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Sidewinder - 5. Chapter 5 Straight Shootin'

Proverbs 13:12

Hope deferred makes the heart sick, but a longing fulfilled is a tree of life.

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Straight Shootin'

 

 

Boone blew out a long breath as they walked away from the Sheriff Willard’s office, chuckling when Coy did the same. Neither spoke as they hopped off the boardwalk and approached their horses. A few townsfolk were eyeing them curiously, as they would anyone seen coming from the jail. Not much got past the residents of Red Bluff. Boone returned the gunny sack to one of Coy’s saddlebags, and then quickly mounted his own red-roan Appaloosa.

Coy was on his mare just as fast. “Let’s get the heck out of here,” he muttered, reining Mouse out into the street.

“What about supplies?”

“Got enough for a few days, I reckon, and I’m sweating worse than a team of stagecoach horses. Don’t feel like getting stared at any longer than I have to.”

“Don’t care for it either... suspect word will travel fast,” Boone said as he noticed more turned heads. “Sheriff’s place is this way.”

There was no more conversation as they rode past the town buildings and headed up a small rise to the west. The house, off by itself, was stick-built like all the other buildings in town, with a good-sized fenced field behind it. The familiar horses could be seen from a distance away, and of course Blue’s big, white ears stood out like a fox trying to hide in a chicken coop.

The lawman sure had a good view of the town from his front door, and Boone figured it was why he didn’t miss much. He had clear sights on anyone coming or going, from either end. The house was small, but looked cared for, with an old rocking chair and two others sitting on the covered front porch. They rode past it, and the well, on the way to the back paddock. A small barn inside the fence, with doors open at both ends, provided good shade for the animals, and the water trough near the gate was mostly full.

“I was worried he was going to throw you in jail.”

Boone gave a nod, followed by a relieved snort as he dismounted. “He weren’t too happy I took my time coming in… but I think he understood my reasons.”

“I don’t know the law the way he does, but I sure wasn’t expecting anything like what happened back there. I reckon he tried to trap us with asking if we found the gold in Will’s tent afore he told us he’d already gone through it… and he searched ours to boot!”

“Yep, he’s a cagey one… but we should be glad he went in ours. That ways, he saw no reason to think we could be lying.”

“Maybe so, but I was plenty scared at the way he stared at us. I’m still shook up, truth be told, and I’m not sure about the gold. It feels like some kind of trap.” Coy leaned back and swung his right leg over the saddle horn in one of those typically agile moves he made look easy. Sliding to the ground, he was already facing Boone, and his distress was plain to see.

Turning his brother in had surely been hard on him, dead or not, and Boone tried to give his friend ease. “It’s not a trap, Coy, and I’m as sure of that as anything. Sheriff Willard said it’s what Wes and Lee would want, and I believe he’s seeing it right—after I thought about it some—and that’s why he told us to take it. He’s got three killings solved so there’s nothing more to be gained, and he’s a man who has things figured out in advance.”

“What do you mean? He didn’t even know we were coming.”

“Maybe… maybe not, but he’s quick to see the truth of things, and he sure as heck knew we had something to tell before we even got there… you heard him yourself. We’re good folk, and he knew that too.”

“But he hardly knows us at all! My brother was a troublemaker every time he went to town… and a lowdown, back-shooting murderer to boot.”

Boone felt bad for the pain in Coy’s voice. “But he trusted Wes and Lee’s opinion of us, and you are not Will, not by a long shot, and he can tell that with his own eyes. Heck, anyone can tell that. He’s seen you around enough, and he don’t miss much. You did the right thing.”

“Only because you talked me into it.”

“Not true at all. It was your decision, if you recall. I left it to you to turn around and go back to camp.”

“Only since you knew I couldn’t do that.”

“Yep.”

Coy frowned, but it cleared quickly, and Boone saw a small twitch in one corner of his mouth. “So, you’re really fine with taking the gold they got shot dead for?”

Boone took a few seconds to wrap Daisy’s reins around the hitching post before answering. “I understand it’s hard to feel right about taking the gold… it is for me too, but what Sheriff Willard said made a lot of sense. It’s not tainted gold… it’s just gold. Will ruined a lot of things, hurt a lot of people, but that gold he stole was mined over years by hardworking, decent men who were our friends… the sheriff’s too… and I feel like they were the ones to decide who gets it. He was just their messenger.

