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Yes but every Australian just KNOWS they are both really Australian!😁 And I do think that as we move through the third decade of this century more and more parents are reacting in a similar way. While Matt's fathers reaction will be sadly always with us, I feel that its a smller and smaller percentage of people that will behave like that. Society evolving. In a good way.
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You have written two amazing characters. Shane and Marcus both need serious help. Hopefully Marcus gets it before he does anything irreversible, and Shane, too, before he gets tossed out and never gets to see his child again. Great writing. Thanks
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I am a little confused (yes, there is a first time for everything 🙃 ). As I understand it this is the final series of stories in the CJ saga, not the final story... or have I missed something? Sad to see it go either way, but at least if we get a little drama of the cj presidency we have a few days/weeks/months to ease our addiction to the family.... EDIT Just saw that story is labeled "complete"; so here endeth the saga...😣😚
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Great continuation. Also clever to reveal back story through press commentary; the way anchors drone on about every piece of known history at times like this is pretty universal. Great to see where they all end up. I am sure there will be drama! ( chief justice Obama... nice touch!)
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Beautifully written. Writing confusion and resolution is not easy. But you have done well. Really looking forward to how this works! Thanks
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"Most human of all jellyfish"! Wonderful imagery!
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Interesting characters ET/Timmy waking up to himself Garry Trying to distract himself with new meat. Gabe concerned about where he thought he was going And our protagonist almost surprised where he has ended up. But I suspect drama in the relationship; at this stage it's revolving around sex... reality may bite soon I suspect.
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Great story. Interesting characters with a great plot. Thanks, your skills are much appreciated. The novel set in 1815 will be wonderful! All the best with it.
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Well wow! That was a bit of a shake up. A wholly consistent and relatable shakeup, but one, nevertheless. And I am not sure which bit shook me most! Great writing, thanks!
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It looks like a little light is shining through the fog... The balance you have created between the two characters is exceptional! Thoroughly enjoying it; thanks.
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Thanks for a well written, wonderfully entertaining story. Looking forward to your next piece!
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I foresee much complexity, with a dose of misunderstanding thrown in! Interesting chapter. Thanks
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Aiden is so sure of his own analysis that common sense and his listening and comprehension skills have gone out the window! All this tho' is a great lesson for the wannabe playboy of the western world! Great characters, wonderful portrayal of misunderstanding. Thanks
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Milan sounds confused and Ryan is being very teenager and taking at all to heart. Great writing. Lòking forward to more...
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Thanks for not dragging the birth out over 3+ chapters! Very realistic description of the family reactions. I note you toned down the mother's reactions during the birth ; my boys' mother would have made whafies blush during her labor! Now for the drama...!
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That last sentence saved you ever so much grief! There are so many questions ever before the shooting started, if you had given at least a hint of what happened... ( you have a good imagination, I'll let you work out what the next possible step could have been ?😂😎😎😎😎😎😎😘 Great chapter. More for the boys to get over, more heart ache, but at least Bèn is no longer with us... Thanks
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Not what I was expecting at all. Well done! Great how all perspectives are dealt with and validated. Life is complex and it sucks and it is full of boundless joy. There is no right! On a completely separate note; is it normal where you come from if your car doesn't start you get it towed? Seems a very expensive start to what could be a simple battery problem... Thanks for a great story..
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The...ah...pause ... between postings did mean I had to reread the last chapter to get the story back into sync! Interesting way to out tourself and amazing response from her mum. Thanks... any chance the next chapter will be before we celebrate Christmas? No pressure...!😃
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There is an immense amount of humour as a third party looking at their relationship. I really am not sure who is more clueless! Great read. Compared to some of the other self indulgent crap around, this is really a great breath of fresh air! Thoroughly enjoying following your talented story telling!
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"drove the heel of his hand into Aria’s draw"...? jaw? well "draws" loose ends together.... How do they get out of this? We waits and we sees....😁
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Chapter 1 Fly Me to the Moon
Canuk commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 Fly Me to the Moon
Absolutely beautiful! The mention of church st took me back to Toronto when my partner and I met at Woodies. We recreated our meeting on our 10th anniversary, but by our 15th the bar had all been redesigned, so while still Woodies, it wasn't "our" Woodies. You story was made more beautiful by the sadness of the end. While something wonderful had ended, and there was a new something beckoning, it was the beauty he had that was his focus, not what could be had. Thanks. -
Great ending of a great, well written story, with great characters. Thanks
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Very belated comment here. Kris is a very sad character; besotted, but immature. Completely unable to either get over a blatantly obvious ex, or change his ways to actually win the love of the object of his affection. Very sad bloke, whose idea that violence will achieve his aim is evidence of major mental health problems.
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Great story, except this commentator may be your "sole person" that cannot stand having his feet touched! I literally had to skip paras so my toes would uncurl! Thanks!
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Oh! Gawd! This either gets resolved quickly because Crispen feels the same, or our hero is going to go through years of torture, self loathing, confusion, tears, heights of passion, deepest love and violent hate. Oh! To be a gay pre teen ... said no one ever! Great story!
