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Sidewinder - 4. Chapter 4 Lawman

Proverbs 10:9
Whoever walks in integrity walks securely, but whoever takes crooked paths will be found out.

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Lawman

 

 

“Saw you boys ride out of town this morning. Y’all forget something?” Sheriff Willard asked in a slow drawl. He was a tall man with the hint of a belly, but his shoulders were broad, and he still came across as plenty powerful despite having some years on him. Leaning beside the doorway of his office with one booted foot against the wall, his expression was somewhere between amused and cagey as he watched them dismount.

Boone felt his narrowed gaze like a brand as he stepped up onto the boardwalk. Coy soon bumped against him, and he didn’t need to look to sense his nervousness. Those eyes were piercing when they were directed at yours. “We didn’t forget anything, Sheriff, but we do have something for you.”

The boards of the wooden walkway creaked under Coy’s shifting weight, the gunny sack swinging at his side. “We… Boone and me… we was wondering if we could talk in private. It’s about… well… it’s about Wes and Lee.”

“It is, eh?” the sheriff asked quiet-like, as if it was no surprise. “Saw you at their burying, but y’all left in a hurry. I was friends with those two for damn near twenty years, even back before they took the young fella in.”

“Dan, you mean?” Coy asked with a hitch in his voice.

“That be him. They called him Wes’s kid to avoid folks talking, and taught Dan to stick to that, but he belonged to both of them.”

That gaze shifted to Boone, who couldn’t help wondering why the man was telling them this, but the one thing he was sure of… Sheriff Willard was sizing him up. He felt relief when the man’s eyes flicked back to Coy after a long minute.

“Shame he ended up dying right in the middle of my street. Convinced he had good reason for calling your brother out. Would have stopped him if I knew what he was fixing to do.” He sighed and spat just clear of the boardwalk before continuing.

“Yep, damn good man, young Danny was. Your brother on the other hand....” His sudden sneer, like he’d just tasted something rotten, had Coy shifting his weight again, and the squeaking of wood seemed extra loud to Boone.

The sheriff stepped forward and spittle flew again, this time making it all the way out into the street. He cleared his throat as he turned and went through the doorway. “Anyhow… you gentlemen come on in and we’ll have us a private little talk.”

The office was empty, but Boone wondered if the jail in the back had any occupants.

“No one here but us,” the lawman said to Boone, as if he’d asked a question. He took a seat and gestured them into the two chairs on the other side of his desk. “So… what’s this all about?”

Coy, sitting quickly, exchanged a look with Boone before he tried to answer. “Ah… well….”

“Cat got your tongue, boy?”

“Give him a chance, Sheriff,” Boone said as he took his seat. “Coy, spit it out… what we came here for. Just tell the truth… we ain't got nothing to hide.”

Coy gave him a thankful glance before meeting the lawman’s curious scrutiny. “My brother shot… he killed Wes and Lee. Dan was right about that.”

The big man leaned back, the chair creaking under his weight, seeming completely relaxed, but his eyes had gone noticeably narrow. “You sure of this?”

They both nodded, and Coy answered, “Yes, sir.”

“And you’re just telling me this now?”

“Ah… I didn’t know until today… well, last night, but I was a mite… drunk… when Boone got round to telling me.”

“I was pretty sure the day after they was shot,” Boone said, “but I had to prove it to him. Not something a brother wants to hear.”

“I suppose not, unless he was involved in some way.” The sheriff was leaning forward now, and seemed to have gotten larger in the small room.

“He wasn’t, I swear to it.”

“They were my friends,” Coy said, sounding fearful, but meeting the man's direct gaze with his chin thrust forward.

“Fair enough… for now.” His posture relaxed a mite as he gave each of them a measuring stare. “Tell me, Dixon… just how did you prove it to him?”

“Ah… well... I needed to show him something, but Will was sticking close to camp, so I had to wait because… because he would have… ah, just show him, Coy.”

The gunny sack was lifted up onto the desk and let down with a thunk. Coy’s eyes met Boone’s, and he saw more fear. Sheriff Willard likely did too.

“In there… you’ll find a tin what belonged to Wes and Lee, and it has their gold in it,” Boone said calm as he could, mostly for his friend's sake. The man was sweating something awful. “There’s some paper money and a gun… don’t know who the gun belongs to, but it weren’t Will’s.”

