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"Man In Motion" Re-write


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It’s been awhile since I have read Man in Motion. It was one of the most volitive periods of Brad and Robbie’s relationship and one that continued to play a part in their lives. I am curious to see what you decided to reshape.

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I have begun the the reread. The enhancements you’ve described seem exciting; I look forward to seeing how they effect an already excellent storyline.

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5 hours ago, gmc said:

I have begun the the reread. The enhancements you’ve described seem exciting; I look forward to seeing how they effect an already excellent storyline.

Thanks!  Let me know what you think.  Chapter comments are always welcome.  

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5 hours ago, methodwriter85 said:

I don't really re-read the stories unless you're asking for feedback on edits...

I had the exact opposite experience. I was rereading to brush up on characters and that prompted a rewrite. 🙂

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