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If you f**k him he may look at it as an engagement! And 2 hours listening to a mad woman, man, you have more patience than I do. lol -
Ten Reasons Not to Get Drunk With Your Kids
DragonFire commented on Nephylim's blog entry in Nephylim's Blog
I'm surprised you got to 5! -
You forgot 100 cliffhangers written.
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Salutations.
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Not too bad, ate & drank far too much and still continuing in that vein! Looking forward to New Year a lot more though.
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Merry Christmas to all at GA!
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Well, that was a roller-coaster and a half, the last five chapters I mean, but what a story this is turning out to be. It seems we have a couple of day-walkers in our midst, certainly an interesting twist. The sharing of blood I'm assuming between Marc and Kai, will only make things more interesting. Excellent job.
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Excellent work. This looks like it's going to be a very interesting story, and if this chapter is anything to go by, a compelling one. Wonderfully written, incredibly dark, but through all that, love stands like a beacon against the shadows. Very well done.
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This has to be the most disturbing story I have read in a very long time. Whilst I am in no way squeamish, this had me squirming in my seat. Certainly this is a story to read once, twice, umm, where did I put that Disney novel?
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Chapter 22: Holly and Jeradu Revealed
DragonFire commented on Tiger's story chapter in Chapter 22: Holly and Jeradu Revealed
What an excellent story this is. Magic, Dragons…my personal favourite , Phoenix’s, Demons, sex & intrigue, what more could you ask for. I’m not sure how Mihai goes about repairing his relationship with his parents after such a betrayal, but it seems he must for future events to play out correctly. It seems as if he has to find a way to keep Fabian away from them permanently, how that’s possible I don’t know, but with Magic then anything is possible. -
Circumnavigation 58: The Equation of Time
DragonFire replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
Ok, I’m going to be controversial, I consider myself intelligent, but this chapter seemed beyond me. CJ, you know I love you, but this was way past my comprehension. Your attention to detail is amazing... BUT I understood maybe 1/3 of that chapter. The nautical terms are way out of my comfort zone & for the first time I switched off. I understand that they’re a huge part of the story, but for the layman like me, it went totally over my head. -
Now, that's what I call cute.
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What an excellent piece that was. A self-hating spectre whose abhorrence and denial of what he was spilled over perfectly into a wonderfully executed piece of writing. No happily ever after, but a moral message that as time moves on so do people’s attitudes. None more striking than that of Audrey & Joyce. While Audrey did nothing to support Lee, and even wished he had never been born, Joyce was in total contrast. She offered unconditional love and in the end her life so that her son could live. For sure the religious gap between the generations had a great deal to do with it, but one can only blame so much on that aspect. Sometimes it’s just easy for people to point to god to cover up their own intolerance.
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This is an excellent return of a series which has me enthralled. I'm just wondering what Blackheart has planned and to what the bait was exactly. Hector seems like the obvious answer, but is that too easy? Looking forward to the comeback of this series.
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This has to be the most unusual story I've ever come across. That said, it's an excellent piece of writing that defies the reader to look away. Great characters and plot work seamlessly together to produce something quite extraordinary. Very well done.
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The Union of Darkness and Light
DragonFire commented on Lugh's story chapter in The Union of Darkness and Light
I for one thoroughly enjoyed it, as advertised it's a modern take on an old fairy tale. Very nicely done indeed. I caught at the beginning that he could see ghosts, I just think it’s a pity you didn’t explore it further… that would have been the icing on the cake for this story. One thing I’m totally confused with though… null’s? It was never mentioned again after his grandmother’s house and I was expecting a reference to it at some point, but it never came. It didn’t detract however, from a very well written piece which contrary to opinion needed no second reading. -
Happy Birthday Linxe!
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Of all the CAP this is still by far my favourite. Brad as a narrator & character is bullish, pig headed, hot tempered & loyal; in other words perfect for this story. I've read this twice now & it's amazing what you fail to pick up the first time, or just plain forgot. But, even second time round, this is an amazing story I still cannot get bored with, and that is testament to the author.
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CHAPTER 4: Aftermath I felt very dizzy, and dropped to my knees holding my head. What the hell just happened? In what seemed like only moments, I sensed a flurry of activity going on around me, but I was too weak to move. My whole body felt as if it was operating on reserves only, and my head was pounding with the dull resonating sound of bells. Someone who I knew instinctively wasn’t Matt had their arm round me, but I just couldn’t bring myself to look up, and I damned well couldn’t hear
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CHAPTER 3: Revelations Oh Shit, I was in a whole world of trouble now. They were shrouded in the night, but I could clearly see their red eyes, stoic features and deadly demeanour. No, these weren’t human, these things were vampires, and I didn’t think they wanted to ask me for directions to the nearest blood bank either! Looking from side to side, I noticed that I had nowhere to run, and even if there was a way, there’s no way in hell I could outrun these....things, hell I could barely
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CHAPTER 2: Initiation Katrina could barely contain the rage building inside herself as she digested the news being given to her. From behind closed eyes, she tried to contain and calm it, at least for now. Snapping her eyelids open, her cold, black stare made the servant before her wither to a grovelling mess on the cold floor. “And you didn’t think to prevent it before that....that abomination took him?” she spat. Her voice was filled with contempt and pure, unadulterated fury. “My Mi
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Gary McKenzie is in a destructive relationship, but then meets a stranger online who will literally change his life forever. How does a mere mortal process the new world has opened up in front of his eyes?
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CHAPTER 1: The Beginning There was a dull ringing in the background waking me from my slumber. Groaning, I covered my head with the duvet, hoping that it would cease and desist. It didn’t. With a sigh I groped for the offending handset. “Hello,” I said grumpily, the fog of sleep still clouding my mind; my other hand reaching down to scratch my nuts. “Well, it’s about time you answered the phone. Oh dear, did I wake you up?” The sarcasm was barely contained and I bristled at the snide co
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Every year it’s the same. As I stroll down the high street on this bitter winter afternoon, I observe the hoards of brainwashed sheep, skipping around at the last minute buying gifts for their significant others. Everywhere you look, it's the same tacky displays, the same vicious red tones, the same commercial bullshit we see every year. You go into any record store, and its identical crap in different packaging, that oddly resembles last year's offerings. Cards proclaiming undying love are cram
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A short story depicting one man's view of Valentine's Day.