Sheriff Willard opened the cloth sack, but kept his eyes on both of them. He brought the gun out first and his eyebrows rose as he examined the fancy grip. “Well, well, look at that.”

“You know who it belongs to?” Boone asked.

“I might.” He brought out the money next, moving it in his hand as if he was weighing it. “So you telling me you boys found this stuff in Will Diamond’s possession… or maybe in that canvas mess he called home?”

“Weren’t in neither place. I knew where his hidey hole was, up on the ridge across the river from our camp, and saw him stash something in it. I couldn’t be sure what it was until I had a look see after he left for town.”

The sheriff reached into the sack again, and brought out the gold. “And it was this here tin?”

“Yep. That very one. About made me sick.”

“When was this?”

“The night after the bodies were found up there above the falls. I had my suspicions Will had a hand in it, so I was keeping an eye on him.”

“So you’ve known since then, and I ain’t hearing it till now?” He was holding the tin in his hands, tracing the initials with his fingers before he opened it. “Sure as anything, this is theirs,” he muttered as if to himself. His eyes rose to Boone, waiting for his answer.

“I never said nothing to no one till I told Coy last night.”

“And why in tarnation not? A good man died because I had no proof. What’s the point in telling me now?” he asked angrily.

“Because it was the right thing to do, sir,” Coy answered for Boone. “He tried to protect me….”

“Protect you? What the hell does that mean?” His expression hardened, but Boone had expected this wasn’t going to be easy.

“It’s not what you’re thinking, Sheriff. Coy had nothing to do with it. I was protecting him from his brother because Will was a dangerous man… I think you know that, and I didn’t want to see anyone else get killed. Like I told you, Will was sticking close… he was back in camp minutes after I got back from finding that stuff, and he was nervous as a treed puma. Set me on edge, knowing what he did, but if he’d cottoned on that anyone knew for sure what he’d done, he’d have come after them with guns blazing, and that includes his own kin.” He met Coy’s shocked look briefly before continuing. “I didn’t know Dan was going to challenge him like he did, and I was late by a few breaths.”

“You were late for sure. You got that right, at least.”

“I know it,” Boone said, and hung his head. “I was trying to keep Dan from doing something reckless, and I wanted to keep everyone safe. I was thinking I had time, and I wanted to talk to Coy about turning Will in to you before we gave Dan his fathers’ gold and told him the truth. Then he went and got hisself killed anyway, even without the proof.”

Boone sighed, feeling powerful guilty. “I done it wrong, I know.” He sighed again. “Anyways, Coy was hurting bad, so I waited till after he buried his brother—his fourth one to be buried—before I told him about what was in Will’s hidey hole. Saw no sense to laying that on him before the service, seeing how Dan was already dead. If I could do it over….” His eyes began to burn as he pictured Dan laying in the street, blood seeping into the dirt, and his beautiful, brown eyes wide open with the light gone from them.

The sheriff grunted as he kept his hard gaze on Boone. “I knew for sure Will Diamond was dangerous.” Eventually he shifted it to Coy. “Do you really think your own brother would’ve shot you?”

“I… I don’t rightly know. I still have trouble believing he did such a thing to our friends. They were nothing but kind to him… they’d even share meals with him from time to time.”

“You got anymore family… ones I should be worried about coming around Red Bluff?”

“What? Oh, no, sir. One brother died young, and the twins drowned in a flood… and they were decent, hardworking men. Will was my last kin.”

The man peered into the tin again. “Not a lot of gold for the amount of work it took.”

“I swear we never took none… we wouldn’t do that!” Coy said fiercely.

“Settle down, boy. I believe you… saw this not too long ago, and that’s a fact.”

“There’s enough there to buy some land—that’s what they was going to do,” Boone said, having let the awful picture of Dan go. “I wish they’d done it sooner, before Will did what he did.”

Sheriff Willard snorted as he put the lid back on the tin. “They were never going to buy any land.”

“Sure they were,” Boone said. “They talked about it lots… it was their dream.”

“Son, I’ve known them a long time, and they had the fever. Land was a dream they could hang their hat on, but they’d have been mining till the day they died. Once you get the fever, it never lets you go. Dan had it too. He left a few times, thinking he could do something else, but he always came back. It would have been his life same as theirs, if he’d lived. I warned him more than a few times and the boy did try, but gold had too powerful a hold on him.”