“So, yep, I’m okay with it. I’d have been okay with leaving it right there on the desk too, but the sheriff didn’t see it that way. I don’t know, but maybe he saw it as improper for a lawman to keep the gold, even if they were his friends. We never stole it, Coy. It was given to us by a man who knew Wes and Lee even better than we did. And we need to honor those two.”

Coy sighed, and it was tough to tell the reason for it.

“What are you thinking?”

“Ah… mostly about my brother shooting another old man in the back. He wasn’t just a killer… he was a coward.”

Boone nodded, understanding the weight his friend was feeling. “You ain’t responsible for what he done. Only Will is, and he reaped what he sowed in the end. He’s not spending that trading post fellow’s money, and he’s got no chance to drink away our friends’ life savings. At least some good won out.”

“Not for Dan, it didn’t. Sounds like he talked to Wes and Lee a lot about you. About his caring for you.”

“I suspect he did.” He waited to see what else Coy would say, but the man turned away and wrapped Mouse’s reins next to Daisy’s.

“I’ll get the mare, and you can get Blue, seeing as how he likes you.” He turned his head back Boone’s way and smiled for the first time since they’d rode out of camp.

“Well, he does. We have an understanding ever since I rode him up the high trail.”

“You really think so?” Coy’s smile grew a little bit bigger. “I guess we’ll see about that.”

 

It took them a frustrating amount of time and a lot of circling before they could lead Blue away from his old pal. Boone figured he was feeling the loss of his owners and wasn’t liking all the changes. He was patient as he coaxed the animal farther and farther from the pen. What made it tougher, though, was Coy’s amusement… even though he truly enjoyed seeing him in better spirits. The laughing man’s presence behind the mule ended up serving no purpose. Blue moved when he wanted to, and didn’t care who was prodding him. The day was blistering hot, and Boone was about ready to give it a rest when the mule suddenly decided to cooperate. He up and followed Boone’s horse with ears forward while Coy led Lee’s mare.

“Looks like he’s made his choice. Probably cottoned on to us going back to camp. Still think he likes you?” Coy asked with a smirk.

“Not as much as he cares for the paint. He’s not used to so much change, but he knows he’s ours now.”

“Yours, and does he?”

“Sure hope so.” Boone smiled and then laughed. “To tell you the truth, I enjoyed that. I like working with animals.”

Coy nodded thoughtfully. “Better than panning, right?”

Boone held back a groan. Looked like the conversation he’d been dreading was going to happen. “I’m done with panning, Coy.”

“I know.”

“It’s not to do with the sheriff’s advice. My decision was already made.”

“I figured, but I thought Will’s death might change the set of your mind.”

“This isn’t about Will, not anymore.”

“Dan?”

“Not him either, but… there are possibilities out there for someone like me, at least I got to hope there are.”

“Possibilities,” Coy muttered. “So your plans, they don’t include me… do they?”

“I don’t see how they can. For one thing, I want to farm, and you don’t.”

“I like farming.”

“No you don’t.”

“Sure I do. We could go back to my ma’s place. I guess it’s all mine now. We could get it going again.”

“Coy… that land is useless. It’s too dry there, and the land is worn out, and more of the dirt blows away every year. I don’t think anyone could make that farm work… not for very long, and I doubt you could find someone who’d pay you any money for it. All those farms around there were deserted long ago… and you couldn’t wait to leave after your ma was gone.”

“Another place then. We have enough gold to buy a couple of farms.”

“And that’s what we should do. Each of us buy the place we want.”

“Separate like?”

Boone nodded, his stomach dropping at the admittance. “We want different things… and you’ll always be the best friend I could have….”

“But you want someone made like you… someone who has it all figured out.”

“I get lonely, Coy. Don’t you get lonely?”

“No!” he answered strong enough it startled Boone, but then he softened his voice. “I don’t get to feeling lonely because I’ve always had you.”

“Don’t you want something more? Something more than going to Miss Patty’s.”

“Miss Patty’s? What’d you bring that place up for? I only went to Miss Patty’s two times, and only because Will drug me there.”

“But you partook, because that’s how you’re made. There’s no Miss Patty’s for someone like me.”

“No, I suppose there isn’t, but you can’t say how I’m made, Boone. I kissed you, didn’t I?”

“And then broke my nose and ran off, not once looking me in the eye for days and days.”

“I told you—”

“Don’t. You can’t be something you’re not… Lord knows I understand that. Somewhere, there’s a pretty girl waiting for you. You got the means to build a life that isn’t grimy and harsh… and you deserve something better.”

