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  1. Lisa

    Beatings and Wine

    I ditto Miles; who tastes wine?! We just chug it and hope for the best. lol But why didn't Issac cook something special for Zander also? Good for Bay for blacklisting those campy creeps!
  2. Lisa

    Chapter 5

    Wow, Vincent really knew what to do in that scary situation. I would have panicked and just floored the brakes and plowed right into that school bus. Holy shit. Ok, so either someone's tailing them (I think Vincent would be able to tell though), or Levin cut the brake line. Omg, They (or the cops), should get the tape from the security camera in the parking lot of the doctor's office. I'm sure there's a security camera - don't most places have them now? I hate to think it was Levin. He'd be a dirty cop, but most of all, he'd be trying to kill his b/f? Ex? Whatever they are. Still... In all his shock, I hope Haje doesn't forget that the briefcase is still in the backseat of the car. Great chapter, Sui - I'm sitting at the edge of my seat!
  3. I almost forgot - I meant to mention this in the review I just wrote: Of course when I was reading this story on the other site, I didn't realize you were flawless, the author of "Admire Me". I loved that story! And I must say, your writing for this story has greatly improved. I know you wrote "Admire Me" a long time ago, but it has gotten a lot better.
  4. I thought I r&r'd the last chapter, but I guess I didn't. I was reading this on the other site where you post, so I'm glad you're on here now where I can review. (I hate emailing authors, lol) I think I'm all caught up now. I think it's pretty obvious that Kenton likes Brice. At least he's acting like he really does. Now, just to refresh my memory from the beginning: Brice and Bram were really good friends and Bram wanted Brice to try out for football, but Brice wanted to try out for cheerleading but didn't tell Bram, right? And then when the results were posted on the board Bram saw that he made the cheerleading squad and got pissed. Oh yeah, wait, didn't Levi coax Brice into cheering? And then Bram sort of stopped talking to Brice b/c he was so pissed at him? I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder if Brice will ease off on his silent treatment of Bram. =)
  5. You know, Ben is acting like a jackass.As Mark said, it could have been anyone. The delivery guys, anyone. Maybe someone saw them when Ben got home from his folks. Wasn't Mark the one to take his hand and Ben let go to run his fingers through Mark's green hair? Well, even though it was 11:30 at night, there could have been someone around. Someone who recognized Ben. Do they go anywhere together? Or do they just shag in Ben's apartment? lol Ben better apologize to Mark, that's all I can say. Mark should feel so insulted. And heartbroken, b/c even though he was angry with Ben for even suggesting that, once Ben turned around to go after that icy, "Watch me.", and Mark started pleading, he's now heartbroken thinking that they are now through. Ben's gonna have a lotta groveling to do. Hope he likes crow. lol
  6. Heya, Billy! Terrific chapter! Andy was so brave going in for the procedure all by himself. Being a mother, I was surprised that his dad didn't even try to go in. Actually, when one of my kids was seventeen, he had to have some procedure done in the hospital and I went right in with him. I mean, I didn't even think twice about it, I just walked in right after him. So that surprised me that Andy's dad didn't go in with him. As far as JT and him knowing about Andy, I really think he has changed. I'm hoping it's not a case of "it's too good to be true", you know? I think it was really mature of him to admit that everything he has heard from his father has been a load of crap. So that's a good thing that he knows that Andy being gay doesn't have anything to do with the type of person he is. And I'm glad Joey is going to tell JT also. There is no way in hell that Andy and Joey would be able to hide their feelings for each other in front of JT. And besides, if JT doesn't know, they won't even be able to hold hands. lol Andy's dad's speech was terrific. I'd be really proud if he were my dad too. I have a feeling though that even though Judge Collins doesn't want his private life "campaigning" with him, it will be. They'll get the dirt on anything and everything they can. (his opposition) Andy's sexuality will be the hot topic for discussion (even though it shouldnt, as it has nothing to do with why his dad was asked to run for office), and then Joey will come into the fray and it will be a whole big political mess. They should throw a bunch of hot coals over that bruhaha. Ok, lame joke, sorry...you know, a coalmining town and all... Anyway...I think that was it. lol Oh, I wanted to thank you for updating so quickly after the last posting! I'm looking forward to the next chapter - I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Andy's test comes out negative. Oh yeah, this is what I wanted to ask you Billy: does Miss Nancy have a clone so I can get a wonderful cook and someone to help around the house? lol
  7. Lisa

