[DomLuka] TOU-Chapter 14

[Rocketcnj]

Hi All,

 

I don't want to give away any details...but all I can say is Chapter 14 is one ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS CHAPTER!!

 

It had everything in it and done so amazingly well.....from beginning to end, which is also a beginning..

 

Dom, you covered every emotion, every feeling, and well, I am still smiling and then some....I want to discuss it so much..but since I am sure most have not read it, well, that wouldn't be fair..but it ranks up there with the best line of TLW "you mean this is a date" Heck, I feel it suprasses that..

 

Dom, I am glad you waited as long as you did and I can see why you struggled to get it right..you more then got it right........from just past the marshmellows from the last scene to the Cliffhangers of all Cliffhangers.....and it confirmed a lot about the loved ones around Quinn....I will leave it at that..but those of you reading HP....put it down and read Chapter 14...so we can tawk about this chapter..since it has soooooo much going on............and I mean soooooooooooooo much......

 

WOW.....forgive me for stealing the phrase from the AB FAB girls/series..but oh my.....what a chapter....done perfectly as any chapter I have ever read of any one of Dom's stories and of coming of age/coming out and of any chapter of any of the great classics of stories I have read of some of the great literary classics..

 

Dom, you are a genius and I felt every moment and you put us right there with Quinn and everyone else and I am betting that we all can feel what happened (especially in the beginning scene...and well, in just about all of them.....)

 

You outdid yourself and Cliff B Anger will be amazed and furious that the chapter ended.....

 

BRAVO Dom and then some...I am in awe and well words don't begin to say what a perfect chapter this is!!

 

Hurry up everyone so we can all choose sections...tawk amongst ourselves and get all phlemkemt........coffee tawk the to max and then some.....

 

Rainbow Hugs and Hershey Kisses and Rainbow Jelly Beans and Rainbow Heaven doesn't begin to describe how great this chapter is!!!

 

I can't wait for everyone to read and share:)

 

Michael

[he_cries_elusive]

I hate cliffhangers. :|

[viv]

Well said Michael... I think that of all the reasons there are that I love Dom's stuff, the way that you feel like you are right there or are feeling what Quinn is feeling as his hand... oops! Anyway, you are right. I can see why this chapter would have taken a little longer to get comfortable with before posting it, since it is SUPER, I guess he waited just long enough, not that I like to be kept waiting, but I guess perfection or being in the presence of a "genius" is worth waiting for.

 

Viv

[Masked Monkey]

I hate cliffhangers. :|

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It wasn't so much a cliffhanger as it was a tease about the upcoming next and better chapter.

 

:king: Snow Dog

[he_cries_elusive]

It wasn't so much a cliffhanger as it was a tease about the upcoming next and better chapter.

 

:king: Snow Dog

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I'm pretty sure this fills the definition of a "cliffhanger."

 

How long do you think it's going to take for the next chapter?

 

Sigh.

[Masked Monkey]

It wasn't so much a cliffhanger as it was a tease about the upcoming next and better chapter.

 

:king: Snow Dog

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I'm pretty sure this fills the definition of a "cliffhanger."

 

How long do you think it's going to take for the next chapter?

 

Sigh.

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No, a cliffhanger leaves you hanging by your fingernail, like when Nicky punched Owen, this was more like a commercial break in a soap opera (not the writing quality, but the level of dramatic effect).

 

As to when, Dom said he is only working on TOU and that he is into 15, only time will tell, only time will tell.

 

And yes, I am tapping my fingers in place of Mikie ... to bad he had such an sad solution to his 'boring' summer.

 

:king: Snow Dog the Domaholic Danderthal

[AFriendlyFace]

Where is Chapter 14?

[joana_imago]

Where is Chapter 14?

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right here:

 

http://domluka.gayauthors.org/ordinary/ord-14.php

 

saludos,

 

joana

[he_cries_elusive]

No, a cliffhanger leaves you hanging by your fingernail, like when Nicky punched Owen, this was more like a commercial break in a soap opera (not the writing quality, but the level of dramatic effect).

 

As to when, Dom said he is only working on TOU and that he is into 15, only time will tell, only time will tell.

 

And yes, I am tapping my fingers in place of Mikie ... to bad he had such an sad solution to his 'boring' summer.

 

:king: Snow Dog the Domaholic Danderthal

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Oh no. It's a cliff hanger. If Dom would have provided Bree's reaction in this chapter, then no, it would not have been a cliffhanger.

 

BUT HE DIDN'T.

 

SO IT IS.

 

And there's nothing you can say to convince me otherwise. So there.

 

I can wait, I guess. I just received my Harry Potter book today, so I'm set for awhile....I guess.... :|

 

I just hope he doesn't take two more months to finish it.

[Masked Monkey]

No, a cliffhanger leaves you hanging by your fingernail, like when Nicky punched Owen, this was more like a commercial break in a soap opera (not the writing quality, but the level of dramatic effect).

 

As to when, Dom said he is only working on TOU and that he is into 15, only time will tell, only time will tell.

 

And yes, I am tapping my fingers in place of Mikie ... to bad he had such an sad solution to his 'boring' summer.

 

:king: Snow Dog the Domaholic Danderthal

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Oh no. It's a cliff hanger. If Dom would have provided Bree's reaction in this chapter, then no, it would not have been a cliffhanger.

 

BUT HE DIDN'T.

 

SO IT IS.

 

And there's nothing you can say to convince me otherwise. So there.

 

I can wait, I guess. I just received my Harry Potter book today, so I'm set for awhile....I guess.... :|

 

I just hope he doesn't take two more months to finish it.

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Oh, I wasn't meaning to say it wasn't a cliff hanger literaly, only that for Dom, it was a relatively minor cliff hanger.

 

What I hope for is that Quinn breaks eye contact with Bree, swaggers up to Jude, lays on a railroad track kiss, then tells Bree, "oh, and I'm gay too"

 

:king: Snow Dog