“There you go planning my life out for me.”

“Sorry… you’re a growed man, and a good one. Do whatever you want. I got to do what’s right for me, and it ain’t got nothing to do with gold, broken nose, or Will.”

“Or Dan?”

Why was he bringing Dan up so much? Boone sighed to himself. “No, not Dan either. You heard the sheriff. Dan had the fever, and I’m done with this life.”

“So what are you fixing to do?”

“I reckon I’m going to Larkspur, and I’m going to look for a piece of land that makes me feel like I’m home.”

“Larkspur? Where’s Larkspur, and what do you know about a place I ain’t never heard of?”

Boone felt the slap of the disappointment that rode across Coy’s face, but pushed ahead and told him what he’d heard while waiting for supplies. He was relieved to finally say his plans out loud. Coy’s expression became unreadable, but he listened until Boone finished talking.

“Snow?”

“Yep, snow. I don’t know how much or how often, but winter isn’t like around here. The land’s higher up, and there’s plenty of water, what with rivers, lakes, and streams… and… and springs that bubble up out of the land. I at the least have to go see for myself. It’ll be hard work to clear land, and I can’t say I’ve done much of it, but I’m willing to give it a try.”

“Four weeks or more of solid riding… all by yourself, and you don’t want me to come with you? That must be, what? Nine hundred miles?”

“The man talking said it was maybe twelve hundred.”

“Twelve hundred miles? You can’t do that in a month!”

“I said about a month.”

“Still, that’s about forty miles a day through territory you don’t know.”

“I’m not going to push too hard, Coy, but I reckon if the going’s good I can do thirty-five if I ride from sunup to sundown. You know Daisy’s got good stamina.”

“That’s still a lot in a day, and she isn’t as fit as she was when she was working cattle.”

“I know, and if I have to slow up, I will. It’ll take as long as it takes.”

“What if something happens? You’ll be out there alone, and you know traveling can be dangerous.”

“I’ll be fine. Don’t imagine there’s too much to worry about so far north of the railroad, but the town’s big enough to have a bank, and that means a telegraph line most likely, and probably a stagecoach. We can keep in touch, and if you ever need me—”

“That’s a mite farther than a ride to Red Bluff,” Coy said with clear bitterness.

“It is, but that’s what I want. I never want to put up with dust again. Don’t like the feel of it, or the taste of it. What about you? You staying put?”

Coy made a scoffing sound. “Nothing for me here. Got no desire to pan anymore.”

“You sure?”

“Yep. Wouldn’t have said it if’n I wasn’t. I don’t have the fever either, and I knew it the first year we were here. Only reason I mined was because we was both doing it. I… I really believed you and me was going to buy a place together, like we always said.”

“So did I.”

“But now you don’t want to.”

“It’s not I don’t want to, but if we do that, I’m still going to be lonely.”

“I’ll make sure you’re not, Boone, I—”

“Coy, don’t! Let’s not do this again. No sense tying each other down… I know you don’t understand that, but I haven’t been of a good mind for a long time. Sometimes I feel like I’m going to go up like a stick of dynamite, and other times I feel so hopeless I don’t even want to get out of my bedroll, and I have to think some before I can recollect what I did the day before… cause they’re all the same.”

Coy’s eyebrows rose for a few seconds, and his head moved back as if he’d been slapped. “First I’m hearing this. Why didn’t you say something?”

“Weren’t no one’s concern but mine.”

Coy opened his mouth to speak, but no words came out before he closed it again, but Boone saw the hurt his words had caused before his friend turned away, clucking Mouse and Lee’s mare forward. They were soon loping well ahead of him, and he let the full weight of his guilt settle.

He shouldn’t have snapped at him that way… or gone as far in speaking his thoughts. Boone understood why Coy thought he was deserting him, because it kind of felt that way to him too. He continued walking to give his friend some time and space, miserable as hell, but relieved it was done.

Blue, though, up and decided he didn’t like being left behind and tried to bolt. Boone had a bit of a fight on his hands before the mule eventually unpinned his ears and eased up. “We got us some traveling to do, you old cuss, so you better start listening to me.” Blue had to get used to not having his friend around, and so did he.