Coy and Boone exchanged another look. Did they have the fever? Boone was certain he didn’t, but did Coy? “So what happens now, Sheriff?”

The man leaned back again. “Anything else to tell me? Anything else your brother did I should know about?” he asked Coy.

“No, sir. Nothing I know of.”

“What about you?” he asked Boone.

“Will came and went a lot, but we never knew what he was up to. Talked about robbing a bank someday, but we said we wanted no part of it. Think it was just talk.”

“Well, I’ll tell ya… he might not have robbed a bank, but he robbed a trading post three days ride from here, and not that long ago.”

“He did? How do you know that?”

“This gun you brought me, Mr. Diamond. The description matches a poster I received a week back. Yep, belonged to the owner, another old man he shot in the back, and that paper money appears close to what got stolen. There’s a fifty dollar reward for information about the killer, or the return of the gun. You’ve given me both.”

“Son of a serpent… I knew it!” Boone exclaimed. “I knew never to turn my back on him.”

Coy leaned forward, and buried his head in his hands.

Boone was quick to feel bad for his words. “Sorry, Coy.”

The handsome head rose, his eyes red, but not leaking. If anything, he looked more angry than sad. “My ma would roll over in her grave if she knew what he done. I’m the one who’s sorry… for taking his side so many times.”

“He was your brother, so of course you would.”

Sheriff Willard was watching the two of them, and staying silent. He was a hard man to read unless he was angered.

“Am I in trouble, Sheriff? For not coming in sooner?”

The man continued to stare, not moving a muscle… not even a finger, before finally answering Boone’s question. “I take pride I’m a more than passable judge of a man’s character. Wish you’d have been quicker, but you tried to do the right thing. What matters is you did tell me, and provided me proof on another robbery and murder, so no, you’re not in any legal trouble.”

Boone let out the big breath he’d been holding, and wiped the sweat from his brow.

“You fellas want some advice?”

“I suppose we could use some,” Coy answered, while Boone nodded.

“Don’t be hard on yourselves, neither of you. Wes and Lee were good at seeing the heart of people too, and they liked the pair of you. Talked about you a lot, and that’s a fact… but they were wise to Will Diamond. It didn’t protect them in the end, but they knew he wasn’t to be trusted. They might have shared meals with him, but they told me he was a sidewinder who’d strike when a body wasn’t looking, and Lord knows he spent enough time in my jail. Nasty snake he was, especially when he was pouring whiskey down his throat.

“And if you boys were smart, you’d find a new way to make a living. I’ve been in this territory a long time and I ain't never seen a single miner strike it rich. I swear that river plays with folks on purpose, giving them just enough they keep hoping for more. Most of them work themselves to death all by their lonesome. Wes and Lee were good friends, and we spent many an evening shooting the breeze at my cabin, so it does my heart good to know they had each other till the end. That’s more than most miners get.”

“Appreciate the advice,” Boone said, wondering what Coy was thinking. “Will folks round here be told Dan had a right to shoot Will, no matter that he was walking away?”

“They’ll know for sure, I promise you that. I’ve heard no bad talk about Dan, though.”

“Pleases me to hear that. Can we go now?”

“I have nothing more if you fellas don’t. Don’t forget to take your gold.”

Coy sputtered while Boone spoke. “Our gold? No, sir, it’s not our gold.”

“Sure is. Finders keepers.”

“But it was stolen. Shouldn’t it go to their relatives?”

“They didn’t have any… just Dan, and he had nobody either. I know that for a fact, and it’s not needed as evidence either, since all parties are deceased.”

“So that’s it?”

“No, Mr. Dixon. That’s not it. We don’t waste time holding trials against dead men, so I’ll report the facts to the judge, and he’ll close the case. Will Diamond will be recorded as Wes and Lee’s murderer… and that’s it. Any more questions?”

“No, but… I don’t know… taking the gold don’t feel right. Does it feel right to you, Coy?”

“No, it don’t. Seems to me—”

Coy was interrupted by a loud guffaw from the sheriff. “You boys take the cake. You sure as heck don’t have the fever if you’re trying to turn down gold. Listen, boys… some more advice. Wes and Lee would want you to have it, and from what they told me about how Dan felt, he wouldn’t begrudge you either. Know that for a fact too, and legally, if there are no relatives, it belongs to the one who found it, which would be you, Mr. Dixon. Did you see anyone else besides Dan and myself when they got planted in the ground? No, you didn’t, so get it outta my office, and then you can do what you like with it.” He put the tin back in the sack and pushed it over to their side of the desk. “The money and the gun will be returned to the owner’s widow.”

