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Epilogue - Chapter 10-Final Chapter
Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Epilogue - Chapter 10-Final Chapter
So Jake pulled off his surprise and Brad appreciated him for including his children. Well done and a fitting end to this book in the saga! -
Now I'm wondering if Levine is Boyd's uncle?
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Verdure - Word of the Day - Thu Aug 27, 2020
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Verdant is the form of the word with which I was familiar. -
Headlong - Word of the Day - Sun Aug 23, 2020
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
I think of 9.11 and the first responders running headlong into the twin towers... -
@Wesley8890 I believe you are onto something.
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I'ts just after 8 p.m. as I just got done reading this, but it is 19 hours after you posted it!
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Disney World is great, especially if you can see it through your children's eyes as they take it all in...I was lucky enough to do that with my kids.
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Poor Greyson, that sixteen year old Rafe no longer exists and the damage done then is either healed over or just as likely permanently scarred... In looking him up after all these years, you have to ask yourself, "are you doing this for Rafe, or for yourself?"
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Well that chapter ended better than I'd hoped.
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Okay...that ended badly. I can only imagine how Lucas feels.
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Wasn't it Beverly who ordered him to take the seminar in Hawaii...evidently she hasn't steered him wrong yet!
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This "flashback" just seems out of order.. Hopefully it has a reason for being told as a flashback just before Arik and Eddy make love...
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It does seem as if Earl's health problems are fairly serious. Eddy's request was sweet and perhaps a bit bold but Arik seems to process it well and the scene at the cemetery with the stag was well done.
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Well that went really well...but can it continue?
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ANTICIPATION! That's my reaction to the chapter and I'm late to the dance so there are a few already available!
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Another new character who seems to know why the police couldn't charge Rhys. Mason ends up having to get in bed with temptation and has to be totally frustrated. Toby is helpful about the pen, but still a pain.
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Will is ever so confident and it seems to be inspiring Colin to be more too. Brad is worried about being in control and with his family that's understandable. I wonder what Jake has planned?
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Crime Solving and Knee Touching
Daddydavek commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Crime Solving and Knee Touching
Mike is the adventurous one with the knee contact... -
Another fast reading chapter with interesting characters.
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Silhouette - Word of the Day - Fri Aug 14, 2020
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
...and yes I'm old enough to remember when this was playing on the radio! -
Vogue - Word of the Day - Thu Aug 13, 2020
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
"The fashion in vogue in the 1970s was somewhere between crazy and nauseating. " ...and lots of fun! -
Carlo seems to have taken a cue from Tony and Rita as he certainly seems to be in charge...
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The ability to think rationally and be cool under fire so to speak, is one George has honed well...and it serves him well too! Good chapter. More please!
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Vendetta is the exact word that came to my mind. This is no "contract" killing because of business, it seems much more than that as if there is a personal score to settle, e.g. vendetta!
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Hopefully the security company will learn how to do security in the future and our newly engaged couples can lead tranquil and peaceful lives...