    Chapter 1

    I thought Matt and Andy's time together was beautiful. I know Andy has been wanting this for quite awhile now and deep down I think Matt did too. I'm glad Matt is finally figuring things out now. Terrific chapter, Uplifted!
  8. Trevor! Are you kidding me????? This is how you leave a chapter??!!!! I'm gonna have to name you the King of the Cliffies come voting time! lol Damn...I hope Sterling heard the glass and all the commotion in the bathroom. Shit. I can't believe Miracle's parents. His father was upset b/c he had to leave work early? His mother (who sews in the car, btw? lol), was upset b/c what? Her high society ladies wouldn't want her in their bridge club anymore? What assholes they are. Their son was raped and beaten and all they care about is themselves. They don't even know how damaged he is. They are so clueless. At least Hunter may have some inclination. It's so obvious that Miracle is just crying out. He just wants to feel loved and he's equating sex with love which, in many circumstances, are two completely different things. Oh, how come Sterling didn't notice Miracle's swollen face? I'm assuming since his father punched him, his face would be all swollen... Ok, Trevor, you better update soon. I'm on pins and needles here...
  9. Lisa

    Taking Control

    I think it's very cool that Zupan researched ways that he could have sex and he figured out to take household items and use them to his advantage. And I think Zander is going to really appreciate that - that Zu really thought it out b/c it was important for him to be able to do everything he could for Zander. Now that's true love. To ditto Thorn: awesome chapter, Sasha!
  10. Lisa

    Family Time

    "The writing mass of hotness in his lap" - hysterical! lol Love that line! I'm glad Zolton finally knows and him and Zu made up. I can imagine how relieved Zu is now knowing that his brother knows and everything is fine. Ok, on to chapter seventeen.
  11. Lisa

    Valentines Day

    This was a beautiful chapter, Owl! I loved the romantic dinner Max made for Josh. (any dinner that I don't have to make is romantic to me. lol) They are so cute together, both so shy and uncertain about their gifts. I thought the hourglass was a beautiful idea. I would have hoped that Max showed more appreciation for it though. Tom and Mark are forging into an interesting friendship. I like that they have been texting back and forth for awhile and now their friendship has taken a different turn. Mark handled finding out about Tom very maturely. He could have said a lot of nasty things to him, berating him for his past homophobia and picking on other gay kids, but he didn't. And he treated the drawing with respect and not something to make fun of Tom for. I just thought this was an excellent chapter. And you always leave me wanting more, Owl! =) I hope the next chapter doesn' t take as long. Oh, and I didn't remember that this takes place in Indiana. Wouldn't it be hella cool if Billy and David could cross over into this story for a chapter and vice versa for "Indiana Summer"? Ha, just a thought...
  12. First of all, Michael, KEEP YOUR EYES OFF THE HOT SECRETARY!!!!! At least when Asher's around. lol I could feel Asher's jealousy though, that musta hurt like hell. Second, this new news on the trial is really bad. Allen's attorney is going to dig up everything on Asher (even though he is innocent AND MADE A POSITIVE ID), and all his dirty laundry will be aired for all to see. The judge will dislike him for who he is anyway and Douglas will get away with attempted murder. Now, I have a question: if Douglas Allen originally thought that Asher was Ziggy (yes now I remember, KC, thanks for the reminder though. ), who is to say that he won't try to find the real Ziggy and try to take him out? This story just keeps getting better and better, KC. Just wish the chapters were a little bit longer...
  13. Lisa

    Stephen

    Man, that little guy must be tired of swinging on that wooden pole! lol Thanks for the 'Thanks'! lol And hey, lookie, lookie, please take note: I am r&r'ing ON THE SAME DAY that you posted!!!! Will wonders never cease? hahah Well, Zune certainly got an education in this chapter. Kev, Kev, Kev, you sleaze! Him and Edward broke Stephen's heart. I can't believe Kev played such a huge part in this. What a shit. And setting up Zune to show up at the cafe, knowing full well he was home shagging Joey. My respect for Kev has totally plummeted. Zune will be very upset, maybe he should talk to Jake. Jake is such a good kid, I really like him. And yay for Carol! She is so kickass! You go, girl! Putting slimy Joey in his place like that! Way to go! Great job, sacred! I can't wait to see what happens next!
  14. Damn! I wanted to be there to see Zander yell at those bigoted idiots! lol I'm so glad everything is all well and good with Z&Z. Zander's REAL friends are terrific! I hope Zupan has a good time with them.
  15. Lisa

    Chapter 37

    OMG, the alarm guy!!! Holy crap! I can just picture him on the other side of the phone, with a face that was beet red! Omg, that was funny! Zachy as usual, is adorable. He wants to bring a suit to look like a penguin. lol And Mickey D's is their favorite birthday party hangout. lol Can't wait to see how fast Zach melts Scott's mom's heart!
  16. Lisa

