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Daddydavek

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  1. Daddydavek

    Chapter 37

    Somehow I can't imagine Winkler leaving Russia if Granger is imprisoned. More please!
  2. In the scumbag race, I don't see Renzo in quite the same league as Levine. Too bad that Toby is so clueless. It would be convenient if he could get at least some of his memory back about what he was afraid of and who did him in. Mason is ferreting out some clues, but not enough to make any sense of as yet. Billy is a hungry hoot.
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    Pizza

    I think Kevin just dissed Neanderthals...a bit unjustly too. The dipshits at his school wouldn't know a genus from a genius.
  4. Boone should stick to his plan and move on sooner than later.
  5. Daddydavek

    Chapter 30

    Thanks so much for sharing your story. It has been a comfort to me.
  6. Daddydavek

    Grand Opening

    As usual, I want more!
  7. Daddydavek

    Nailing Studs

    So Sean is onboard! Colt's monk period is about to end.
  8. Daddydavek

    Chapter 21

    Yup, there is a back story about the boys' parents whom they don't seem to miss!
  9. Daddydavek

    Chapter 20

    Here's hoping the trip to Pittsburgh goes well!
  10. Another chapter with a good vibe throughout.
  11. Daddydavek

    Chapter 19

    That adult playtime is important too!
  12. Colt made his point. Can't say he did it in a mature way. Coming from a bad emotional place it wasn't surprising. Sad that he hadn't worked through this year's ago. Hopefully going forward is more positive.
  13. Daddydavek

    Chapter 18

    What a great trip. I'm surprised nothing was said about the weather.
  14. ...and the opposite is unscrupulous!
  15. Daddydavek

    Chapter 17

    Nicely done! Stringing popcorn for garland on the tree is a tradition that lives on and pays homage to the past.
  16. Interesting start! I look forward to more!
  17. Daddydavek

    Chapter 36

    George's plan should work because appeals to vanity work with self absorbed despots...we need look no further than our own orange one. More please!
  18. Daddydavek

    Chapter 15

    Andy seems to easily get permission from his folks. The dinner went well and so did the desserts! Now when are you going to get Cody enrolled in a business/ hotel mgmt. Course?
  19. Daddydavek

    Darkness

    Ok, that is some more info, but what was Toby really wanting to get away from is the question!
  20. Good start, but a little short. I liked the info dump of the back story in small batches, it worked well.
  21. Daddydavek

    Chapter 14

    Ribs are great but messy...
  22. Interesting but not a word I imagine I would use in a story...neither can I imagine using argenteus .
  23. Daddydavek

    Chapter 13

    Andy is over the moon and now he has easy transportation to go where he wants....except winter in that rural part of PA can have treacherous roads, better suited for a 4 wheel drive pick-up...
  24. Daddydavek

    Chapter 11

    Alan's dreams are becoming a reality. Now about that lodge....
  25. Daddydavek

    Chapter 10

    Well darn, now I'm all caught up!
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