hashbrown Posted July 5, 2008 Share Posted July 5, 2008 Lost Love by hashbrown You said the words I love you, But it was just a dream. I said the words I love you, Making you my life's theme. You held me close that one cold night, But it was just a dream. My heart and smile shown so bright, Dangerous, nothing seemed. I love you so much, But this you'll never know. A life together will never work, My heart will break when you say hello. I can't imagine a life without you, I don't even know if its possible. But I'll have to find out, Though living without you seems like a mission impossible. One more time I ask why it wont work, It's the world influencing you, acting like a jerk. So the last thing I say before I lose all hope, I love you more than anything, so with your lost love I'll have to cope. Link to comment
Tiger Posted July 6, 2008 Share Posted July 6, 2008 That poem makes me sad. You're a good poet. Hopefully, you'll find someone better and be able to write a happy one soon. Link to comment
Qrmebrat Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 This is so good, it's deep without drowning you. Link to comment
AFriendlyFace Posted April 11, 2009 Share Posted April 11, 2009 That was a very moving piece. I think it expresses the feeling of love, desperation, and ultimate tragic acceptance quite well. It is sad that it takes two people to create a relationship, but only one to decide it's over. Link to comment
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