Just some words - 1. Breathe deep

Love it, dugh... every... single... word... just beautiful... cheers... Gary....

Very evocative, dugh!

I like it.

On 05/31/2016 11:25 AM, Valkyrie said:

Very lovely, dughlas I'm so glad you decided to share your poetry.

While not the first comment this is the very first "review" for something I wrote so thank you. I hope that you continue to enjoy those bits yet to come.

On 05/31/2016 12:32 PM, Headstall said:

Love it, dugh... every... single... word... just beautiful... cheers... Gary....

Thank you Gary. As you know I had a lot of encouragement to change to author and publish my writings. I hope that this and future scribblings are worthy of the support from you and the others.

On 05/31/2016 01:50 PM, skinnydragon said:

Very evocative, dugh!

 

I like it.

Thank you. These words came to me as during a morning walk with my pup. We'd had heavy rain the night before and the fields were heavy with moisture, with life. I hope that you will continue to enjoy what I may add here in the future.

Beautifull, welcome to the author group.

I'll look forward to what you come up with next.

On 05/31/2016 08:46 PM, Caz Pedroso said:

Beautifull, welcome to the author group.

 

I'll look forward to what you come up with next.

 

Thank you Caz. I've got a couple of things written, just need to decide which to post next.

Sorry.. not paying attention to what's going on!
Aw this is a dugh poem ... I get to say that cuz Gary says some of mine are tim poems!!
Seriously though, this is lovely and it brings memories of the garden and the scents found there, and of buzzing insects and everything being all right with the world. Being in the garden with mum are some of my good childhood memories. Thanks for this dugh and I'm so glad you decided to give a permanent home to your poetry on GA.
tim xo

On 05/31/2016 09:18 PM, Mikiesboy said:

Sorry.. not paying attention to what's going on!

Aw this is a dugh poem ... I get to say that cuz Gary says some of mine are tim poems!!

Seriously though, this is lovely and it brings memories of the garden and the scents found there, and of buzzing insects and everything being all right with the world. Being in the garden with mum are some of my good childhood memories. Thanks for this dugh and I'm so glad you decided to give a permanent home to your poetry on GA.

tim xo

I'm so glad my words evoked happy memories for you. My family is blessed with a number of "paint on canvas" artists. I can't do what they do instead I try to paint with words the things I see and simply hope that those impressions somehow work.

Thanks for your kind thoughts and encouragement to share my words with others. Namaste.

On 05/31/2016 10:17 PM, Kitt said:

Thanks.

Thank you for becoming an Author and sharing this. It is a most beautiful and evocative poem. And I am smiling as I write this, so you know it was good!

On 06/01/2016 02:28 AM, Reader1810 said:

I've experienced that smell and the feeling of contendedness that come with it.

Thanks for the memories Dugh.

Thanks for reading. That smell means summer to me and I'm glad my few words brought memories to mind for you.

On 06/01/2016 02:58 AM, Parker Owens said:

Thank you for becoming an Author and sharing this. It is a most beautiful and evocative poem. And I am smiling as I write this, so you know it was good!

Parker, I'm glad this few words could make you smile to share this with you. Your encouragement it a part of why I took this step. Thank you.

Beautiful. The smell of soil, and indeed the feel of it beneath fingernails, says 'spring' to me. And so does this lovely poem. Glad you joined our merry author band

So glad you're posting as an author Dugh.. Your words delight the senses. Just wonderful..
I am looking forward to you sharing more with us..

On 06/01/2016 10:02 AM, AC Benus said:

Beautiful. The smell of soil, and indeed the feel of it beneath fingernails, says 'spring' to me. And so does this lovely poem. Glad you joined our merry author band

Your review means a great deal to me. It was through the "Live Poets Society" forum that I learned what poetry really was for this I thank you.

On 06/01/2016 10:10 AM, Defiance19 said:

So glad you're posting as an author Dugh.. Your words delight the senses. Just wonderful..

I am looking forward to you sharing more with us..

Thank you Def. Still seems surreal to me but your encouragement and support was a large part of this.

Such beautiful imagery. I can almost smell the damp dirt and new life in my garden
Congratulations on taking that first scary step and posting your first chapter. I think it's a smashing success

On 06/02/2016 11:27 AM, LitLover said:

Such beautiful imagery. I can almost smell the damp dirt and new life in my garden

Congratulations on taking that first scary step and posting your first chapter. I think it's a smashing success

Thank you Lit. You were one of those who kept encouraging me to post my small writings. That support means a lot. I'm glad you like this.

Wow!!! I wonder why I never made any attempt to write anything on this situation. May be because of the enchantment in which my senses forgot the world itself to feel it. I loved that feeling every time. After reading your poem that feeling came to me as it is. That was a fantastic poem.

After all our effort to drag to the poets mob, has its profits. Such a mesmerizing poem. Loved it.

~Emi.

On 06/17/2016 04:46 AM, Emi GS said:

Wow!!! I wonder why I never made any attempt to write anything on this situation. May be because of the enchantment in which my senses forgot the world itself to feel it. I loved that feeling every time. After reading your poem that feeling came to me as it is. That was a fantastic poem.

 

After all our effort to drag to the poets mob, has its profits. Such a mesmerizing poem. Loved it.

 

~Emi.

Hi Emi. I'm glad that you liked this and that I was able to bring you to that place. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Having grown up in the woods, this one, especially, strikes home!