Wayne's Poems - 11. Thunder

i really like this Wayne. it speaks of a deep, powerful passion. 

 thanks for sharing it

Excellent poem. Love it.

Wayne, this is awesome. Love the way you use the storm as a metaphor. 

This is beautiful. Thanks for sharing, Wayne! ❤️ 

This is a terrific poem...thanks Wayne. 

20 hours ago, mollyhousemouse said:

i really like this Wayne. it speaks of a deep, powerful passion. 

 thanks for sharing it

Thanks, molly.  I like the last bit the best.  Sometimes I'm able to give myself chills.  Sometimes.  🙂

20 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

Excellent poem. Love it.

Thanks, tim.  You and @AC Benus started me posting my poems.  I appreciate yours and his encouragement.

19 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

Wayne, this is awesome. Love the way you use the storm as a metaphor. 

Thanks, Parker.  That's really how love feels to me.  There's this wonderment in the strength of it, and then a little bit of fear too.  Anything that strong... if there's not fear of the power that person has over you, then there's probably a willful lack of awareness too.  At least, that's how it works for me.

18 hours ago, Thorn Wilde said:

This is beautiful. Thanks for sharing, Wayne! ❤️ 

Thanks, Thorn.  Short, hopefully sweet.  🙂

19 hours ago, MichaelS36 said:

This is a terrific poem...thanks Wayne. 

Thanks, Mike.  It's a short one.  I may work a bit more on that first stanza... syllables are all right, but it doesn't flow well.  The second one though, yeah.  I feel like I nailed that one.  Finishing strong is better than not.

Messed with that first stanza.  I like it better now.  It... flows better.

Love this one. How beautifully you resembled a transcending passion to a ferocious storm!