Kileoli

Then I have to disappoint you, another chapter or two and you see how things fall apart.

Wasn't Gabriel in Japan and messing with Yakuza? And what did that guy do to Scott? You can't simply kill him and throw him on the dumpster! I mean you did but why?!

What was unfair? They had their fun 😂 The chapter was all the experiments went wrong or interrupted. And the bunny boo was the closest translation I found to Hasipupsi, as their safe word. If you have a better translation, I would like to know. And Liam would be happy to know what you wanna say, you can start with his method or his way of organizing the toys or if you have new suggestions he can try😂

Thanks for the tip. Im gonna definitely use this.

A human eating plant as a pet, it's getting more and more interesting

Seriously? Lol, so I was sorta right with my assumption then. At some point of the story I thought I don't know the bad guys, it sorta doesn't make sense, but honestly you made it sound like it was intentional to confuse the reader 😂

Liam has no discipline 😉, he just gets obsessed with something and can't let go. His brain is a complete chaos and he's super lazy and a master of procrastination. In comparison to mine, your stories are way complicated and need to have the complete plot before writing so they work. Otherwise they will end in chaos. I have no plot, and I don't write ahead, so there's no fixed days for me. The only problem is the nonlinear nature of the stories, which sometimes mess up the whole story, especially where I tried to differ from what really happened, or tried to make things look nicer than it was. I messed up a few times with the logic and behavior to the point I had to take the published chapter apart and restructure and rewrite it as it was, but other than that it's basically a biography mixed with my view of life, or on best cases my wishes ( in some parts of the Malicious Glee for instance) so as i said there's no discipline and no plan there 😅

Thanks for reading, it wasn't easy to write but I had to do it.

@Jeff Burton maybe we should put the Skype ring tone as the phone ring tone. And Liam was definitely a ruthless beta, but then there was no grammarly , deepl or open AI at the time. Even now, a beta reader who discuss the plausibility and the holes of the story is really worth it since AI cannot see beyond its own models and cannot feel (yet). Glad you're back. And you probably have tons to read. Luckily I'm one of those lazy ones who posts once in a while. I'm looking forward to your stories 😎 If you find time, the discipline is silence is Liam's story as teenager, and the Malicious Glee their everyday life now.

Artem, I am writing to you because there is no other way left to tell you how badly I miss you. How much I hate it for you to be where you are, how much I hate your memories attached to a place we once called home. You were not someone who needed to be announced. You stood there with your stupid humor and loud laughs, always making fun of everything so that no one could take you seriously and still you knew more than the rest of us. You didn’t speak about secrets and aches. You waited

This is in the memory of a dear freind lost in the violence of war.

A painful circle of events with a happy ending and they probably have a lot to experience together.

I don't like pods. Not the pink ones. I look forward to reading the next book. But two chapters per day is too much. I haven't started the knight story yet🥲

It's a relief at least Lilith got her chocolate. But bureaucratic documentation is not always bad. You have time to do other things till they get to you with their regularities.

So chocolate ist the best medicine in the end And Germans don't do schedules, they do appointments with doodles first in this case 😂

Welcome and have fun reading.

Applause. That was all creepy , but at least a great ending

I guess it's more because it was suddenly and un expected. I like non linear stories, but just randomly switching to this narration in chapter 19 is not easy to follow, and I think the shock of seeing Ben and Tim hiding in the bathroom was better than Justin taking the car. Actually it was interestingly fun, I like looking at the director walking to his Finale, pure Schadenfreude 😂

Then good luck with your surgery. Your crazy readers can wait..Focus on you

You really have weird sources of inspiration.:)

A pink bubble gum spreading across the town, inside smells like artificial strawberry but if it explodes it is going to stick to everyone. But why our dear Ellis is protecting the Hartley's? I thought he didn't like the professor.

I wonder if Tim comes for the rebound round.

I started with the first part since I couldn't sleep but I didn't feel like getting out of bed. The second part happened later and it was not planned to be so. It was more like I'm gonna check something quick, which took hours. It's not panic or treading water , it's more like a flood, drowning or a burn.

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It's the inner soul that must work. It's just rituals and outer body feelings or something like that. IDK. If I can't have sex then I don't want to be fused.