DragonFire

Whoo Hoo, he got rescued. Hallelujah, praise the lord…. bout damn time! I seriously thought he’d hit the cliffs and we’d be left hanging, but even the ole goat wouldn’t be that cruel… would he?? I think it’s inevitable that his story will become world news, I mean, it does read like some fictional story you’d read on the web after all, so the news guys will be all over it soon as they get a sniff. The news I assume will send Bridget into a spin and possibly cracks will start to appear in her normally calm veneer. Not good news for Joel & Lisa who being handy could well bear the brunt of her frustration. I do believe as some have said that a reunion episode with his mother is coming. I still don't buy that Ares was destroyed, but hey, that’s the sceptic in me. lol

Galahad got that earlier but you said no! lol

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Snuggling is ok with your lover and is almost a requirement. But a snuggle with a random f**k, then that goes against all protocol I know of!

Are you sure those pics are of CJ? I only ask because I didn't realise colour film was produced in those days!

All pieces are beautifully crafted. With these sonnets, it's the last two lines that really grab you. Excellent.

I have just finished reading this and just wanted to say what a wonderful story you've created here. Really am looking forward to the sequel which I'll start very soon. Well done

That I must say was an outstanding piece of work. I started reading this a long time ago and it caught my interest then, I never thought it would become one of my favourite web stories. This was imaginative, free flowing, action packed and amazingly written. Kudos to you man.

I voted yeah. SURPRISE. But seriously, fapping. lol. Never heard it called that before. Will listen more carefully... a little later on.

Frankly I’m gonna be blunt because tactful isn’t in my vocabulary! I know you love this guy, but letting him walk all over you time and again is asking for trouble. If someone truly loves you they don’t treat you like something on the bottom of their shoe. That’s called disrespect. Fact. Ultimatum time, tell him to wise up or f**k off. You deserve better than what he’s giving you. Once you accept the way he’s treating you, he’ll carry on because he’s already gotten away with it. Never let anyone treat you this way, because sooner or later it’ll become a pattern. Make a stand now, or you’ll be a victim ‘til you do.

If you f**k him he may look at it as an engagement! And 2 hours listening to a mad woman, man, you have more patience than I do. lol

I'm surprised you got to 5!

You forgot 100 cliffhangers written.

Salutations.

Not too bad, ate & drank far too much and still continuing in that vein! Looking forward to New Year a lot more though.

Merry Christmas to all at GA!

Well, that was a roller-coaster and a half, the last five chapters I mean, but what a story this is turning out to be. It seems we have a couple of day-walkers in our midst, certainly an interesting twist. The sharing of blood I'm assuming between Marc and Kai, will only make things more interesting. Excellent job.

Excellent work. This looks like it's going to be a very interesting story, and if this chapter is anything to go by, a compelling one. Wonderfully written, incredibly dark, but through all that, love stands like a beacon against the shadows. Very well done.

This has to be the most disturbing story I have read in a very long time. Whilst I am in no way squeamish, this had me squirming in my seat. Certainly this is a story to read once, twice, umm, where did I put that Disney novel?

What an excellent story this is. Magic, Dragons…my personal favourite , Phoenix’s, Demons, sex & intrigue, what more could you ask for. I’m not sure how Mihai goes about repairing his relationship with his parents after such a betrayal, but it seems he must for future events to play out correctly. It seems as if he has to find a way to keep Fabian away from them permanently, how that’s possible I don’t know, but with Magic then anything is possible.

Ok, I’m going to be controversial, I consider myself intelligent, but this chapter seemed beyond me. CJ, you know I love you, but this was way past my comprehension. Your attention to detail is amazing... BUT I understood maybe 1/3 of that chapter. The nautical terms are way out of my comfort zone & for the first time I switched off. I understand that they’re a huge part of the story, but for the layman like me, it went totally over my head.

Now, that's what I call cute.

Bout bloody time.

What an excellent piece that was. A self-hating spectre whose abhorrence and denial of what he was spilled over perfectly into a wonderfully executed piece of writing. No happily ever after, but a moral message that as time moves on so do people’s attitudes. None more striking than that of Audrey & Joyce. While Audrey did nothing to support Lee, and even wished he had never been born, Joyce was in total contrast. She offered unconditional love and in the end her life so that her son could live. For sure the religious gap between the generations had a great deal to do with it, but one can only blame so much on that aspect. Sometimes it’s just easy for people to point to god to cover up their own intolerance.

This is an excellent return of a series which has me enthralled. I'm just wondering what Blackheart has planned and to what the bait was exactly. Hector seems like the obvious answer, but is that too easy? Looking forward to the comeback of this series.