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The ability to think rationally and be cool under fire so to speak, is one George has honed well...and it serves him well too! Good chapter. More please!
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Vendetta is the exact word that came to my mind. This is no "contract" killing because of business, it seems much more than that as if there is a personal score to settle, e.g. vendetta!
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Hopefully the security company will learn how to do security in the future and our newly engaged couples can lead tranquil and peaceful lives...
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Even if Sawyer is just what Jimmy needs and vice versa, Fergus is bound to screw it up beyond all recognition....I don't see a happy ending. I just hope our inventive author can find a way out, without either of them having to suffer a calamity.
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Larry and David got a lesson I don't think they will forget... The school sounds too good to be true, they should jump at the chance to go there!
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Mike Meets a Farmer and an Accountant
Daddydavek commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Mike Meets a Farmer and an Accountant
Farmer Bruce was an experience and Mike seems to have taken the good from it as he realized it was over. Auditor Bob is eye candy and seems nice. Hopefully they get along great as they work together and maybe even have to work late... -
Ok, that was short and sweet.
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The Only Wound That Matters
Daddydavek commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Only Wound That Matters
I think Ary knows more than he has said. I think Levine is crooked. I think Toby has some fault in his own death and that Rhys is still a self-absorbed artsy-fartsy piece. Billy I'm not sure about: He seems to know things that someone new to the case probably wouldn't. -
Well we found out David is well endowed....
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Chapter 15 - Changing Tides
Daddydavek commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 15 - Changing Tides
I think the tide is coming in...again. -
Chapter 14 - Starting Over
Daddydavek commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Starting Over
With the baby named Penny and the scene at the baby shower, I was completely shocked that Penn wasn't the biological father. Unless Cam put Sam 's name on the birth certificate, Penn is still the legal dad if they were still married.... -
Chapter 13 - Homecoming
Daddydavek commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Homecoming
Well that explains the unexpected complications with Cam... -
Chapter 12 - Confessions
Daddydavek commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 12 - Confessions
Yes, Lee will be furious when he discovers Nash has moved on and found love. But he has only reaped what he has sown. Penn is so full of Nash, he fails to appreciate his own good qualities, but Nash does and I hope they can make it last a lifetime. -
Chapter 11 - Where Penn Arrives
Daddydavek commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Where Penn Arrives
The very prolonged foreplay is such that if they ever connect, it will be over in seconds.... -
Chapter 10 - Falling into place
Daddydavek commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Falling into place
Penn coming to Thailand says more than anything else about their connection and he wants Nash all to himself.... I suspect that poor Nash is going to have to face his demons sooner rather than later. -
Having lots of money is enabling, but it also means you can't let your guard down. Living in a security bubble would suck for me. I'm glad Ants and Carlo are ok with it.
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Chapter 9 - Taking a step back
Daddydavek commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Taking a step back
Poor Nash, sad about Lee and frightened by his feelings for Penn. Somehow unless the box Sam gave him really does have some magic, I don't think the trip to Thailand will solve anything for him. -
Chapter 8 - Going Commando
Daddydavek commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Going Commando
I have nothing to add, except I think Penn wishes Nash was into threesomes... -
Chapter 7 - Dear Future Husband
Daddydavek commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Dear Future Husband
They joke and call each other husband but there is truth there that they haven't admitted.... -
There is definitely another traitor in the company's office.
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I can't imagine a teenager and young man never taking himself in hand in his own bed! I get it that a lot of guys get it on in their shower, or sitting on the can, but honestly, never wanking in your own bed all throughout your teenage years is unimaginable.
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Chapter 6 - Trying to Cope
Daddydavek commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Trying to Cope
Penn is Nash's rock..and is going to make him face reality. -
Chapter 5 - The New House is No Home
Daddydavek commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 5 - The New House is No Home
I wonder if the Knotts had an inkling about Lee and Paul? Nash certainly didn't. Two years is too much to overlook... -
Chapter 4 - The Breakup
Daddydavek commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 4 - The Breakup
Nash is more than a bit self-righteous with a flair for drama. Telling Logan he didn't like him was cruel. He got his point across, but could have been more diplomatic. His crush on Penn and his determination to avoid that temptation was the impetus, but that doesn't excuse his boorish behavior. -
Nash being Nash and not wanting to intrude, seems to have made the Knotts a little intrigued. They know that they are popular and can't imagine someone declining to hang with them. Then too there is the jock issue. Nash is in good shape, is a marathoner, and looks young for his age. The Knotts seem bound and determined to show Nash they excel at being jocks.
