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    Wayne Gray
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Wayne's Poems - 3. Sunbeam

A beam of sun falls

to serendipitously

warm the cold still heart.

The only haiku I've written that I like.

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I like how all the words in the first and last lines are monosyllabic, while you have a six syllable word in the middle. Also, pretty!

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6 minutes ago, Thorn Wilde said:

I like how all the words in the first and last lines are monosyllabic, while you have a six syllable word in the middle. Also, pretty!

Thanks, Thorn.  I don't know why it was written this way, but it's what wanted out.  So here we are.  🙂

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Just now, Mikiesboy said:

Mad poet!

That's funny because you KNOW better!  lol
I'm a dabbler in poetry.  I'm all right with that.  I'll leave it for the pros like you and AC.

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11 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

I will only squeeze gently...to get the last drops outta you...poetry i mean...really....😁 You are writing a lot considering .... 

Oh.  I'm sad you specified.  You might give a fella the wrong? idea.  😈

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3 minutes ago, Parker Owens said:

Like @Thorn Wilde, I like the word serendipitously in the middle line. It's a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing it.

You know, I tried really hard to find a seven syllable word that would work there.  Hehehe.
Thanks for commenting, Parker.

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18 minutes ago, MacGreg said:

It's a wonderful haiku, Wayne.

Thanks, Mac.  I've written many... and liked one.  But, I'll take it.

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Just now, FanLit said:

The beam of sun I needed today.

Nicely done.  Thank you.

I was gonna say "anytime", but this is a rarity.  So... instead, I'll say "you're welcome."
Thanks for the nice comment, and I hope your day improves.  🙂

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5 minutes ago, Wayne Gray said:

I was gonna say "anytime", but this is a rarity.  So... instead, I'll say "you're welcome."
Thanks for the nice comment, and I hope your day improves.  🙂

You’re welcome and it is improving, thanks. ☺️

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On 5/4/2019 at 10:17 AM, Petey said:

Beautiful in it's simplicity.

thank you

Thanks!  I missed this comment.  I appreciate that you took the time to leave it.

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Reminds me of my religious days, and C.S. Lewis' 'Stabs of Joy.' We're weird creatures.

 

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Thanks for reading and commenting, @Akronmo!

We are undoubtedly weird creatures.  There's no changing that, so we might as well revel in and enjoy it.  🙂

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