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2015 - Winter - Blackout Entry

Prying Ears - 1. Chapter 1

"... come on, dude, you have to go..."

Colt paused as he passed by Ryan's door. He smiled at the voice of his son's new friend, Trent, from down the street. It had taken Ryan a couple of months before he'd even talk to any of the other teens who played basketball at the neighborhood court. Ryan had come a long way since he'd moved in with Colt and Shane, but he still had a ways to go.

Colt knew Trent was a decent kid, having met his parents at several of their block parties. Trent had caught Ryan watching their pick-up basketball games several times, and even though Ryan had tried to avoid the boy, Trent had been determined to draw him out.

Hearing Ryan laughing with Trent made Colt's heart flip with joy. Ryan had been through so much in his young life. Abused by his parents, thrown out for being gay, left with no one to count on, to trust. He'd been arrested for prostituting himself for food and money when Colt had first seen him, and the teen had reminded him of a boy from his own past.

Shane and Colt had taken Ryan in. It'd been a rough start with Ryan having spent so much time with no one; he had a hard time accepting that Shane and Colt were really there to accept him, to be there for him. And now Trent was slowly worming his way into Ryan's carefully constructed emotional fortress.

"I don't know..." Ryan's voice edged. "I don't know anybody."

"Hey, you know me. And the other guys will be there. Tons of people will be coming. You'll blend right in. It'll be a blast."

"I've never been to one. I'm not sure what..."

Their voices dropped a bit, and Colt found himself edging closer to the door to listen. When he leaned into the door, he suddenly felt guilty for eavesdropping, but he was anxious to hear how Trent would convince Ryan to go to the party he was obviously talking about. Trent had tried before to talk Ryan into going to a party with him and some of the other high school students, but Ryan had never felt comfortable enough since he didn't attend the local school.

"... it'll be fine..." Colt strained to hear Trent when his voice dropped, catching parts of the conversation. "... but you can't wear that..."

"Why not?"

"It's a blackout... you have to..."

What the fuck? Colt jolted back. A blackout party? In his jurisdiction? Oh hell no!

His anger flared at the teen trying to talk his son into attending a binge-drinking rave. Where the hell were they even holding it?

He slammed his hand against the door, swinging it wide open. Trent jumped from where he was sitting on Ryan's bed, and Ryan froze mid-way in pulling off his t-shirt. He was still so damn thin.

"What the hell do you think you are doing?" he snapped.

Both boys stared at him wide-eyed before glancing at each other.

Ryan's bright eyes held a mixture of confusion and fear. "Changing?"

"For what? You think I'm going to let you go off to some blackout?" Colt railed before turning and leveling his stare on Trent, pointing. "And you. You are going to tell me right now where it is happening."

Trent glanced in bewilderment at Ryan again, who looked just as disturbed by Colt's sudden intrusion in their conversation.

"At the football field?" Trent stated, but it came out more like a question.

That had Colt freezing in shock. What? The football field? How could they hold it there? Even if the lights were off, they'd still notice a bunch of kids partying and drinking in the dark.

"The football field?" Colt repeated in confusion.

Ryan finally managed to move, pulling his forest green shirt over his head before swiping up a black one from his bed. "Shane already said I should go, said I need to get out and socialize more. I wasn't going to, but Trent keeps bugging me about it."

"What?" Colt was sure his neck popped as he snapped it around in shock to Ryan. "Shane said you could go? Does he even know what goes on at one of those things?"

Now both boys were staring at him oddly.

"Uh, yeah? Doesn't everybody?" Trent's voice held a hint of amusement.

The teens were eyeing him like he'd lost his mind. Colt was beginning to think he had if his partner, his lover, had agreed to let Ryan go to a party like that.

"Hey!" Shane's voice came from behind him. "So you decided to go?"

Colt spun, pinning an evil eye on his partner. Shane was smiling broadly at Ryan, as he slipped the clean T-shirt over his head.

"I was, but Colt said I couldn't," Ryan stated.

Shane turned a frown on him. "Why would you say that?"

"Because it's dangerous!" Colt yelled, frustrated no one else seemed to see the issue in letting two underage boys head out to a blackout rave.

Shane quirked a brow at him. "Only for the players. What the hell's wrong with you, Colt?"

The players? What--?

"Wait. Just hold on a sec." He held up his hand as he took a deep breath. He turned back to Trent, sitting wide-eyed on the bed. "Where, exactly, are you planning on taking Ryan?"

"To the football game. At the school?" Trent stated, again his voice hedging on questioning as his confusion at Colt's objection bled through.

"Football game?" Colt repeated numbly, his eyes casting around at each of the others in the room as they gave him a slight, puzzled nod.

