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Chapter 6 - Trying to Cope
Daddydavek commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Trying to Cope
Penn is Nash's rock..and is going to make him face reality. -
Chapter 5 - The New House is No Home
Daddydavek commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 5 - The New House is No Home
I wonder if the Knotts had an inkling about Lee and Paul? Nash certainly didn't. Two years is too much to overlook... -
Chapter 4 - The Breakup
Daddydavek commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 4 - The Breakup
Nash is more than a bit self-righteous with a flair for drama. Telling Logan he didn't like him was cruel. He got his point across, but could have been more diplomatic. His crush on Penn and his determination to avoid that temptation was the impetus, but that doesn't excuse his boorish behavior. -
Nash being Nash and not wanting to intrude, seems to have made the Knotts a little intrigued. They know that they are popular and can't imagine someone declining to hang with them. Then too there is the jock issue. Nash is in good shape, is a marathoner, and looks young for his age. The Knotts seem bound and determined to show Nash they excel at being jocks.
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Well done with balance and thoughtfulness. I suspect there are some who think the positions taken by your characters are too liberal while others think they are too moderate. That means you succeeded and hopefully got some people to think some more about their own positions. There is a ton information available. The sad think is that so many rely only on one or two sources instead of familiarizing themselves with multiple views.
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Nick is treasure. And of course Anthony and Carlo rank right up there too. I've said it before, but it's so nice to see a couple get support from family and friends.
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Having a hard time keeping all the characters "straight" and I still think there is another bum inside the company....
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I liked that Carlo was able to pay back at least some of what he thought he owed Nick! Tony better try the pastrami or he will miss out.
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Chapter 2 - Clubble Trouble
Daddydavek commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Clubble Trouble
I'm enjoying it all. The toothpaste analogy was well done. -
It is a small world!
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Four chairs would be good for group study/projects...
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Well the Knotts have caught me!
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Diluvial - Word of the Day -Thu Aug 6, 2020
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
antediluvian older than the flood...usually the one involving Noah! Of course I'm not quite antediluvian... -
Thanks for sharing your story!
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I think there is a surprise they aren't ready to tell Carlo just yet...and there isn't anything wrong!
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What a three ring circus. This security company can't even provide security for the family.
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Another cliffie...
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I'm surprised Mike didn't get a lot more crazy responses.
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Ok, I'm definitely hooked even if werewolves are my least favorite genre of fantasy fiction.
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I must of missed something. What had Brayden so distracted that he stepped in front of the bus..... The allegation he had something to do with the death of TJ's dad and uncle Bob too, and maybe the heart attack that his mom had was horrible...but now will they ever know for sure? The little brudder is too cute.
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I've tried, but have not had any success. Now I don't have any time as we will be going back to baby-sitting every week day as soon as school starts.
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Tristan is a cute one and oh brudder I can see him becoming a real heartbreaker when he gets older!
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The secret is in the sauce and the recipe gets handed down from generation to generation as it should be! I loved his chapter and I can smell the sauce!
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Part 1 - Intensive Care
Daddydavek commented on Altimexis's story chapter in Part 1 - Intensive Care
The attorney did not give them any good news. It seems a vindictive US Attorney is trying to make political capital and make an example in the case.