Coy and Boone shared another look before Boone reached over and picked it up. His friend still looked confused.

“And don’t forget to come back in a couple of days for the reward. I’ll get it handled at the bank when I take in the money you recovered for those trading post folks… telegraph makes things plenty quick. I’ll need your signature when you collect.” He laughed again at their expressions. “Anything else, or did y’all forget how to walk?”

His words finally got them moving. “Ah, no sir,” Coy said with a start. “Oh… yeah… we think someone stole Wes and Lee’s horses, and their mule. They were gone when we got back to camp this morning. Could have wandered off, but they was hobbled, and they’ve never done it before.”

The big man laughed again. “No such luck someone would steal that godforsaken mule. They weren’t stolen. I brought them back with me last evening.”

“You? You were at our camp?”

“Course I was. Expected you folks would be there, and I had me a suspicion you might have something to tell me. Was about to make another ride out there, truth be told, but you fellas saved me the trip.”

The sheriff’s smug, knowing look made Boone grin.

“Happens I did a search of your brother’s tent while I was there—had a look in yours too—just doing my job,” he revealed with a smirk. “I only wanted to bring home the paint since Wes loved him so much. Least I can do is look after him for my old friend, but the other two put up such a fuss—that mule bellowing—and them hopping after me like rabbits with them hobbles, I brought them too.” He looked at them slyly. “Don’t suppose you two would take them off my hands? Not the paint… he can keep my gelding company.”

“Ah… what about the undertaker?” Boone asked. “Won’t he want them as payment for Wes and Lee’s burial? He took Will’s horse as his fee… and Dan’s. Maybe we should go talk to him and settle up?”

“Taken care of,” Sheriff Willard said with a quick flick of his hand. “Franklin and the preacher have been compensated for their trouble.”

Looking to Coy, Boone got a shrug from his friend. “In that case, I reckon we could use a pack horse for supplies, and I like the mule. Lee’s mare ain’t much to look at, but she’s almost as sturdy and sure-footed as Blue,” he said, thinking of the long trip he had ahead of him.

“It’s settled then. Save me trying to find a home for them. The livery would take them, but I won’t chance they’ll be sold off to some brute… won’t do that to my friends. I have no doubts them old boys would be happy they went to men they considered friends. Do y’all know my place?”

“I do,” Boone answered.

“Good. Lead ropes on the gate… so are the hobbles. I wish you luck with that damn mule.”

“He’ll be fine. He likes me.”

The lawman raised his eyebrows at Boone’s words. “Try taking him away from the paint and see how much he likes you.” The deep cackle that followed was unexpected.

Boone chuckled at the fellow he finally thought he had a handle on. He was no one to mess with, but he had a good heart… better than most of the lawmen he’d encountered in the past.

“And, remember,” he called out as they reached the door. “Heed my advice, boys. Find something else to do with your life. Gold can be a curse, but it can be a blessing too. What you got in that sack is all the gold you’ll need if you don’t waste it on drink and such. Trust a man who’s seen his share of misery pass through this town over the years.

 

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Thanks for reading. It would be nice to hear what you're thinking of the story so far... are you somewhat engaged? Many of the readers have been quieter than usual, and it's been difficult to tell with this one. Cheers.
Thanks to my editor, Timothy M., for his efforts.
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9 hours ago, spikey582 said:

Sorry Gary, I got behind in my reading last week so I read these last two chapters back-to-back.  Absolute loving this story... all I have to say right now is those boys BOTH need to listen to the sheriff and find something better.  Together maybe.  I felt like the sheriff was seeing something between these to that he also saw in his older friends.  Objective third parties often can see things the people too close to the situation can’t. 

Hey, spikeman! Happy to hear you're loving it. It's been tough to tell how this one is going over, but I'm beginning to feel more encouraged. I agree with you that objective third parties can often see what the people involved don't... and I agree the sheriff saw something in Coy and Boone's interactions. Maybe Wes and Lee told him what they saw. I'm sure they recognized a fellow gay man in Boone, and even if they didn't, Dan likely told his dads how he felt for Boone.

