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I Don’t Need Your Protection
Daddydavek commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in I Don’t Need Your Protection
The old duck seems a bit daffy and her reaction more than reflects that. -
- Another Secret Meeting
Daddydavek commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in - Another Secret Meeting
I don't think Kevin will be surprised, just giddy beyond belief as his fantasy at seeing Jason strut his stuff is realized. -
Why of course, Kevin made it all about him, because....it is! Somehow I do think he will want answers to all his questions and that could prove interesting.
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I don't think the news has really sunk in yet and that is partly why he is not ready to talk to Daniel. Also mom gave a somewhat sanitized version of the story. I'm wondering what happens when Kevin presses for all the details.
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Smitten by a Hairy Old Man
Daddydavek commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in Smitten by a Hairy Old Man
So Jenny strayed and wonders what could have been. The lack of guilty feelings, is odd, especially since her son Jason seems to be feeling guilty over his infidelity. Now, I'm beginning to wonder how Dan is dealing with the cuckold and the clear implication he wasn't man enough for her... -
Daniel, Listen to Yourself.
Daddydavek commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in Daniel, Listen to Yourself.
Still not clear as to who is involved... -
It’s Thursday isn’t it?”
Daddydavek commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in It’s Thursday isn’t it?”
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A Large Brown Envelope
Daddydavek commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in A Large Brown Envelope
Now that is a surprise. I can imagine Kevin's reaction would be all over the place, mad at his mom, embarrassed for his dad (Dan), mad at his biological father, confused by his grandparents and fearful that his brother and sister would think less of him....and those are just my thoughts for starters! -
Hmmm...hanging on tenterhooks.
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The envelope please!
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So Jason has his foibles as well...
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I'm glad to see the family isn't above dishing it back to Kevin....
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Daniel's mum is a treasure! Kevin being given a job, took responsibility and came up with a plan!
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Kevin is a little shit and his older brother and sister have surely put up with more of his antics than they can count.
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Will always seems to find himself in interesting situations. However, I'd be surprised if he doesn't find some place for Kiki to live, even if it's the mid-century remodel in his new compound...
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Thanks for the next book and it's about Will! How sad that in the intro Will is so sure he will never have a happily ever after moment like his dad....
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Chapter 6 Cloudy Thinking
Daddydavek commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 6 Cloudy Thinking
Cloudy thinking...what a descriptive phrase! But changes take time to process. Second and even third thoughts are common for most of us. Coy may think he has it figured out, but that could change after some time passes.- 72 comments
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Shibboleth - Word of the Day - Sat Oct 17, 2020
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
shibboleth | Origin and meaning of shibboleth by Online ... https://www.etymonline.com/word/shibboleth shibboleth (n.) late 14c., the Hebrew word shibboleth, meaning "flood, stream," also "ear of corn;" in Judges xii.4-6.It was the password used by the Gileadites to distinguish their own men from fleeing Ephraimites, because Ephraimites could not pronounce the -sh-sound. Hence the figurative sense of "watchword" (first recorded 1630s), which evolved by 1862 to "outmoded slogan still adhered to." -
George is such an accommodating host! Loved the chapter and eagerly anticipating the next!
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Chapter 5 Straight Shootin'
Daddydavek commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 5 Straight Shootin'
Coy is dealing with a lot. Being the last of his family weighs heavily and hearing Boone wants to move on means his whole world is gone. Boone unburdened himself, but it was also without any thought about the impact on Coy. Now he feels guilty too.- 96 comments
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Happy Thanksgiving, eh!
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A messy but fun time with Luke! Who knew?
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Jackson can't catch a break!
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My guess is that Luke has the hots for Jackson.
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Jackson may not like it, but he just may learn something from his experience picking up trash...
