Daddydavek

The hiatus at Starview is almost over...and that is all I will say about the future direction of the story. I think that Abel III and Dennis are very responsible and discreet. Being discreet is something of a survival mechanism as they are being hunted by the government. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Thanks for the interesting review. Well computers are very good at keeping time and young lovers less so. DDK

Chapter 20 The Suggestion A couple of weeks passed by as we busily worked installing and implementing all the upgrades. The bridge was completely done. The family quarters also were completely repainted and redecorated, mostly according to Steve and Bill's master plan. Everyone agreed that they had a flair for pulling together some creative ideas and implementing them. Work on the crews' quarters was progressing nicely too. The main work areas, common areas and hallways would be redecorated

Can I echo the don't mess with snakes, especially if there is a chance they may be poisonous? This chapter is a little more over the top and why do I expect the rest to follow suit? It is a fantasy!

Happy Birthday Cia! & Many, Many More!

The only thing I missed in Chapter 3 was hearing from JJ! And I am really looking forward to hearing more from him in coming chapters. As far as Devon finding out Will's true age, I don't see that as a big thing once he realizes that Will's dad and his grandfather figure are ok with him being a sexually active person, a fact of which Brad and Stef certainly are aware. I am still curious what Wade is going to do about his very junior younger brother who seems to be still in school in CA. So many possible story lines to write and follow, I hoping that Streak turns out to be a good one on so many levels....

Brad and Cam were upfront about the age issue and the issue of Cam being with Matt first. I hope that Matt's new found maturity is not tested too much by the idea of Brad and Cam together and it looks like we will find out in the next chapter. I do think it was wise to get that possible bugaboo resolved as soon as possible. Now as to whether I think that Brad and Cam are going to be together for the long term, right now it improbable. It is not just the age difference, it's everything. Cam is still trying to finish up school. He has had to overcome a fair amount of adversity and admits to having several failed relationships. He does seem to be the somewhat jealous type and Brad has been something of a philanderer. Zach is having problems with isolation and I think that is going to be a given for someone deep in the closet. Thankfully, he can channel some of his frustration in physical activity, but maintaining the "devout christian" persona as a cover seems to be doubling his frustration. And he is young and horny. Additionally, he is trying to be fair and not be jealous that Will can have his flings. It's a lot to ask for a young man still in highschool. Thank-you! More please!

In reply to my review of Chapter 9, Stellar wrote: It is worth mentioning that my intended Veil of Shadow average chapter wordcount is above 8500 words. Hidden Sunlight hit nearly 9k per chapter, though that was heavily influenced by the word-heavy last few chapters. At any rate, I'm glad you liked it! I enjoy exposition, but this chapter for me fell into the "necessary but unsatisfying" category as a writer. But it was necessary for your readers as it is a complicated story and since we are reading it as a serial, it brought the story back to us and filled in some of the gaps that were confusing us. I think, even though it was bit unsatisfying for you, that it worked beautifully for us readers and was very well received by me! Thanks again!

It just gets better! On to ch. 4!

Sounds like the young nephew is a budding nudist! More please!

Sounds like the young nephew is a budding nudist! More please!

Not to be too much like a psychiatrist, but the last thing mentioned in the chapter about a young man in the first full flush of youth was a snake?

A good start! Now on to the story!

Life happens at the least convenient times. More please!

Happy Birthday!

I thought that Chapter 9 released today does a better job with the transitions and it brought the story back to me. It was definitely worth the wait.

The lady Elgin is a shrew and surely showed her colors in Gibraltar. Caroline is beginning to understand the dimensions of George's ire and perhaps that will have a positive impact. Le't up so at any rate. More please!

It was worth the wait. More than 8,000 words and the flow and transitions between narrators were much better too! So glad to get my Shay and Mira fix! I can't wait for more!

The major media in the US is pointing out that the death of Robin Williams is a wake-up call that Major Depression is a serious medical condition. Suicide is a world wide problem and one of the leading causes of death. http://www.nbcnews.com/storyline/robin-williams-death/deadly-stigma-robin-williams-suicide-exposes-silent-epidemic-n179206

Miles Long wrote in his review of Chapter 2: My gratitude for this chapter oddly does not curb my avarice for more...please and thank you. I just wanted to second that reaction!

This is a great story and I recommend it to everyone!

The lensing idea was part of the plan from when I first began the story. I'm glad that it was well received! Hopefully, I will get my ass in gear and get the next chapter ready in time! Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Glad you like it. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Finally, got my internet connection to GA back. I think of it as Abel III finally letting us into his relationship through his log notes.... Whenever hacking into a large database, it is only a matter of time before it gets noticed. Even in the 28th Century!

I have deliberately been delaying their romantic side to build it up. I think it worked and I'll let you be the judge as you get caught up with the story. Still replying from my cell phone. Thanks for reading and reviewing!