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Canuk

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  1. Canuk

    I Remember

    Jeremy-as-saviour... and he is about as straight as I am; which is to say not at all! Thanks for the chapter. Looking forward to see if Alex -X- can stay away from his addiction.
  2. Chris is so deliciously English. Well written characters with great story. Thanks; v enjoyable!
  3. Stephen has just lit a fuse...no idea what will be the outcome... Roll on next chapter(s)! 😁
  4. Canuk

    Chapter Fifteen

    Huge progress. Now to move forward, with honesty all round!
  5. Using their wits to survive.... but as in Lord of the Flies the pressure from the people who want to fight will be hard to resist. Interesting tale.
  6. Canuk

    Chapter Fourteen

    Bugger! Karma is a dog.... can't say enough of us didn't warn the two of them! Ah! The younger generation....if only they'd listen.😁 Great read. Thanks.
  7. The plot is certainly building. I like the clues you drop.... Thanks
  8. The ignorance around "cultural appropriation" is truly astounding. Not the place to debate it here, but all credit for what the boys were trying to do. Great read. Thanks
  9. Nope....😞🙁
  10. Canuk

    Chapter 16

    In other words, @Bushman60 could be 180 degrees wrong! Evil , evil authors.... Just keep writing!😘
  11. Jeez! Playing catch up with this and suddenly, well, I have caught up! So looking forward to next! Great read, enjoying it muchly! Thanks.
  12. There was a period I lived the life and, yes, there was a butler. The blissful thing about him was how effortless things became. It wasn't suits or ties or people or anything, it was what you wanted, happened. There were no expectations on his side (or mine for that matter) but if we decided to go to the theatre, we went, seats were amazing, everything was fine, same with restaurants, flight, hotels. It felt no different to "normal". Clothes were cleaned, food was available, appointments and moved or cancelled, people notified, told no or yes. After it all ended, again life didn't "change", just I did it not someone else. There was no master/servant relationship any more than me being the boss and my staff doing what was required. Equally he didn't "clean up after" me; I am the same person I was then, no better or worse, he just made everything "happen".
  13. Why? I think the comment verged on poetic!
  14. Canuk

    Julie

    Just caught up. Somehow I lost track of the story a while ago. You do have a habit of letting us get comfortable then dumping a truck (lorry?) load of anguish on us! I am not generally into revenge and God knows Loz has his own issues, but if he doesn't get his comeuppance soon..... Great read. Thanks.
  15. Canuk

    Chapter Eight

    Sadly Noah has had the right conversation with the wrong boy.... Great read. But may i ask what's this with " but it got super long, so I cut".... what is wrong with long? If it's well written, relevant, and entertaining then leave it in!
  16. Canuk

    Chapter Seven

    I have a feeling a whole lot of pennies are about to drop! There are a few prizes here for masochism. The mind games, the efforts to "prove" you're straight, the ultra strange conversations that confuse everybody. Great read Thanks
  17. Canuk

    Homecoming

    Gambling...what a way to start. And his mother; anything but the guilt that that conversation would bring on. Bloody tough beginning.... Looking forward to more positive developments! Thanks
  18. Canuk

    Chapter Six

    Apologies.... yes; vv = vice versa....
  19. Canuk

    Chapter Six

    Noah fantasizing about Sebastian ( or perhaps vv🤔) Great story. Jordan is confusing me.... But being so dependent on Noah while slightly disabled is probably designed to screw with readers! Thanks
  20. Finding friends is so important at that age. Great start Thanks
  21. Canuk

    Chapter 14

    the plot thickens, twirls and does a half pike off a pole.... curioser and curioser. There seems to be so many bad eggs... Thanks having a great time with this!
  22. Canuk

    Chapter 34

    Great ending! Supportive families make all the difference. Thanks for this. Great read.
  23. Canuk

    Chapter 13

    Yes the mother has serious issues, but ultimately she is a mother (a very very misguided one!) That therapist however has no excuse whatsoever. People who you trust with your innermost being that then betray that trust deserve the most severe punishment possible.
  24. Canuk

    Chapter Four

    Sebastian is going to be trouble, or at least cause trouble in what should be paradise if they could ever move beyond the self conscious banter. Keep it coming!! Enjoying this very much!
  25. Interesting perspective. Fathers reaction was so predictable. Not the same if it had been his daughter! Weirdly if Deidre had been honest, it may have been an entirely different experience and in fact better for both. Sadly she was a little too selfish for that. Great to see you back!
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