The sheriff gave them good advice. Good advice often gets wasted, but in this case, I think it had some effect. Thanks for checking in and sharing your thoughts, buddy... much appreciated... G-man. :hug:  

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8 hours ago, Daddydavek said:

The sheriff showed a lot of wisdom and made it his business to know his town.  It's doubtful much gets past him. Hopefully Boone heeds his advice whether he can get Cody to go along or not.

Hey, Dave! I think you're right that Sheriff Willard pays attention. I think the boys understand that too. What I liked most is how he seemed to care... enough to give some damn good advice. Whether it gets taken by both men is another story. :)  The sheriff is one of those characters that really appealed to me as I wrote him. The fact is, many towns weren't lawless in the old west, and there were decent, smart, caring men everywhere. He's one of those. Thanks, buddy, for hanging in with the story and sharing your thoughts... much appreciated... Gary.... :hug: 

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4 hours ago, Ivor Slipper said:

It's making a very enjoyable change to read a story that is so different.

Looking forward to next Monday already. 🙂🔫

That's so great to hear, Ivor! Different is good, right? I just love delving into this time period... it was such a unique and identifiable period in history. Glad you're looking forward to Monday... there's a conversation coming, I think it's fair to say. :unsure:  Cheers... and thanks for sharing your thoughts, buddy... G. :hug: 

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3 hours ago, Bard Simpson said:

This chapter brought the West to life for me Gary. So many Westerns are action movies or stories. There's just enough dialogue in there to show how macho, cowardly or evil a character is.

This chapter did so much more. We got to see a great man in Sheriff Willard: his anger, clearly prompted by the remorse at the loss of two good friends in Wes and Lee and their charge, Dan. He eventually relented on his distaste for Will's brother, Coy, given his strong sense of judging a man's character. 

Has he done enough to turn Coy away from a futile subsistence sifting for riches? He's given Boone and Coy solid advice to go and set up a life for themselves. 

But will they remain in contact or will they forever go their separate ways. They have a few days to decide before the rewards comes in.

A really well written story Gary and honestly not one I expected to like so much at the outset. :hug:

You're so right about Westerns. Most of them were about actions... gunfights, chases, and that one great hero. Some broke the mold, and achieved something far greater, but I still found the majority of them thrilling for that time in my life. Still do. 

I'd like to think this story gives us a real snapshot of the old west, with real characters. There's no great hero in this, and there are no train robberies or gunfights other than 'off camera.' 

I agree that Sheriff Willard is a great man, though. He was a wonderful character to write... I liked him as soon as he entered my head. I saw him as wise, and I hope you and other readers felt the same about him. He's slightly grizzled, but has seen a lot in his years as a lawman. :) 

I think Coy and Boone left with respect for the man, but whether they both heed his advice remains to be seen. At this point, without sounding too cliche, they are both at a crossroads in their young lives... so will they be wise in their choices? 

Were you expecting not to like it at the outset because of the genre? Just curious. At any rate, I'm pleased you are enjoying it, buddy.  You know I love reading your always thoughtful comments. Cheers.... G. :hug: 

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1 hour ago, Bard Simpson said:

I should have know'd me better but yeah, just that! 🤠

Westerns are better known for their action more than an exposé of their character depth.

Here you've managed to achieve both by focussing on a static scene between characters, like here at Sheriff Willard's office, where all the revealing action, has already taken place elsewhere.

That keeps the scene exciting and allows us to see possible deeper insights into characters. Like, did Sheriff Willard know that Wes and Lee had a thing for eachother and were bringing up Dan as a couple. Was he also aware that Dan and Boone were more than just good friends? And of course, does such an astute fellow know more about Boone and Coy, than anyone but Will had spotted?

As I say, a great and pretty much unique mechanic for a Western, at least in my experience. Hats off to you there, pardner! :cowboy:

I tip my hat to you as well, buddy. Thanks for letting me know... I expected it was the genre, but I wasn't completely sure. I got that a lot with Morningstar, come to think of it. Many readers bypassed it for a while because they weren't fans of the shifter/fantasy genre. Humbly, I believe I turned many of them around. :) 

Your words are kind. It's all about the characters for me... and I love putting them together and letting them go. Sheriff Willard stands tall in my eyes, and I think I can answer yes for him to your questions. He absolutely knew that Wes and Lee were a couple... and it would appear he knew Dan's feelings for Boone. Dan might not have mentioned them, but I bet his fathers did. And, as Dan once said to Boone, anyone could see how he felt for Coy... so the astute sheriff likely saw something. 

