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**cries** That started so sweet and cute and innocent and ended up with hars reality death. You broke my heart, girl. The Angel statue at the cemetary that should have brought some attention to the fact that this story might not have a happy ending. That was very subtle.

Much welcome to our bunch If you need any help just ask PS. Welcome to every new member in the thread I have yet to greet! Cya guys around

Oh... pictures a re dangerous evidence I hope it is all well and fine now, besides, what is the real harm in seeing a beautiful half naked man? Anyways, try not to stress beforehand. M

This was a fun capter! And it got even funnier to the end even with all the concerns Jase and Peter had. The drive back and discussion of "hotness" made me giggle. I liked how you corporate cell phone technology to the storytelling since it is modern way of communicating even at the weirdest moments. Jase is getting more and more comfortable of being out with his gayness with around people he doesn't know. Peter seems more careful than him. If Jason is everything or nothing type of person, which he seems to be, the change from almost a total closet case is believable and he is moving towards coming out to his friends too. He toys with the idea in this chapter already.

I hope you keep writing, it helps. Thank you for sharing. Luv you.

Then it was historical. I think the tag led me think about a 1800th century setting with a poor character laying on velvet sofa waiting for the end. That is why I was asking since after I read it I was like, whaaaaatttt??? Where did that come from, only from a tag you marked. Funny how the brain works.

Well it was heartbreaking. Tell me, you tagged it historical, in wich way?

70% of weightloss comes from what we eat, only 30% on how we exercice. I am in no means overweight, but I have had my share of eating issues. I had adult bulimia for over 10 years and even now I am having hard time to eat when I get down or stressed. Mainly that means eating little or none. I know quiete a few things about eating well, eating wrong and eating unhealthy. Weight watchers is a good program and you have seen the results can be great. So... be happy about the loss you have already made and focus on just enjoying life and keeping the program only a part of it. How much power you give to the issue affects how your body reacts to the program. Keep positive and determinate but don't let it become a thing that takes too big part of your lufe. Wayne, I wish you much much much fun momenta in exercising and strenght on your road to the ideal weight you aim. If you ever need any support or talk, remember that I am also a personal trainer and I have a lot of customers with weight issues. I might be able to give you tips and pep talk. Or a kick on the butt if you need one You are a gem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good Luck! You can do it

I am happy to live in an area where all four seasons show in the nature. It is a priviledge. I liked this again

Do you skim through the story? Or do you focus and taste every word and every syllable of it? I am just curious... Just a few starting thoughts from me... I do the both. Sometimes I enjoy the easy reads that just flow through my eye lids and sometimes I get stuck with something odd in the text that makes me stop and think, go back to reading and then return to the spot that stopped me originally. Sometimes the later one causes me extreme pleasure. Also, some authors seem to have such a strong signature style that needs to be learned like a new language before the reading flows. Hmm. If you have examples or want examples from me about your reading experiences, I am curious to hear and share. Of course if you want to tell what in position you read, where you read, when you read, from what format you read... go right ahead. Just please explain how it affects your reading experience. M

I knew that... Or not Then write some more, humble please.

But the forbidden fruit tastes the best and is the juiciest. **giggle** Enjoy your flavor! I really liked the rhythm in the poem.

Moments and memories passing by. I like how you pondered life with this. Just short glimpses that are significant to you, but touching for the reader as well. Where are all the 100 haikus you wrote during that month?I wanna read...

Now that u started, keep going, I'll be reading! Lovely and honest, real to anyone who are forced to live with only memories.

There are degrees in cheating. There are different types of cheaters. Some do it without thinking, some are not truly committed. Some are emotionally crippled. Some just assholes and narcissist. Most cheaters are human too, some learn from their mistakes. I have not been cheated, not that I know of. But there are circumstances I could live with it. Knowing human nature, I think it is rare not to feel temptations. I feel a life long commitment is possible, but sadly, rare.

**Offers as many cookies as needed until Comsie the Writing God learns the new tricks** Watch the lightning! I have all faith in u You can do it. Just stop resisting the change, embrace it. That will eventually give you more free time to your brain to create amazing stuff. I know what I am talking about. I have 2 left feet and no sense of rhythm. I decided to have a 'minor' career change and I had to learn to listen to music in a whole different way than before - and NOW I can. While learning the ropes I was so tired and stressed and at times more than ready to just give up. I didn't and now it is much easier again.

So many things made me smile and giddy happy while reading this chapter. The cell phone photo exchange, Peter's sister Erin's reactions and all. Then the deal with Darryl, hehe And Sigh, their first ever sleepover together. I think this was really realistic, there are both individual insecurities and comfort between the boys that keep the story in balance.

Three different lines to follow from now on? The elders, the angel and the prince. Interesting start.

One question first, the boys are living the year 2008, did u start writing this then or is there another reason for that specific year? Nicely raised stakes on Jason. Making everything even harder for him. I like that. You are not taking the easy way out. But, very soon as the boys wonder too they have a commitment discussion. In a way it was necessary since Jason had so much to lose and they both needed to be on the same page. I am interested to find out the root of Peter's insecurities.

What Jian said. Also, sooo cute what your mum said. Gotta love her. Coming out should not be forced. Everything happens when it is supposed to happen.

Another unique beauty.

That was heart-wrenching. Something like that I expected to have happen to Bobby in the cell, but really I tried to avoid thinking about it while reading Holy Day. Crap. Well, it could have been worse. At least now he is in the hands of the good guys. **Sad and happy, in more levels than one.** Thank you for this story Lugh. I do your Hanover-saga.

Cooper Black Italic, I see. **giggle**

I thought I had a bad week... Just don't ever say this can't get any worse because it does, life humiliates you until you just don't care. I am sorry, but that is true. The only way to deal with that is to keep bouncing back, take baby steps forward when ever it is possible. Take care. Maria

Sigh, no, no, no, no. Oh NOOOO. I just had a flash back from the Holy Day. When they imprison Puck and Bobby, they do nasty things to the darling scientist Back to the shorty chappy. Don't apologize, it is short but it does have a great cliff Might have worked well combined with the previous chappy, but as it is, it is. That's that. I do like the fact that Bobby is caring and curious about Puck. And the little remark about the diapers... I loved also the comment about the sweet and - hmm - (not so) innocent Amberly, hehe. Now I have a threesome image in my mind, thank you very much. Ps. I don't know, what you know that I think I know.