davewri
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I get a feeling the title foreshadows a tragedy. Don't make us cry, because in real life every body lives happily ever after.
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"The numbers scramble my brain" That's a lot of numbers.
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Must be video cameras on the train.
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I see a thousand ways this could go wrong.
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Bye bye , Captain. Suspect he will return to the story.
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Trouble brewing with the captain. Time for Trenton to grow up. Trenton is in the group that owns the submarine and the captain is in the group of hired employees. Trenton should demand a higher level of respect or otherwise replace the captain.
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No reasons yet to be fond of Trent. Hope he gets some sense of humanity soon. Spoiled little rich kid so far.
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Trenton is a coward. Always runs from confrontation.
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Possible that the cousin is closet gay? He protest too much.
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Read this story the first time years ago and it's sure worth reading again.
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A re-post of a truly epic and enthralling story. I promise you will be shocked at the end.
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Took a few paragraphs to remember reading this before on the Mustard Jar site.
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Father and son. Incest with Adam and his sister? Things will get very interesting here.
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I will not be reading the next few chapters. Perhaps after a few chapters have been posted I will look in for a welfare check. As bubby1234 has said, this is not my cup of tea.
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Now he is having a large compound constructed like his money grows on trees. He could easily take off on another whim and live somewhere else. Quoka has a strange writing style, which is why I keep reading his stories.
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Good idea to sell that research boat. Lot's of expense that would need constant full time charters just to break even. Landscape lady is looking for trouble if she causes damage to Anton's property.
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Forget about Mathew. Quoka does not write about gay relationships.
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You see a lot of strange behavior in Quoka's writing. Disposable characters like Michael come to mind.
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Never wise to disrespect contractors. Never know what surprises they could leave.
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What were they thinking? It would take a lot of very high priced charters to pay back 12,000,000. That is above the salaries and operational cost so it makes it a foolish idea. Star struck by a few royal celebrities but no promise of continuing at that level. Very few would be chartering the new, larger ship. Wise of the family to shoot this idea down.
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Typical for these people. Running away is a common theme here.
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Anton ran far away like a little punk based on part of a phone call to Mathew. Without any word from Mathew he assumes the worst. If Mathew was drugged and raped, he deserved some concern from Anton. Quoka sure writes some awkward character development.
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Only a matter of time before Carlton gets upset over something silly and runs away.
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So very typical of all of Quoka's stories. Main character runs away and leaves everyone who cares about him in misery.
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As usual Anton totally disregards the people that love and care about him. Preferring to ride horses and neglect people that are worried about him.