I wrote this story as a balm for living in this pandemic... for a while I seriously wondered if I would write and post anything again... so I probably care more than usual how it is going over. So, again, thanks for the support. :hug: 

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I'm certainly enjoying it @Headstall but I've been quiet too.

Perhaps I'm a bit foxed about where Boone and Coy are going to find any happiness.  It doesn't seem as if it will be together, no matter how fond of each other they are.  I'm expecting a final parting of ways soon, and that's kinda sad.   I like my HEA's!

 

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15 minutes ago, Brokenbind said:

I'm certainly enjoying it @Headstall but I've been quiet too.

Perhaps I'm a bit foxed about where Boone and Coy are going to find any happiness.  It doesn't seem as if it will be together, no matter how fond of each other they are.  I'm expecting a final parting of ways soon, and that's kinda sad.   I like my HEA's!

 

I like my HEAs too, so I get it. All I can tell you is happiness can come in many forms... and in different ways. :)  Boone has to do what he has to do, and so does Coy. In the end, I don't think readers will be disappointed with the journey... at least I hope not. Glad to hear you are enjoying the story so far... hang in there... there is lot's of the journey left, and thanks for letting me know what you're feeling... I appreciate it very much... cheers... Gary.... :hug: 

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That lawman gave good advice and I hope the boys take it. They're rewarded for honesty and integrity, and I think the sheriff is right about We, Lee and Dan wanting their friends to have the gold. It was nice to meet a proper sheriff of the wild west. He might be hard, but he's sensible too and as he said, a good judge of character.

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1 hour ago, Timothy M. said:

That lawman gave good advice and I hope the boys take it. They're rewarded for honesty and integrity, and I think the sheriff is right about We, Lee and Dan wanting their friends to have the gold. It was nice to meet a proper sheriff of the wild west. He might be hard, but he's sensible too and as he said, a good judge of character.

I like Sheriff Willard. He represents one of the good men who kept the old west safe for good people. I'm sure there were plenty like him, but there were also some who weren't. He was able to see the truth of what they presented, and knew they were deserving of his good friends' gold. And yes, he gave them good advice, showing he was a caring man. He really was  a joy to write. 

Thanks for another good comment, Tim. I'm starting to get a fix on how readers are feeling about this western. :)  Cheers... :hug: 

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Yes it is different but it is very entertaining.  The dialects are perfect Gary.  Its what helps paint the picture as realistic and authentic!!  I loved the gruff but lovable Sheriff.  Tough as nails but with a big heart for real and honest men (regardless of orientation)!  The next chapter with Boone and Coy's "serious" discussion is going to be hard to take - I think!   I've made my thoughts known previously about splitting up these boys so I'll just keep silent here and see what happens.  Thanks Gary for great story.  Take care, David

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8 minutes ago, KayDeeMac said:

Yes it is different but it is very entertaining.  The dialects are perfect Gary.  Its what helps paint the picture as realistic and authentic!!  I loved the gruff but lovable Sheriff.  Tough as nails but with a big heart for real and honest men (regardless of orientation)!  The next chapter with Boone and Coy's "serious" discussion is going to be hard to take - I think!   I've made my thoughts known previously about splitting up these boys so I'll just keep silent here and see what happens.  Thanks Gary for great story.  Take care, David

Never stay silent, David. I mean, I won't change what happens, but I listen to every reader, and don't mind when they express that they're not well pleased. :) I am so glad the dialects are coming across as authentic. I now hear their voices in my everyday life, it has become so ingrained. And I'm with you on the sheriff! I love the guy... he was a great character to write, and I can picture him in great detail. That's the thing about the old west. There were a lot of good, caring people during this unusual time in history... and while there was lawlessness, there was also social decency. I wanted to showcase that with the lawman. :)  And yeah, I wanted to show the acceptance of a gay couple... not just acceptance, but real lasting friendship. 

