[Review from Jian Sierra]
I think this story is very well told. There are just a few things I'd wanna know more of. First off, five thousand years passed: did the lords and ladies age at all? did their powers increase or wane due to the passing of time? There was mention that Arensha lusts for Ailarha, but he wants to destroy her, why? Did she turn down his advances, perhaps? Galwrock has a thirty-six hour day, does this mean that their concept of weeks, months and years are different from that of Earth? Is that the reason why the five thousand years seemed not that significant on Galwron life? These might not be important on the story, I think all in all I just wanna know.
Even with these questions, I enjoyed reading this story a lot. The 'action' part of the story is properly executed even if the story telling sometimes seem impersonal. Not that it's a bad thing, this is one of those stories that has to be told a certain way. Definitely worth a read and I can't wait to move on to Stu's story after this