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Singer - 10. Knockout Round

Hearing the balcony’s sliding glass-door open, Chipper turned and smiled. “Good morning. I see you found the coffee.”

“Yeah, and thanks for leaving aspirin out.” Bliss wore one of Chipper’s sweatshirts, which on her reached mid-thigh.

Two more sedate rounds followed their initial, frantic coupling the previous evening. During breaks, they ordered in food, ate, drank, and talked.

“So, you’re going shopping today?” Part of their conversation was about their plans for the day. Bliss would catch an afternoon train to Philadelphia. Both would fly to the West Coast the next day. “You want company?”

“Nope. Clothes shopping with men’s always a nightmare.” The smile and eye roll made Chipper chuckle. “You have your own things to do anyway. We’ll see each other soon enough in LA.”

 

The second round of the competition, the Knockouts, would pare each team from eight members to four. Once again, the coaches set two singers against each other and selected a winner. Unlike the Battles, the contestants chose which song to perform.

“Yo! Did you have a good trip?” Adam bro-hugged Chipper when he walked into the rehearsal room.

“Yeah, took my finals in Miami and visited with friends in Washington. In New York, I hired an attorney and lined up a couple of gigs for the long summer break.”

“Good. I hope you realize you’ve caused me some grief. A couple of people complained I showed you preference because I took you on stage with Lamar.”

“But that wasn’t planned!”

Adam smiled. “That’s what I told them. Screw them anyway. We have other things to worry about. Ready to work?”

 

With Chipper’s consent, show personnel raided his social media accounts; a camera captured an over-the-shoulder shot of him scrolling through a few of the pictures they downloaded. Portions of the current interview would be shown prior to his performance. A producer prodded him to talk about them.

“I’ve met most of these famous people thanks to my best friend. The pictures with Presidents Clinton and Obama were at my buddy’s wedding. The one with Cher was at The Cher Show on Broadway. We were her guests. She knows my friend too. I wonder if one day contestants will be sharing pictures with me.”

 

Chipper disliked being pitted against Aslan for the second round of competition. The Hawaiian surfer with the sun-kissed hair and brilliant smile chose a song from Dear Evan Hansen to perform. During a late-night bull session, Aslan had made it clear his goal was to one day star on Broadway. Musical theatre was where he wanted to be.

In contrast, Chipper craved a solo career. He wanted the opportunity to sing in front of auditoriums and arenas full of screaming fans. It was therefore surprising to his coach he chose Neil Diamond’s “I am, I said” instead of a pop anthem.

Aslan’s performance was nearly flawless; the standing ovation made Chipper realize he had to be at his best if he was to advance in the competition. Wearing a bulky, cream-colored sweater, blue jeans, and Air Jordans, he stood center stage while the guitarist for the show’s band strummed the opening notes.

The song, about a man caught between lives in New York and Los Angeles reflected Chipper’s feelings. Through three years of high school in Washington, and four of college in Miami, his love for his hometown never wavered. He yearned for a return to New York.

His voice, a whisper while he sang the opening stanza about Los Angeles, soared as he declared he was “New York City born and raised.” His emotions rose accordingly. When he blasted out the song title words, the crowd came alive. His anguish at being away from home was clearly heard, and he noticed Kelly Clarkson dab at her eyes. She was the first one to speak when he and Aslan stood side by side with arms around each other’s shoulders.

“Aslan, that was beautiful. I can’t wait for opening night when you star in a Broadway show. Chipper, you made me cry. The pain in your voice when you sang about being caught between two shores was palpable. Tough one, Adam. I’m not sure who I’d choose.”

Alicia Keys’ smile was immense. “You both killed it! Aslan, I’ll be sitting next to Kelly on opening night. That performance was brilliant. If producers aren’t calling you with job offers tomorrow morning, let me know. I’ll kick a few butts on your behalf.”

“Thank you, Alicia.”

“Unfortunately, I have to give this one to my fellow New Yorker. Chipper, you gave me goose bumps.” She paused to rub her arms. “I could so relate to your feelings. I miss our city just as much. I’m glad I was here for the birth of a musical star.”

“I…” Chipper was at a loss for words. “I’m usually not shy, but I don’t know what to say. I’m humbled. Thank you.”

“Your turn, Adam.” Carson Daly stood between the two contestants after congratulating both. “Your thoughts?”

“Oh, man. This sucks, you know? How am I supposed to pick? Both of you gave it your all. Both of you exceeded my expectations. And both of you belong on this show.