As far as the boys splitting up, that's up to them... I am only their vessel... they make the decisions. :P  

Cheers, buddy, and thanks for the wonderful comment... Gary.... :hug: 

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Wow, an honest lawman in the Old West; I'm sure there were more than a few, but movies and stories often show them in cahoots with unscrupulous characters or taken in by their slick talk.
I was surprised that he also urged the two men to find another occupation and even returned the gold to them.  Fifty dollars in reward money is a huge sum for those days too, so maybe a small farm isn't out of reach?

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19 minutes ago, ColumbusGuy said:

Wow, an honest lawman in the Old West; I'm sure there were more than a few, but movies and stories often show them in cahoots with unscrupulous characters or taken in by their slick talk.
I was surprised that he also urged the two men to find another occupation and even returned the gold to them.  Fifty dollars in reward money is a huge sum for those days too, so maybe a small farm isn't out of reach?

In researching, I read a lot of actual accounts, and there have been some excellent documentaries on the old west. The fact is there were a lot of dedicated lawmen during that time period. I had Sheriff Willard figured out pretty early, and absolutely loved writing him. He's a caring man, and he knew Wes and Lee well... they may have been his very best friends, so having Boone and Coy provide justice for them likely meant a lot to him. 

The sheriff has seen a lot of gold fever in his lifetime, including that of his friends, so I think he gave Boone and Coy great advice... the fact he cares about them speaks of a man with a good heart. :)  Finders Keepers was actually a thing back then if there was no one with legal claim, so legally they had the right to the gold. In later years, that changed, but for this time period, unbranded stock for example, belonged to those who found them unless someone could prove ownership.

Yeah, between the gold and the reward money, there is definitely enough for a farm or two, but remember, land by itself wasn't enough. You needed stock, seed, tools, lumber, wagons, plows, food staples, etc., etc.. Even when land was free, farms folded in great numbers back then. It was a hard and harsh life. 

Thanks, buddy... hope all is all with you... G-man. :hug:  :kiss: 

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8 minutes ago, Headstall said:

In researching, I read a lot of actual accounts, and there have been some excellent documentaries on the old west. The fact is there were a lot of dedicated lawmen during that time period. I had Sheriff Willard figured out pretty early, and absolutely loved writing him. He's a caring man, and he knew Wes and Lee well... they may have been his very best friends, so having Boone and Coy provide justice for them likely meant a lot to him. 

The sheriff has seen a lot of gold fever in his lifetime, including that of his friends, so I think he gave Boone and Coy great advice... the fact he cares about them speaks of a man with a good heart. :)  Finders Keepers was actually a thing back then if there was no one with legal claim, so legally they had the right to the gold. In later years, that changed, but for this time period, unbranded stock for example, belonged to those who found them unless someone could prove ownership.

Yeah, between the gold and the reward money, there is definitely enough for a farm or two, but remember, land by itself wasn't enough. You needed stock, seed, tools, lumber, wagons, plows, food staples, etc., etc.. Even when land was free, farms folded in great numbers back then. It was a hard and harsh life. 

Thanks, buddy... hope all is all with you... G-man. :hug:  :kiss: 

Even in better country farming was always hard work.  When my greatgreatgrandfather emigrated to Ohio from Germany in 1841 he bought acreage in north central Ohio and increased it over the years to more than 130 acres and was written up as having the best farm in his county in 1880.  The family spread to other farms and my late uncle Eddie gave it up in the 80s as his wife hated being stuck in the country during our Winters.  Other uncles families kept on, but I ratrely visited them as they were all much older.

My father gave it up to work in a war factory in the 40s, and decided to stay in Columbus.  Once we moved to the country when I was three, he kept a large garden every year, and helped our farm neighbors do work on their properties too.

From what I was told, the family used horses for their work, and a steam thresher would come around and do farms in turn.

I'm lucky to keep a houseplant alive, and my only luck was with roses until my vision went....

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8 minutes ago, ColumbusGuy said:

Even in better country farming was always hard work.  When my greatgreatgrandfather emigrated to Ohio from Germany in 1841 he bought acreage in north central Ohio and increased it over the years to more than 130 acres and was written up as having the best farm in his county in 1880.  The family spread to other farms and my late uncle Eddie gave it up in the 80s as his wife hated being stuck in the country during our Winters.  Other uncles families kept on, but I ratrely visited them as they were all much older.

My father gave it up to work in a war factory in the 40s, and decided to stay in Columbus.  Once we moved to the country when I was three, he kept a large garden every year, and helped our farm neighbors do work on their properties too.

