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Daddydavek

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  1. Happy Birthday! & Many, many more!
  2. Daddydavek

    Chapter 13

    Wow, Zach is learning to be a power player! I guess being around Will all this time has had an impression. Poor David Louis Parnell is on Will's shit list and somehow that is going to be an unpleasant place to be. JJ and Alex--I wonder how long before JJ takes the lead and forces the issue? More please!
  3. Life is not always easy, even for the gifted. The story is at a crossroads and there may be a delay in getting the next few chapters out...
  4. Stranger things have happened. I seem to vividly recall the 1999 RAMS and a little known quarterback named Kurt Warner who came in after the starting quarterback (Trent Green) had a season ending injury going on to accomplish great things.
  5. Thanks for your review. My hope is that our main characters learn much from what they had to do, but the story is at a crossroads and it can go a couple of different ways before this part of the saga ends.
  6. We sometimes forget other life forms on Earth have existed far longer and may yet teach us much. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
  7. More soup please!
  8. Thanks for reviewing. I guess the paranoia the hidden families have about being discovered was not adequately described over the past 26 chapters. Nor the reasons for it.
  9. Without the resources to carry it off, rescuing Dustin and Diego was not a viable option. The Silverspin is leaving before they will even be brought out of their comas for their inspection by the J&J twins. But who knows, maybe the Silverspin will meet up with them again.... Thanks to all for reviewing. This chapter was emotionally draining for me too and difficult to write.
  10. Sad and perhaps wrenching. I think they will always be affected by having done this.
  11. Sad and perhaps wrenching. I think they will always be affected by having done this.
  12. It was a very difficult chapter to write. Sad and tragic both. Faced with a horrible choice, they now have to live with it.
  13. Chapter 26 A Birthday Surprise Abel III's Personal log: Thursday, 8 March 2734 We awoke early this morning and rushed through breakfast as we were due to dock with the space station Valentina Tereshkova, named for the first woman in space as it served Gagarin's World. Time had flown by as we hurtled toward our destination from the transit point, but we were at least two days ahead of schedule. This meant we would be able to spend an extra day at the station to celebrate Bill's birthday wh
  14. I loved how Sam made everyone's day!
  15. Belated Happy Birthday! I just noticed this thread and it's already after midnight in your time zone!
  16. Jacob and Russell do make a beautiful couple. When Russell said he would chose Jacob over his twin, then I was convinced.....
  17. I can't imagine anyone who is even a bit familiar with the legal system in the US making the above statement. If there were no ambiguity in the law, there would be no need for the court system and it's various levels to handle appeals.
  18. Daddydavek

    Chapter 12:

    The "hey you" lady is sentimental and I suspect she has a fond place in the author's heart as well!
  19. Happy, happy Birthday! & Many, many, more!
  20. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Abel III's powers are still evolving and hopefully everyone is enjoying the ride!DDK
  21. I get the impression that many in the forum have stereotyped Alex and not in a very flattering way. I suspect that Mark may be contributing to that impression intentionally so that he can shatter it in some dramatic matter. I seem to remember a short time ago (story-wise) we were set-up to blame Matt for all kinds of shortcomings and he seems to have redeemed himself pretty well. While Alex is a foil and will probably never be a main character in CAP, I can see Mark bringing him back in the future, say ten years in CAP time. It is another thing he is wont to do. I am just enjoying the story as it progresses. My biggest concern is not JJ but Zach's ankle. My biggest regret is as I said in my review: They are in Hawaii and no mention of the beach anywhere.......
  22. Daddydavek

    Chapter 12

    Playing on that ankle without any information that it was at least well taped made me cringe at the damage that run could do. The handcuff and broken key was too funny and so unlike Will. Cheap tawdry sex toys should now be permanently off his shopping list. JJ and Alex. Still don't know Mark is going with this, except the next date is to the BSO. My biggest regret is that Zach and Will are in Hawaii and not at the beach.....
  23. Thanks for the belated best wishes Steve and Iarwain!
  24. Happy Birthday! & Many, Many More!
  25. Thank-you! As an aspiring amateur author, I have found a place to post my work and receive the feedback necessary to encourage me to continue!
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