Daddydavek
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Some serious shit at the beginning of the chapter for TJ to deal with, but it seems he is dealing with it. I suspect mom is moving to the NYC area soon....
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Another cliffie...
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Seems like things are progressing nicely. I hope I haven't jinxed things....
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Acronym - Word of the Day - Mon Jul 27, 2020
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
So are NASA, AWOL, SNAFU, HIV, SWAT, TGIF, GIF, NATO, and that's just off the top of my head. There are probably dozens more we use without thinking about it. -
A lot happens and is explained in this chapter, but a lot remains up in the air, as we don't yet know how TJ is going to sort this all out and what more will come out publicly???
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The Carrot And The Stick
Daddydavek commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Carrot And The Stick
Well now, Mason knows he has a problem because he really does have feelings for Rhys...no matter the public denials. Toby has a problem and it's called jealousy and I suspect it's not a new one either. Levine is still a big unknown...but most likely a scoundrel. Billy has the aw shucks persona but is good with technical stuff and there may be more to his story than we've seen so far. Rhys, is an artist with all those sensibilities, including needing constant reassurance. He is already getting clingy and I suspect it gets worse before it gets comfortable. -
If the report on Carlo was extensive, Anthony might already know about the prior relationship...and that it ended.
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A trip to take a look at the place is definitely in order...I think TJ is focused on seeing himself as damaged goods with emotional/mental problems he has to work through and he is not sure he can do that without some distance.
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It is so refreshing to have straightforward young love story with supportive parents!
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I believe that Mexico City is just over an hour by air from the nearest Pacific coast....and about 5 hours by car.
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Southpaw - Word of the Day - Sat Jul 25, 2020
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
An appropriate entry for the first weekend of the return of Major League Baseball. Thanks! P.S. My Cardinals won their opening day game yesterday against the Pittsburgh Pirates. -
I have no clue who the fit and handsome man who pleasured Mike's wife is...Maybe we will find out soon!
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Ant or Ants as a nickname for Anthony is not uncommon. The kid next door didn't like Tony as a nickname and is called Ant by his family and friends, otherwise it's Anthony...Of course that kid is like 25 now and making a career in the Army.
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So two weeks on a boat to CA with boys in Sarongs or less and not a word on how they slept or who with? Either Akela's plot has already taken place or he is distracted by the new boy(s)!
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Well it seems the cops are more interested in the kidnapping than what happened to TJ. When they hear what happened to him and who did it, they may suspect even more that he or his family are responsible....
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When I saw THE END, I automatically added "for now!" As usual, I loved it, but thought it a bit short.
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A lot going on with more to come. Hopefully things settle down a bit.
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A good massage is hard to beat....
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Don't put it off too long, it's always easier to maintain momentum while a story is fresh! Trust me this is so true from my experience...
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As I have no recollection of the other story, I am enjoying reading this as a complete outsider trying to catch the glimpses of the back story as this one plays out. Well done!
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Well done. You could run with this and turn it into a novelette as it seems there are endless possibilities for a several more chapters....
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I've lost track but I think Billy's tribe is up to four boys...that's a handful.
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A sad commentary showing violence is everywhere, even in paradise.
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An arranged encounter. Hope Rita's plan comes to fruition.
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Odious - Word of the Day - Wed Jul 22, 2020
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
The term does seem to have a certain stink to it...