As he got back to camp, he took a good look around. The horses were hobbled, but Coy was nowhere to be seen. He took care of his own stock and checked the tent before walking down to the river. Coy had said he was done panning, but Boone checked the shorelines anyway. Knowing the man had gone off to deal with the hurt he’d dealt him, Boone busied himself around camp, building a fire and putting together a stew of soaked pinto beans, crumbled dried beef, salt pork, fresh cattail roots, the last of their carrots, and a few wild leeks. He hung his trusty Dutch oven on the spit, well above the flames, before taking a walk, wondering if he should search out his friend.

He ended up back at the river, and peered across. His gut was telling him Coy would be sitting up there on the ridge, where the breeze was stronger, and the sounds of the river less. Hesitating, he looked back around camp, uncertain of whether to give the man his space.

A few minutes later, he removed his boots and socks and waded across. Putting them back on, he worked his way through the brush while keeping an eye out for snakes in the loose rocky soil. When he broke through, he looked up to see Coy sitting against the tree that Will’s hidey hole had been under. His eyes were closed, but Boone was certain he’d heard his approach.

Once he got close enough, he spoke. “I got some supper on… the bean stew you like.”

The man’s eyes remained closed. “And he took the bread, gave thanks and broke it, and gave it to them saying, ‘This is my body given for you; do this in remembrance for me.’”

“What?”

Coy sighed, but kept his eyes closed. “Luke twenty-two, verse nineteen. My ma used to say it when we sat down to eat before one of us went off somewhere for a time… it’s about The Last Supper.”

“Oh, right. I could never keep all those sermons straight, but I think I remember that one.”

“They weren’t sermons, Boone, they were prayers. Ma said prayers the whole day long.”

“Sorry… that’s what I meant. You up here thinking about her?”

“Thinking about my family… about being the last Diamond still drawing breath.”

“I’m sorry, Coy.”

“Stop saying that!” His eyes finally opened, and the pain in them made Boone stop all movement. “Sorry don’t mean nothing. Everyone I’ve ever cared about is gone. My pa, Ethan, Duke and Ben, Ma, Will….”

“And now me?”

“Yes,” he whispered fiercely. “And you… you’re going your own way, and I’ve got to… I got some figuring to do.”

“I’m sor”—Boone caught himself—“anything I can do to help? We can talk about it, if’n—”

“No! No, I’ll do my figuring at the old farm.”

“You’re going back there? You going to try to farm it again after what we talked about earlier?”

“I need someplace to go, don’t I? I grew up there… you might think it’s a worthless piece of land, but my pa had a successful farm before he died.”

“I didn’t say it was worthless.”

“You said the land was useless.”

“Because the land has eroded from all the dust storms, and the floods, and there’s not a lot of water for most of the year, but that’s stuff you already know and we’ve already talked about.”

“Same thing as worthless, isn’t it?” he asked stubbornly.

“You’re right, and I shouldn’t have said it. I just don’t want—”

“Yep, I know… you’re looking after me cause it’s what you do. Stop worrying for me, Boone. Maybe I’ll just visit the family graves… tell them what happened to Will and where he’s buried, and then move on. Place is likely falling down now anyways.”

He looked so defeated, Boone wished he could take him in his arms and hold him. “If… maybe… if’n you want to come with me to Larkspur, we could….”

Cot sat up straighter. “You saying you’d still want us to get some land together?”

“Well, I’m thinking we could get land closer to one another… like we talked about, if you really want to farm? It’d be a mite easier to stay in touch.”

“Oh… I see… closer, but you don’t want to farm with me. I ain’t no dog you can throw a bone to. Don’t need your pity.”

“It’s not pity.”

“Isn’t it? I can look after myself, and you’ve already said I’ve been standing in your way, so I got no intention of doing so any longer.”

“I know you can look after yourself. And you ain’t been standing in my way. I just meant—”

“I know what you meant... you were pretty clear on not tying each other down." Coy took in a beep breath before blowing it out. When he spoke again, much of the raw emotion was gone from his voice. "You've been looking out for me a long time, but you can stop now. Just… could you maybe leave me be? I want to sit here by myself a spell.”

Boone could have kicked his own rear for getting his friend’s hopes up just now… and for saying what he did about the Diamond farm. He’d sure done enough putting his foot in his mouth for one day. “Sure… I understand. Supper will be ready soon.” He waited for a response, but there was none. Coy’s eyes were closed again. Feeling as lost as Coy appeared to be, he turned and walked away, growing regret making him question everything he was doing.

  

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1 minute ago, drsawzall said:

Perhaps some time apart, weather on the trail together or Coy finally making his way to Larkspur after Boone may calm the roiled waters, so to speak. I can't help but wonder ifin there's trouble fixin to materialize somewhere along the trail and they find each other as they help each other to overcome adversity.

