More Than I Remember by Comicality

[Graeme]

More Than I Remember by Comicality

Kissing Rodney was always the highlight of my day.

 

 

:nuke: :nuke: Spoilers Below!!! :nuke: :nuke:

[Conner]

That was a great short story. WoW!

 

Nick's conversation with Keith at the bar - really superb dialogue. Talk about turning the tables. I was stunned, really stunned.

 

Nick gave Keith a gift. The kind of gift only someone who cares about you can give. The gift was Nick's truth about their relationship - the emotion was so raw, coming from such a painful place. He made himself totally vulnerble to Keith in doing that. That took so much courage.

 

To Keith's credit, he took it in; he got it...and will be the better for it.

 

Thanks, Com.

 

Conner

[Dolores Esteban]

Excellent and perfect in every way! Great.

 

[jfalkon]

I loved this story! The way you subtuly shifted from the character's perception of himself to the way others saw him was briliant. We can all learn from this story. Often we are our own problem.

[Comsie]

Wow! Thank you so much for such a beautiful review! It warms my heart to know that you enjoyed it!

 

I can't wait to read the others myself! The anthologies are always awesome!

[writeincode]

Wow this was seriously amazing. Embarrassingly it hit kinda close to home. Thanks for posting

[Comicality]

((Hugz)) Thanks!

 

Hits close to home for me too. Both sides. Live and learn, I suppose.

[C James]

I loved this story! The way you subtuly shifted from the character's perception of himself to the way others saw him was briliant.

 

That was what caught my eye, too.

 

I think the "being one's own worst enemy" theme was very well done too, and oh, how true that can be.

 

Thanks Comsie!