Site Administrator Graeme Posted December 12, 2010 Site Administrator Share Posted December 12, 2010 Prisoner of the Past by Dolores Esteban He had left his old life behind. At least, that was what he thought. He didn’t realize that his memories were just locked up in some dark chamber of his brain. :nuke: :nuke: Spoilers Below!!! :nuke: :nuke: Link to comment
Rilbur Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 Poor guy. I'm glad the SOB 'paid', but... the victims never really recover. Poor, poor man. And to have his abuser show up 'again' like that... scary. Link to comment
Site Administrator Cia Posted December 19, 2010 Site Administrator Share Posted December 19, 2010 You showed how a person's mind can be the unwitting accomplice to an attacker. In the end, until we can face them both we remain vulnerable. Yet that never gets rid of the pain, it just makes it easier to bear. What I wonder about your story is why now? What really triggered that memory and was the ER doctor right and all the free time his mind had make it turn against him? I really liked this story, it kept me reading faster and faster until I finally got to find out was happening and what that steel door meant. Well done! Link to comment
Dolores Esteban Posted December 20, 2010 Share Posted December 20, 2010 Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked the story Link to comment
Nephylim Posted December 20, 2010 Share Posted December 20, 2010 I really liked this story. It was very dark. Memories are strong, very stron and something like that was bound to come to the surface eventually. Very insightful and chilling Link to comment
Kev de Cauchery Posted December 21, 2010 Share Posted December 21, 2010 I like the story, and I especially like the title of it. "Prisoner" of the past, huh? Poor man though. Just sad for him. Link to comment
Dolores Esteban Posted December 21, 2010 Share Posted December 21, 2010 Thanks for reading and leaving a feedback. I'm happy you liked the story. I'm going to read your stories as soon as I have the time to. Christmas is near and I'm busy. Link to comment
Kev de Cauchery Posted December 22, 2010 Share Posted December 22, 2010 You're not obliged to do that, Dolores. Link to comment
Dolores Esteban Posted December 22, 2010 Share Posted December 22, 2010 But I want to. Link to comment
Toast Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 Add me to the list of "I liked your story". And add very much. Well written and compelling and believable. Jeremy is a successful man with a past, a terrifying one. I would like to read more about him. Where does he go now? Oh, did I say excellent? I meant too. Link to comment
Dolores Esteban Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 Oh, thank you, bugeye. I'm glad you liked the story. Link to comment
Johnathan Colourfield Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 Dark. Sad. Beautiful. The use of memory is just excellent Link to comment
Dolores Esteban Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, Jonathan. Link to comment
C James Posted January 8, 2011 Share Posted January 8, 2011 That was very moving... I think the most telling part was at the end, when even the steely detective showed some feeling. It also goes to show that, in so many cases, our daemons lie within. Link to comment
Dolores Esteban Posted January 9, 2011 Share Posted January 9, 2011 Thanks for reading and leaving your feedback, CJames. Glad you liked the story. Link to comment
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