But that serious lack of self-awareness on the part of JJ may also be the reason everyone is so worried and at the same time relieved that things are in a better place. For now...
The energy of the group psychic force field is at least less obvious when it is tucked inside the outer hull. Energy is often contained by metal. Think of the containment vessel of a nuclear reactor.
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Journeys are interesting. The family is worried about what happens to Steve and Bill too. But that is the stuff of the next book....
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Chapter 28
Progress
From the last chapter:
I awoke the next morning with a sense of déjà vu. We were all laying on our sides. Dennis had his back to me and I was inside him and thrusting my hips as he was thrusting his cock into Bill's ass while Steve was behind me and thrusting his cock into my ass as well. However, this was no longer a shared dream but was really happening. As I came fully awake, I sensed the others were too. However, none of us slowed down. Instead, Dennis sped up and
The coach was a pedophile and he molested more than JJ as I recall.
JJ is interesting in that he found something to excel at and is still pursuing the dream. He didn't start skating as a six year old, it was Matt who introduced him to skates and he found something he could be good at. While everyone else in his close family was into surfing, he found his niche and it says a lot about him that he put up with all the hard work it takes to make it in that arena.
My big concern is that he falls too heavily for Alex. Maturity wise, he is still a fairly young teenager and first crushes can be really tense when they end.....
Ben, while sex is intrinsic to human beings and is a part of this story, it is not really a story just about sex. Having said that, there are some hot scenes in the story, but they are not written as JO material. For those kinds of stories, Nifty may be a better site.
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What an inspiring post! Despite all the hard work and challenges, it seems you are getting some real satisfaction in this job. Thanks Matt for letting us know what's going on with you! DDK
The latest chapter of Streak starts with Zach, moves on to JJ and ends with Brad.
JJ and Alex manage to get hot. (Jeremy was spot on with his comment earlier.)
Brad gets a little advice from everyone and just maybe realizes he he has to let go.
It is a well done chapter, but in my estimation the writing describing Zach's little speech at the team meeting was Arbour at his best.
Poor Brad. I think he gets it, but it is really difficult.
You did an awesome job laying it all out concerning JJ .
However, the job you did writing the scene with Zach and the team meeting was Arbour at his best. Well done!
Exactly!
I think that with their shared link and being able to mind-meld that Abel III and Dennis are about as comfortable and secure in their love as two people that age can be.
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