From what I was told, the family used horses for their work, and a steam thresher would come around and do farms in turn.

I'm lucky to keep a houseplant alive, and my only luck was with roses until my vision went....

I'm from a farming background as well. My best memories are when my mom left my dad and we lived in a little house across the street from my aunt and uncle's farm. They had seven kids, and there was always something going on. I do tend to have a green thumb... always have, and I used to grow African violets on our windowsills... cuttings from my paternal grandmother, may she rest in peace. Ah, the memories... :hug: 

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On 10/5/2020 at 5:11 PM, Headstall said:

Hey, Wes. Sheriffs held a lot of power in many towns, and it often went to their heads. They were the law, after all. I read about how lawmen kept towns and territories safe and civil, and Sheriff Willard is one of those good ones. But yeah, many would have arrested them and taken the gold... or at the least, taken the gold. 

I don't think Boone knows what he wants... I mean, he does, but his feelings make it difficult to stick to his guns. We'll see what happens... now that they have a bit of wealth that opens up more possibilities. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, buddy. On my way to the doctor now... cheers... G. 

Hey Gary, I hope you’re well? 

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It must have been really hard for Coy to learn about all of the bad things that his brother had got up to.

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4 minutes ago, Bft said:

Hey Gary, I hope you’re well? 

Hey, Bft! Yes, I'm okay now. I had an ear infection that ended up in both ears, but antibiotics and antibiotic drops cleared it up. Thanks for asking. :hug: 

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2 minutes ago, Bft said:

It must have been really hard for Coy to learn about all of the bad things that his brother had got up to.

He has the weight of four deaths on his shoulders, including Dan's. I believe he was in denial about how rotten a person Will was, and now he's had to face how wrong he was. It's not his fault, but guilt is a part of it. We tend to feel responsible for family, even when they're sidewinders. :unsure2:  Cheers, buddy... G. :hug: 

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17 hours ago, Headstall said:

Hey, Bft! Yes, I'm okay now. I had an ear infection that ended up in both ears, but antibiotics and antibiotic drops cleared it up. Thanks for asking. :hug: 

That’s not good, sorry to hear that, I mad glad that you are on the mend. 

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7 hours ago, Bft said:

That’s not good, sorry to hear that, I mad glad that you are on the mend. 

Thanks... hope I didn't speak too soon... my ear is itchy this morning. :unsure:  :hug:  Now I have to get the new chapter ready for posting. :) 

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So, kinda late to the story given this is chapter 4 of seven.  Really enjoying it though.  I admit to being partial to western novels.  Passed through many in 60 odd years of reading.  I understand people's thoughts on both Coy and Boone and their relationship.   At first I thought the story would drop Coy and carry on with "the life of Boone" so to speak.  But now I am inclined to believe Coy will be popping back from time to time.  I hope so, because there is a real and important friendship there that means a lot to the both of them even though it's unlikely to be a love affair.

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16 minutes ago, rockycs said:

So, kinda late to the story given this is chapter 4 of seven.  Really enjoying it though.  I admit to being partial to western novels.  Passed through many in 60 odd years of reading.  I understand people's thoughts on both Coy and Boone and their relationship.   At first I thought the story would drop Coy and carry on with "the life of Boone" so to speak.  But now I am inclined to believe Coy will be popping back from time to time.  I hope so, because there is a real and important friendship there that means a lot to the both of them even though it's unlikely to be a love affair.

Hey, rocky! Nice to have you along for the ride, pardner. :) I've always been a huge western fan, so I'm pleased to find another one. I've written one western called Finding Refuge, a shorter story, and I've always wanted to write another one... a longer one, and at first I thought I would do a continuation of those characters, but my muse had other ideas. I was having trouble writing during the start of the pandemic, and this one came into my brain and changed that. You could say it saved me. :)  Sorry... you've caught me in a rambling mood. 

Coy and Boone do have a great and special friendship, and it would be a shame to lose it entirely... I have to remember this is chapter four, and not give away any spoilers, but I will say that while this is Boone's journey, I won't leave readers in the dark about what happens to Coy. Will we see him again? I could answer that, but I like to keep people guessing. :P  Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts... It is appreciated. I hope you like what's coming... cheers... Gary.... :hug:  

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