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Daddydavek

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    Chapter 7

    The guys are young and I expect round 2 and 3 to follow that night and perhaps a round 4 early in the morning....
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    Fathers' Day

    A bit too sentimentally sappy, but a treat on father's day.
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    Kiln Me Now

    How I imagine Ryan's take: "Just shoot me!"
  4. Others found it funny, I found it annoying. I've had several dogs over the past 50 plus years and they all learned the difference between their toys and what was not as puppies.
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    Chapter 6

    This chapter was about 1800 words too short...however the first 2200 really piqued my interest.
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    Chapter 4

    I hope the trio can make it to Saturday...
  7. I'm hoping Gray and Matt continue to build a relationship.
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    The Inferno

    So many unanswered questions....Taylor better get her story straight... perhaps with some close cooperation with Jake. I think Travis may be more injured than he knows and the delayed stress reaction could be intense. Will's flashback to the fire in the stairwell was consistent with his past experience. I expect Brad and Jake will undertake disposition of loose ends.
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    Chapter 3

    Rick is curious and Mike is ready to celebrate...I suspect Randy is going to be too!
  10. Anticipation for exactly that.
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    Chapter 2

    Rick's dream fantasy makes me wonder if he wants Mike to do him too?
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    Chapter 1

    I hope none of them have morning after regrets.
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    Prologue

    You picqued my interest!
  14. But might provoke one...
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    Family time

    The vegan restaurant sounded interesting for a change, but not something I'd do regularly.
  16. Thanks for posting here and I'm looking forward to your new stories as well!
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    Chapter 15

    Wow, it seems to work for me!
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    Chapter 15

    I suspect the group is safer, but it is still a dangerous world for them. A totally destroyed zombie is the only good zombie. The plan mostly worked, but it seems there were more zombies than they thought, so there are probably more out there somewhere....
  19. The brothers are getting much better at communicating and Peter is helping.
  20. Thanks for the train travel story. You didn't mention the aircraft type on the return flight and I wondered if it was a 707 or DC 8.
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    Rapprochement

    Taylor is not the mastermind. She was played by her father and is being played again. The question is, what is the end game? And who is behind it? Perhaps we will get a clearer picture in the next chapter which can't come too soon...
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    Thanks, Dads

    ‘pep talks that feel like TED Talks in drag.’” Made me smirk!
  23. Travis revealed much in his talk with Taylor as to what a piece of work she really is. Zach's latest bombshell does indeed implicate her up to her eyeballs in the whole stalking/abduction of Travis. More please!
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    Kidnapped

    A sad chapter with Travis being kidnapped along with his hated sister. Will not knowing how to do laundry is also sad. The comment suggesting Taylor was in cahoots with the kidnappers seems a bit farfetched.
  25. Vince and Peter are having more lively "discussions" and Gray and Matt's relationship is moving glacially. The idea of setting up a charity trust for the two of them to administer is appropriate. The antique car sale to fund a project with only twenty thousand pounds doesn't sound like much. 20,000 x 1.34 = a bit under $27,000
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