"Yeah. Where did you think we were going?" Ryan finally asked, noting that perhaps his new father figure had maybe been mistaken about what he thought was happening.

"I—I thought..." Colt stammered. "Wait, wait, wait. He said you were going to a blackout."

"Yeah, it's a blackout at the game tonight," Trent agreed. "As opposed to a bleed out."

Colt frowned uncomprehendingly.

Shane nudged his shoulder. "Come on, you're not that old. You know, you wear the colors your team is wearing on the field. To show your team pride."

Oh, fuck... Colt groaned in realization. The local high school's team colors were black and red—a blackout, a bleed out. Showing school spirit. He finally noted that Trent was dressed in black jeans and a black t-shirt. "A blackout."

All three still stared at him, waiting for him to explain his rampage. He flushed, embarrassed at having assumed the worst of the teens' plans.

"I'm... I'm... just forget I said anything. Sorry, I interrupted. Have fun, boys," he stammered, backing out the door with a confused Shane following him.

He could feel Ryan and Trent's bewildered eyes trailing him out the door.

"Dude," Trent's voice followed him, "your dad is really uptight."

He leaned against the wall, mortified at having embarrassed Ryan in front of his friend like that. The poor boy already had a hard time feeling like he fit in.

"He's just protective, is all," Ryan defended, shocking Colt. "Dad's a good guy."

Colt's heart stuttered. Dad. Ryan had just called him Dad. God, he was going to lose it any second. Bouncing from worry, to anger and panic, humiliated, and now honored and ecstatic—these paternal emotions were going to kill him.

"Hey," Shane's voice drew his gaze up. He felt the hand of the man he loved slide around the back of his neck. "You okay? You seemed..." Shane shrugged. "... a little upset in there. What's up?"

"Nothing. I just... I thought..." he stumbled over what he wanted to say. "God, Shane, I thought they were going to a blackout rave."

"A rave?"

"Yeah, you know, a drinking party. We've heard about them a lot at the station, especially over in the bigger cities. I... I just heard them say 'blackout' and assumed..."

Shane smirked. "You assumed the worst."

Colt sighed. "Yeah."

"Hey, it's natural. You're worried about him. So am I. We kinda came into this parenting thing a little late, so we're going to be a bit protective. It's okay."

Colt tipped his head up with a small smile. "Did you hear him? He called me Dad."

Shane laughed. "Yeah, I did. Come on. Let the boys head out to their game." He wriggled his eyebrows suggestively. "And while they're gone, maybe we can have a little blackout party of our own... in the bedroom."

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This is the kind of story that makes me very happy to be here, happy to be reading. It makes me want to be as good a person as Colt and Shane have been for all the other Ryans still out there. Thank you for this lovely chapter.

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So nice to see them again! And to get an insight in the troubles of parenting older kids. Makes me wonder how often I will jump to the wrong conclusion when my kids grow up.

 

The guys gave me the warm fuzzies. Much needed on this dark and stormy night...

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For me, it all boiled down to "Dad's a good guy" and it got me right through the heart. As a parent, it's those little moments that we never forget. You made me tear up. It was nice to revisit and see how this new family was doing, and you didn't disappoint. Entertaining, touching, and well done, CM... cheers... Gary....

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I didn't realize it right away, but then it hit me that we've met these guys before. It's nice to see how well things are going now. I too liked the "Dad" part - warm fuzzies all around. :D

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It was great getting to read about these guys again. Parental misunderstandings can be pretty funny. I guess that's what he gets for eavesdropping...lol

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A great lesson on what happens when you eavesdrop. Not only do you most likely not get the entire story, but it's entirely possibly you'll make rash decisions that are entirely wrong. I have to say, Colt was kinda funny when he got all flustered, but I really liked the way Ryan defended him to Trent. Nicely done.

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I have to say, as a helicopter parent, I would've been all over that, especially when they lower their voices. Kids don't know enough to keep themselves safe, it seems, but sometimes we can go overboard keeping an eye on them. I liked the humorous way you did this. The story was really well written, too, other than a head hop. :)

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It was nice reading about these guys. You know that eavesdropping and overreacting to what you're sure you know, but is so wrong - I know this well. I swore I wouldn't be that way. Then I swore I wouldn't do it again.. Parenting is teens is rough. Colt and Shane seem to be doing well though. "Dad's a good guy sealed the deal." then Colt's reaction. Heart melted. Ryan is a gem.
Great job CM, As always.

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I didn't read the story this belongs to, but I got a good feeling about this family. It's how it should be, controlled trust.

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On 12/11/2015 03:44 AM, Parker Owens said:

This is the kind of story that makes me very happy to be here, happy to be reading. It makes me want to be as good a person as Colt and Shane have been for all the other Ryans still out there. Thank you for this lovely chapter.