It's a long, slow, depressive, torturous dance we've been watchin over the past few chapters, here's hoping some good breaks out shortly 

Hey, drsawzall! Time apart is something they haven't had since they met. Maybe that will help them get on with life after the pressure cooker of a life with Will, and calm the 'roiled waters' as you say. At the very least, they'll have time to think... it's a long trail ahead for Boone, and trouble could arise for sure. 

I know it's been rather tortuous so far... well... I didn't exactly know, but I suspected it was pretty tough on readers. That's the major drawback of posting weekly... we can't forge ahead and get through the tough parts quick. :unsure: I hope you continue to stick with me, because I can promise you there is light ahead... but yeah, it's a slow dance. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts... this was a great comment, and I appreciate knowing how you're feeling about the story... cheers... Gary.... :hug: 

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2 minutes ago, Wesley8890 said:

Boone is so damn frustrating! He keeps thinking things are just the way he sees them. Nothing else is possible. Damn you can see coy has some sort of feeling for him! 

Hey, Wes! Are you getting riled? :P  All kidding aside, I know what you mean, but Boone has been at Coy's side for five years, and it has been hard on him... particularly on his heart. If Coy has feeling s for him, he hasn't shown it... what Boone sees now is that Coy is desperate to keep their friendship. I tend to agree with him. He thinks he's maybe been confusing his friend... and Coy has never really said otherwise. 

Imagine what it was like for Boone to watch Coy go off to Miss Patty's... and then to hear about it later. That would be tough, and probably the final kill shot to his hope for something more. :(  I think Boone needs to feel like he is getting on with his life, but who knows where he will end up. :huh: 

Thanks, buddy... at least you're not reading about Kevin again. :P  Cheers... Gary.... :hug: 

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33 minutes ago, KayDeeMac said:

Yes it had to come to this but it was still gut-wrenching and heartbreaking!  I don't think Boone realized how damaging his words were to Coy at the time but, Coy's reactions spoke volumes or hurt!  I'm not ashamed to admit that I cried!  I am going to hold onto a ray of hope that these two will get past this and decide how they can still be together and stay friends.  Side-by-side farms in Larkspur might work!  Wonderful story even with the Kleenex moments! Thank you Gary!:thankyou:

Sorry... not sorry. I love to hear when reader's are moved to strong emotions by something I've written. :hug: What Boone said just poured out, and the last thing he wants to do is hurt Coy. So many times we blurt things out we don't mean to put into the light, and only realize after the effect it has... but Boone is hurting too, maybe even more than his friend. I understand there has been some tough going so far... but there is nothing wrong with hoping. :)  Side by side farms could work, but only if that is something they really want. We shall see. 

Thanks for sharing how this chapter made you feel. It means a lot, David. I, for one, enjoy a good cry at times... and it's nice to know I'm not the only one who cried over this chapter. :)  Cheers... Gary.... 

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20 minutes ago, Wesley8890 said:

see now i had forgotten all about that cavernous manhole. Now you got to bring back memories of his man stealing ass. Shame on you!!!

Ooops. My bad. I thought you might have missed the poor misunderstood fellow. :D  

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I can't imagine being as completely alone as Coy is now.  Referencing the bible quote at the beginning of the chapter,  at least Boone has some hope for his future.  That's why he's moving on.  Coy has just been reacting to loss after loss.  But, maybe he needs this separation to be an independent person for the first time in his life.  Tough love.

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2 hours ago, Wesley8890 said:

You going to have to write a story about how hes misunderstood because i aint seeing it.

What a great idea, Wes. It could be called "Spelunking Kevin.... a Poor Soul's Journey to the Priesthood." :)  

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2 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

Coy and Boone did a lot of heart-sorting and soul searching together in this chapter. Boone is leading in his way, and eventually Coy admits he might want to follow, if given a detour to the old useless land that was his family’s. He feels the potential loss of Boone keenly. Will he feel the same way after days of travel together?  Looking forward to their travels.

