enuf of Psych 101 for today. I'll give Cooper one thing, he's consistent. Consistent in making bad decisions. Seeking comfort from Kyle the way he did was another bad decision. I just hope Kyle is truthful in seeing it as a "rebound" maneuvre on Cooper's part. I'm not a Kyle fan either, but he has already paid the piper for his mistakes. Cooper's decision to take Chance back in his life wasn't so bad in my view, it's the way he did it. Both feet and damn the consequences. By closing the door in Chance's face, he broke that habitual response perhaps for the first time in his life. Is this a bay step forward? Hell no, it's only chapter 5! Superb chapter, Jwolf!!

This could be a GA first - the beginning of a love scene creates a cliffhanger! But the most delicious cliffhanger I've come across. I do feel obliged to mention that the plot did not advance in this chaper. Or did it? Who cares! Thanks for the chapter.

It's only fair that the heroes of the story get to have lots of sex. "Hot" just doesn't do that chapter justice. The plot is intriguing. How powerful can a vampire get drinking only werewolf blood? Is this only a cover story from the werewolf? How will Slade verify this fact? The Queen appears to be complicit, but is she being duped? If so, who's behind it? I take it, in this reality, vampires and werewolves are not mortal enemies?

Good to meet some more of the cast. I loved it when Mac spoke up and delivered the free = bored line! All salvos directed towards Tiffany are thoroughly appreciated. I have to admit that I'm having difficulty warming up to Mac and David for the simple reason that they're in the way of Eli and Chance being together. And that's silly because we already know that Eli and Mac didn't last. Nevertheless, I admire the relationship you've created between Eli and Chance. It has an intimacy that is not often seen even with best friends. Maybe at some point you could explain why you structured the story timeline the way you did. This is not a criticism, more of a curiousity. Looking forward to reading more.

This story continues to intrigue me. Although I find myself getting a wee bit paranoid. I'm starting to see every character as suspect. :wacko: Ok, Steven's hot - definitely comes across as a player though. But I believe Logan sees that for what it is - playtime! The degree of Eric's complicity is mainly what's weighing on my mind. I can't figure him out. Super chapter, Jwolf!! Wednesdays just can't come soon enough.

I believe you've raised many of the issues which essentially stand in the way of obtaining accurate and reproducible research results. Similar issues arise in many areas of social demographics. If a reasonable study were to surface, the anti-gay groups would simply use their considerable resources to shoot holes in it - unless the results fit into their agenda. I don't see national census bodies adding "sexuality" to their list of questions anytime soon.

Superb story, Lugh! The characters are fascinating - still digesting the many facets of this story. The value placed on virginity is most striking. The "burning" is another. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks.

Happy B-Day, James!!

I'm really enjoying the story! Thanks.

Now that was a love scene and a half, even if it was within the dreamscape. Yes, rest and sustenance are definitely called for. Superb chapter!

It alwys makes for a better story when people have different agendas. Well, at least everyone agrees that Keith needs to exit stage right, permanently. I'm all for that. Loving this story. So very creative! Brandon and Jordan are so sweet, really beautiful characters. Mind you, I hope we've seen the last of the guilt trips from both of them. Thanks for the story.

Wow! Explosive chapter!! I just loved it. Coop had every right to toss Chase out on his sorry ass. Not a great way to start a relationship. As much as it hurts, Coop needs to look after himself, especially if he's going to make it through the divorce without Devon ripping him a new one. Apart from being played for the fool, what I think Coop is feeling is betrayal. That has got to be the worst feeling in the world. Obviously, a part of Chase is still hanging on to Morgan, even though he seems to realize that it's over. Chase isn't used to losing. The picture frame, keeping his apartment in LA, and the 3-month old legal documents - it doesn't get more obvious than that. I admit that I still want to see Coop and Chase together. I have no idea how that will ever happen.

I believe it was Nephy who had suggested that Tori had revealed Logan's blackmail to Eric. I'm definitely thinging along those lines right about now. Eric just couldn't be that stupid. As for the new "evidence" on Tori, I'm thinking eating disorder. Everyone's doubling down here. I'm embarrassed to admit this, but Tori desrves it. "Oh the tangled webs we weave...." I'm loving this story, Jwolf. Thanks!

Excellent chapter, Com!! The battle for Wesley's soul continues. Cyrus' discussion on morality was fascinating, especially the part around pride. The devil himself would be proud. Love the story. Thanks.

Time to dispence with the rose-coloured glasses. So it would seem that James and Adam are a match in terms of their, shall I say, proclivities. I'm wondering if James already has a little dungeon somewhere. Historical S&M - I'm sure this will be educational! Yes, the cliffhanger! Authors cannot resist the "pull" of the cliffhanger. Although the research is sketchy, I'm sure there's some sort of dominance factor involved. More please. If you require begging, just let me know.