Thank you! Thought maybe I'd do something other than angst! Glad you enjoyed it.

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On 12/11/2015 07:32 AM, Puppilull said:

So nice to see them again! And to get an insight in the troubles of parenting older kids. Makes me wonder how often I will jump to the wrong conclusion when my kids grow up.

 

The guys gave me the warm fuzzies. Much needed on this dark and stormy night...

I know as a parent I don't always understand the terms my kids use either. So glad you liked it!

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On 12/11/2015 07:55 AM, Headstall said:

For me, it all boiled down to "Dad's a good guy" and it got me right through the heart. As a parent, it's those little moments that we never forget. You made me tear up. It was nice to revisit and see how this new family was doing, and you didn't disappoint. Entertaining, touching, and well done, CM... cheers... Gary....

I think that moment is rather defining for Colt, as he worries about being a good dad. And especially after he just made a fool out of himself in front of Ryan's friend, he needs that reassurance that Ryan still loves him... Thanks for Reading. Glad you liked it.

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On 12/11/2015 10:18 AM, Reader1810 said:

I didn't realize it right away, but then it hit me that we've met these guys before. It's nice to see how well things are going now. I too liked the "Dad" part - warm fuzzies all around. :D

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed seeing them again!

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On 12/11/2015 01:00 PM, Valkyrie said:

It was great getting to read about these guys again. Parental misunderstandings can be pretty funny. I guess that's what he gets for eavesdropping...lol

After going to my kid's football game where they had called a 'blackout' that's when the idea for this story hit me--especially after I'd read an article recently about Blackout Parties. Misunderstandings galore! Glad you enjoyed it!

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On 12/11/2015 06:25 PM, Renee Stevens said:

A great lesson on what happens when you eavesdrop. Not only do you most likely not get the entire story, but it's entirely possibly you'll make rash decisions that are entirely wrong. I have to say, Colt was kinda funny when he got all flustered, but I really liked the way Ryan defended him to Trent. Nicely done.

Yep, got to be careful jumping to conclusions :) Glad you liked it!

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On 12/12/2015 08:22 AM, Cia said:

I have to say, as a helicopter parent, I would've been all over that, especially when they lower their voices. Kids don't know enough to keep themselves safe, it seems, but sometimes we can go overboard keeping an eye on them. I liked the humorous way you did this. The story was really well written, too, other than a head hop. :)

Lowering of voices is definitely usually a signal of eminent trouble... and Colt as a cop would assume the worst. So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!

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On 12/13/2015 01:38 AM, Carlos Hazday said:

What a fantastic take on the theme! Short, sweet, and oh so well written.

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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On 12/13/2015 08:35 AM, Defiance19 said:

It was nice reading about these guys. You know that eavesdropping and overreacting to what you're sure you know, but is so wrong - I know this well. I swore I wouldn't be that way. Then I swore I wouldn't do it again.. Parenting is teens is rough. Colt and Shane seem to be doing well though. "Dad's a good guy sealed the deal." then Colt's reaction. Heart melted. Ryan is a gem.

Great job CM, As always.

It is hard in this day and age to totally trust and let go of your children, no matter how responsible they may be. We want to protect and keep them safe. I'm glad you liked it!

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On 12/16/2015 12:21 AM, aditus said:

I didn't read the story this belongs to, but I got a good feeling about this family. It's how it should be, controlled trust.

I tried to put enough background in there so you could still get a sense of their newly-formed family without rehashing it all. I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reading!

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Being a football nerd and a high school party nerd, I had no clue what either of them were talking about!! :D Luckily Trent explained 'his' blackout, and Colt explained 'his' blackout. lol

 

Yes, eavesdropping is never a good idea, especially since things tend to be taken way out of context. Loved Ryan defending Colt though.

 

I really like how you incorporated the theme in this story, Mom, and it was great seeing these guys again! :)

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Another great story, it was great to read more about the guys.

 

Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

 

:hug:

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On 12/16/2015 12:02 PM, Lisa said:

Being a football nerd and a high school party nerd, I had no clue what either of them were talking about!! :D Luckily Trent explained 'his' blackout, and Colt explained 'his' blackout. lol

 

Yes, eavesdropping is never a good idea, especially since things tend to be taken way out of context. Loved Ryan defending Colt though.

 

I really like how you incorporated the theme in this story, Mom, and it was great seeing these guys again! :)

I'm not even sure where I heard about the 'party' blackout, except maybe on the news somewhere. My daughter talking about the 'blackout' at the football game is the inspiration for the story. She loved that she gave me the idea. Thanks for reading!

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