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The Return to Benden 3. Ninth Pass Pern

   (3 reviews)
Fandoms: Dragonriders of Pern
Genres: Fantasy Action/Adventure,
Sub-genres: Adventure, General Fantasy, Dragon Fantasy

The Southern Weyr project is coming to an end. H'rek and Rioth prepare for the return to Benden Weyr to fight Thread.

©1967-2022 Ann McCaffrey, Todd McCaffrey, Gigi McCaffrey; All Rights Reserved; Copyright © 2020 Mawgrim; All Rights Reserved.
  • Classic Author
  • 06/26/2020 (Updated: 06/26/2020)
  • 1 Chapters
  • 4,591 Words
  • 11,749 Views
  • 13 Comments
  • Teen
  • Complete

Story Recommendations (12 members)

  • Action-Packed 7
  • Great Pacing 7
  • Great Characters 12
  • Character Growth 0
  • Dialog / Banter 0
  • Plot Twists 0
  • Beautiful Writing 0
  • Immersive World 12
  • Satisfying Ending 0
  • Fresh / Original 6
  • Counldn't Put It Down 8
  • Suspenseful 2
  • Gave Me Chills 3
  • Funny 2
  • Feel-Good 5
  • Heartwarming 0
  • Emotional Impact 2
  • Thought-Provoking 0
  • Romantic Chemistry 0
  • Smoldering Chemistry 1
  • Like 8
  • Love 8
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  • 1. Chapter 1
    • 4,591 Words
    • 3,489 Views
    • 13 Comments

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Cadude

Cadude 148

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

I am now beginning to understand the line of the story now.  I'm a Pern fan so I get all the references and I do remember Ruth going back in time and saying "I always know When I am" or something like that.

GOOD or continuing character development.

 

Now, Mawgrim, please get some adminstrative assistance to put your story in order and as unfinished.  Your posting a new chapter every few days, so that's kudos plus and you have a great story. 

    It is however more difficult to follow the storyline.  I finally figured out to follow the post date.

 

Thanks again for a good story.

 

Response from the author:

Thanks for your comments. I'm still learning how to use this site to post stories, but I think I've now managed to compile them together into a series so that they can be read in the correct order.

I will be posting a longer story set in the same timeline shortly.

  • Like 2
centexhairysub

centexhairysub 46,957

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

Really like this chapter in the series; will be glad when some of the longer stories start.  The riders and others have learned not only that they jumped in time to allow the dragons to age without fighting thread to soon; but that Lessa has made a huge jump in time and brought the riders from the four abandoned weyrs forward to help as well.  A great addition to this budding saga.

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raven1

raven1 70,311

  

This is the last of three short stories that lead into Gone Away, Gone Ahead.  It is a great transition between the Southern Experiment, the integration of the new dragon riders from there, and the introduction of the 5 Missing Weyrs from the past.  H'rek is searching for a true love and not that there are so many new riders and dragons maybe he will get his wish.  Mawgrim continues to entertain with his great writing in the Pern Universe.  

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