Yes they did. It was a conversation that's been coming for a while, and like all emotion-laden talks, some of it might have been more honest than intended. I don't know that Boone is trying to lead so much as doing what he feels he must, and that has caused Coy some pain. I'm not sure his pride will allow Coy to follow... but he will certainly feel the loss. Boone will too... this is likely the hardest thing he's ever done. For now, going their separate ways seems a given... maybe it's exactly waht both men need after relying on each other for so long, in an inequitable relationship. :unsure:  Thanks, Parker... glad you're looking forward to more of the journey... cheers... Gary.... :hug: 

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2 hours ago, Daddydavek said:

Coy is dealing with a lot. Being the last of his family weighs heavily and hearing Boone wants to move on means his whole world is gone.  Boone unburdened himself, but it was also without any thought about the impact on Coy.  Now he feels guilty too.

Yes, exactly, Dave. Coy's world has collapsed, and Boone was the only piece left. You know when we work things out in our mind, but the reality turns out to be nothing like that? I think that's the case for Boone, and now his regrets are huge. It['s one thing to know Coy will be hurt... it's quite another to witness it. Still, I admire Boone. He continued to stay and protect Coy long after the punch broke his heart, and he deserves to put himself first now. He did backtrack, but Coy finally sees the sacrifice Boone made. I doubt he will change his mind. 

Thanks for the comment and the support, buddy... cheers... Gary.... :hug: 

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1 hour ago, CincyKris said:

I can't imagine being as completely alone as Coy is now.  Referencing the bible quote at the beginning of the chapter,  at least Boone has some hope for his future.  That's why he's moving on.  Coy has just been reacting to loss after loss.  But, maybe he needs this separation to be an independent person for the first time in his life.  Tough love.

Me neither, although this pandemic isolation makes me feel more alone than I've ever felt. :(  Re the Proverb, Boone knows he has to do something... his explanation to Coy for what he was feeling leaves no doubt how unhappy he is. I think he's been craving something solid his whole life... he needs that fulfillment.  

I like what you say about Coy just reacting to his losses... I think you're right... and Boone has been his constant for the last five years. So yeah, tough love might be good for him. I don't think Coy is weak... more that he looked at his brother with rose colored glasses, or maybe thinking he owed him allegiance because they were the last. He needs to know he's better off without Will... and the gunny sack was a huge step for him. Boone knows what he wants... and why he has to leave... now Coy has to figure out what he wants from life, and separation might help him with that. Let's hope. 

Thanks for another thoughtful comment, Kris... and I appreciate hearing the bible quote meant something to you. :D    

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1 hour ago, dughlas said:

I can't help thinking of the old adage ... "cutting off your nose to spite your face" ... I think Boone is making a mistake. It's no wonder Coy thinks he should go back to that "useless" bit of ground, it's all he's got left of his family now that Boone's cut the legs out from under him and for Coy family mattered. Boone says he wants the love of another man but he already has that in Coy. What he truly wants is a sexual relationship with another man. There is a distinct difference. Each can exist without the other and often do. I wonder if the reason Coy broke Boone's nose is he didn't want to feel what he did after their kiss. He wouldn't be the first young man to live the life expected of him rather than the life his heart desired. I understand Boone is ready to take steps to live the life he wants on a piece of ground of his choosing. He deserves that and Coy seems willing to follow. I think what Coy disliked about farming was the hardscrabble existence that farming became after his pa and brothers died. It was a lot of effort for little reward. Their experience panning seems much the same and neither young man found it rewarding. It seems Will had them bound to a life neither truly wanted. Now free of him they can choose for themselves and it seems that means Larkspur and it's verdant environs. Perhaps both will be surprised at what it is they want.

It's funny. I almost wrote that adage in another comment reply. :)  What a great comment, bro, but I should expect nothing less. Friendship like they have should never be undervalued. Unfortunately, it's not enough for Boone anymore, and I can't fault him for wanting more for himself, but he was wrong to think it means he had to say good bye to Coy. I think he might realize that now, judging by his backtracking, but the truth is out, and Coy's pride is involved now, and I expect their fates are somewhat decided. 

It's hard to say what Coy feels for Boone. We may see things differently, but it's what Boone thinks that matters here. In his eyes, Coy made it clear as he could with that punch. Boone is concluding he has maybe confused Coy some, but the fact is they're made different. And he may well be right about that. We don't know. 

What you say about Coy makes perfect sense to us, though. I wonder if Coy even knows what he really wants? My guess is no... and that's where separation might be good for Coy. He needs to better understand himself, and he needs to grieve his family in its entirety. He might also need to understand his friend better....

The one thing both men do seem to be sure of... they don't have the fever. :) 

Thanks, my friend... love this comment, but I can neither confirm nor deny anything. :no:  :yes:  :hug: 

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