“Aslan... Man, you nailed it. I’m with Kelly and Alicia. You belong on Broadway. And when you get therebecause you will get thereI’ll be sitting right next to them. Hell, we’ll even drag the dumb redneck with us.”

“Who’re you talking about?” Blake Shelton’s tongue-in-cheek question drew chuckles.

“You! Anyway, Chipper, we already knew you could belt out a tune. No surprise there. But the way your emotions reflected the lyrics was something new. I didn’t realize you had it in you. You drew us in—”

“Adam, your decision.” Carson interrupting one of Levine’s long monologues was not uncommon.

“I really hate this.” Adam’s eyes flickered towards the contestants. He lowered his sight and stared at his fingers drumming on the chair’s armrest. “The winner of this round is… Chipper.”

Copyright © 2019 Carlos Hazday; All Rights Reserved.
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15 hours ago, Defiance19 said:

The song was a great choice for Chipper. Played right into his emotions.. sorry to see Aslan go. 
great chapter. 
Also, Dear Evan Hansen is an awesome, awesome show!! 

This is Chipper's story so I kept details of other contestants' performances to a minimum. However, I could see Aslan, wearing a cast, belting out "Waving Through a Window"

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@BlueWindBoy

Good observation!

Chipper's definitely torn, not knowing where home is. He'll coast along for a few years nomad-style, living out of hotels or staying with friends. He'll discuss planting roots during his 30th birthday party. Anything else I say right now would be a big spoiler.

Milhous wouldn't have recognized sincerity if it slapped him on the face. The fact he considered it an act isn't surprising.

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On 10/4/2019 at 7:52 PM, dughlas said:

Ohhhh, good choice on the song. I've been a fan of Neil Diamond since the last century ... you remember, back in our youth.

A guy with a name like Aslan belongs on Broadway ... think we could get a group rate on the tickets?

I liked the chapter.

A binge reader brought me to this chapter. I'd like to let you know I just penciled Aslan into the cast for an upcoming book.. That will be all for now. 😉

 

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On 10/5/2019 at 10:40 AM, Carlos Hazday said:

Back in our youth? My memory's not that good!

Aslan needs to be in a show with full nudity. Trust me, the way I envision him...  I've not thought too much about below the waist, the abs end up mesmerizing me.

I was listening to Neil Diamond this morning while in the car. I'd forgotten Chipper chose "I am ... I said" but it certainly fits. I'd liked to have heard him perform.

Aslan in a revival of "Hair".

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14 hours ago, dughlas said:

I was listening to Neil Diamond this morning while in the car. I'd forgotten Chipper chose "I am ... I said" but it certainly fits. I'd liked to have heard him perform.

Aslan in a revival of "Hair".

I did put some thought into song selection! :P

As for Aslam, he's been bouncing around New York getting progressively juicer parts in off-Broadway productions. (community theater in Seacacus counts as off-Broadway, right?) In either 2028 or 2029 he'll get his big break, starring in a new musical he partially wrote. Previews in Miami and Washington, D.C. prior to the Broadway opening. Get your tickets now!

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3 hours ago, Carlos Hazday said:

I did put some thought into song selection! :P

One of the benefits of our maturity is we have through a wealth of music styles and artists that the younger crowd may not know.

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19 hours ago, dughlas said:

One of the benefits of our maturity is we have through a wealth of music styles and artists that the younger crowd may not know.

LOL

Yeah, my problem has been having to listen to a lot of new music. Hip-hop just ain't my thing. I like some, but when the heavy rap hits, my ears complain. It's a pain considering the age group in my crowd would be listening to some of that.

A perfect example's Kendrick Lamar. I had no idea he'd won a Pulitzer for an album. While researching Coachella for Singer that was something I discovered and decided to incorporate into the story.

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Chipper nail Neil Diamond song which I am not at all surprise at. Just amazingly written also not a surprise just perfect!

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13 hours ago, Albert1434 said:

Chipper nail Neil Diamond song which I am not at all surprise at. Just amazingly written also not a surprise just perfect!

I like Neil Diamond. :P

An astute reader noticed I plagiarized words from a couple of his songs and used them as dialogue.

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31 minutes ago, Albert1434 said:

Yep I saw that!

The man wrote some great, cheesy lines...

What a beautiful noise
Coming up from the street,
Got a beautiful sound
It's got a beautiful beat.

Those words have come to mind more than once when I'm in New York.

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