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I sincerely hope you never kill off Stef and Grand; the next generation would all fall apart! Thanks for re-igniting the story!

Welcome back! I say this as much to creator as creation! Interesting development. Daventry's surprise at the count's arrival says much. There just my be more to this....? Thanks, again. Glad you are feeling up to giving your admirers all they desire (well, some of what they desire!)

"Long distance relationship" same end same side of the same continent... that verges on commutable! My partner and I commuted for three years between Southern Australia and eastern Canada...that was a long distance relationship! Still together after 20 years, so somehow we survived! Perhaps it's the effect NY has on our lovers! Enjoyable story, great characters, well written sex scenes. Thanks

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Oops! Sorry for missing that kinda-vital detail... Look forward to the next installment....

Ahhhhh, in a word, no! Following that line of argument, the President of the US could abolish the Presidency.... The occupier of a role can remove themselves for that role, but even in fiction, to abolish the role itself would be nonsensical. In this story, Leon could work with the High Council ( correct name?) for constitutional change, but nothing that has been written indicates that the ruler has those sorts of power to do it unilaterally.

Just read all chapters posted to date. It seems strange that there is an assumption that because the uncle poisoned his wife, ergo he wants to get rid of Leon. We already know about " section 15" of the succession law... this to me, point directly at Constantin, the supposed poisoning of his wife neatly gets rid of Constantin's father, death of Leon would leave almost no option for the succession.... All that said, it is an interesting succession law that allows that the reigning monarch to pick anyone from their family to succeed. Under, for example the British system, Leon, as eldest son of eldest son would automatically be heir, even if his father was dead ( so Willliam, Duke of Cambridge still inherits whether Charles, Prince of Wales predeceases him or not.). Great story. Wonderful twists. The internal fights Leon/Logan have are really well and realistically written. Looking forward to more! Thanks

Yes but every Australian just KNOWS they are both really Australian!😁 And I do think that as we move through the third decade of this century more and more parents are reacting in a similar way. While Matt's fathers reaction will be sadly always with us, I feel that its a smller and smaller percentage of people that will behave like that. Society evolving. In a good way.

You have written two amazing characters. Shane and Marcus both need serious help. Hopefully Marcus gets it before he does anything irreversible, and Shane, too, before he gets tossed out and never gets to see his child again. Great writing. Thanks

I am a little confused (yes, there is a first time for everything 🙃 ). As I understand it this is the final series of stories in the CJ saga, not the final story... or have I missed something? Sad to see it go either way, but at least if we get a little drama of the cj presidency we have a few days/weeks/months to ease our addiction to the family.... EDIT Just saw that story is labeled "complete"; so here endeth the saga...😣😚

Great continuation. Also clever to reveal back story through press commentary; the way anchors drone on about every piece of known history at times like this is pretty universal. Great to see where they all end up. I am sure there will be drama! ( chief justice Obama... nice touch!)

Beautifully written. Writing confusion and resolution is not easy. But you have done well. Really looking forward to how this works! Thanks

"Most human of all jellyfish"! Wonderful imagery!

Interesting characters ET/Timmy waking up to himself Garry Trying to distract himself with new meat. Gabe concerned about where he thought he was going And our protagonist almost surprised where he has ended up. But I suspect drama in the relationship; at this stage it's revolving around sex... reality may bite soon I suspect.

Great story. Interesting characters with a great plot. Thanks, your skills are much appreciated. The novel set in 1815 will be wonderful! All the best with it.

Well wow! That was a bit of a shake up. A wholly consistent and relatable shakeup, but one, nevertheless. And I am not sure which bit shook me most! Great writing, thanks!

It looks like a little light is shining through the fog... The balance you have created between the two characters is exceptional! Thoroughly enjoying it; thanks.

Thanks for a well written, wonderfully entertaining story. Looking forward to your next piece!

I foresee much complexity, with a dose of misunderstanding thrown in! Interesting chapter. Thanks

Aiden is so sure of his own analysis that common sense and his listening and comprehension skills have gone out the window! All this tho' is a great lesson for the wannabe playboy of the western world! Great characters, wonderful portrayal of misunderstanding. Thanks

Milan sounds confused and Ryan is being very teenager and taking at all to heart. Great writing. Lòking forward to more...

Thanks for not dragging the birth out over 3+ chapters! Very realistic description of the family reactions. I note you toned down the mother's reactions during the birth ; my boys' mother would have made whafies blush during her labor! Now for the drama...!

That last sentence saved you ever so much grief! There are so many questions ever before the shooting started, if you had given at least a hint of what happened... ( you have a good imagination, I'll let you work out what the next possible step could have been ?😂😎😎😎😎😎😎😘 Great chapter. More for the boys to get over, more heart ache, but at least Bèn is no longer with us... Thanks

Not what I was expecting at all. Well done! Great how all perspectives are dealt with and validated. Life is complex and it sucks and it is full of boundless joy. There is no right! On a completely separate note; is it normal where you come from if your car doesn't start you get it towed? Seems a very expensive start to what could be a simple battery problem... Thanks for a great story..

The...ah...pause ... between postings did mean I had to reread the last chapter to get the story back into sync! Interesting way to out tourself and amazing response from her mum. Thanks... any chance the next chapter will be before we celebrate Christmas? No pressure...!😃