    Temper Temper

    Were these the "friends" Zander wanted Zu to meet? Or were they just as Zander said: aquaintances? They weren't the real friends Zander wanted Zu to meet? I can certainly understand why Zu would roll off in a huff. I cannot believe ANYONE would say those asinine comments about someone in a wheelchair!!!!! Well, of course I can, that stupid woman did at the pool. But seriously, how cruel can people be? And to accuse Zander of being desperate! How humiliating for Zupan. Zupan will probably to the the South Alaska and get wasted. He needs to cool off before he talks to Zander. I know he doesn't blame Zander. Zander would never be friends who were so bigoted and narrow-minded. You know, these people I am sure get offended when others call them derogatory names and act disgusted with them just for who they are. They don't even have any control over their sexuality. But here they are, acting the same exact way that people act towards them. Haven't they learned how hurtful bigotry and hate are? How could they do this to someone else? And one of their "friends" or acquaintances's friend, no less? I'd never want to associate with those people again if I were Zander. Oh, and Sasha, in regards to your response to my review in the last chapter when I was impressed at how Zupan got out of the pool and into his chair so fluidly...I have never seen that done, but I did see an episode of "Oprah" many years ago which focused on a girl who had no limbs. From what I remember, I think she was born that way. She lived by herself in an apartment and had it rigged up since she didn't have the use of arms or legs. It was utterly amazing watching her get around and do things like open the fridge, answer the phone, etc. It was really impressive. She was young also, I think in her twenties. I remember she had red hair and I think she lived in Oregon. Weird that I can remember that. Anyway...I hope the next chapter finds Zu and Zander making up and Zander going back to the club and tazing all those losers. lol
  17. Lisa

    Fuck Christmas

    What a sleazy creep Kresten is. Omg. I agree w/JoAnn: if Siggi knows he's a creepy pedo, why would he even demoralize himself into going in a locked room with him? Oh yeah, we're talking about Siggi now. I almost forgot. All I can say is thank God Dmitri came when he did. (no pun intended. lol) Poor Gunni, hope he didn't get too sick. And Siggi's right, what makes Gunni think that Kresten wouldn't terrorize him? He's young and he's fresh meat. Dmitri better not leave Gunni's side when Kresten is around. And I do agree with Gunni - Kresten should be reported. I can understand how Gummi might think that Siggi went with him voluntarily with the intention of doing stuff with him, but Siggi said no and no means no. Well, technically he said he can't have anything up there for two more weeks, but that's a 'no' in my book. lol I wouldn't care that Kresten has been performing at the Christmas Concert since the beginning of time, he should be locked up. He can perform in prison, how's that?
  18. Lisa

    Varsity Commitment

    I started reading this on the other site you originally posted on. I'm glad to see you're posting here as well. It's a really good story. Brice certainly is strong to be able to ignore Bram, especially when Bram needs him the most. lol Looking forward to the next chapter. =)
  19. Lisa

    Chapter 4

    Ha, screw being discreet! Asa and Chandler throw it in everyone's faces (at least those who are really paying attention to them. i.e. Evan, lol), what they've been doing in the woods/trailer. It's about time they get a taste of their own medicine, so to speak. =) Good for Evan. Him and Greyson are so cute together. Can't wait for their "date" at Grey's hotel room. (wink, wink)
  20. Lisa

    Chapter 7

    Andrew, I'm glad that you're leaving the story open in case you want to continue it. I would also love to read more about their life at UNH. Maybe they'll bump into my Zach, who actually starts there on Aug. 27th, not mid-August. Then you can write about all the parties and antics these kids get into. Well, maybe not YOUR kids...lol. I'm glad that Justin and Cody were there to help Brice kick that fucker Kevin off his property. I can just imagine Brice's dad's face if he saw Kevin there. Terrific story, Andrew. I hope to read about these boys in the future.
  21. I totally agree w/KC; I wanted to bitch slap X upside his head too! I know that he was hurt. We've all been there. But he has no idea how Axel is feeling. I know he come right out and ask him how Axel felt about him, but still, that's no reason to treat him like shit. Axel has no idea what he did wrong. And of course he wants to meet Otto; Otto is a fellow German. Why wouldn't he want to meet him and talk to someone in his native tongue? That's just common sense. And maybe he can explain to Otto how he's feeling and maybe Otto will know more English and can tell Axel exactly what to say to Xavier. I really love this story, Joe! Wish you could update quicker. lol
  22. What a sad, sad chapter. I feel numb right along with Rhyder and I wasn't even there. Jase seems like a really warm and loving guy. I hope he can stop being a player and give his attention to Rhyder. Rhyder is feeling so alone, it's sad. Well, he was having a grand old time at the rodeo before the horse fell. I'm hoping it won't take too long before he's his old cute self again. =)
  23. I was wondering what happened to you, meanderings. I was about to call in a search party. Glad everything's ok. It seems they have a few good leads to follow up on now, especially the one with Mike's mom. (oops, stepmom, right?) I wonder if she found out about Tiff and then had her stepson "take care of her". This story is better than an episode of "CSI".
  24. Lisa

    Public Nudity

    I can't believe how nasty some people are. The lady doesn't want a guy in a wheelchair around her kid? Or is it b/c he has tattoos? How is that teaching the kid about tolerance and diversity and just not being a fucking BIGOT???? What a bitch! I wish Zu pushed HER in the water. lol I'm glad the guy who pushed Zander in the pool didn't call them any nasty names. Now, I was wondering about the logistics of Zupan's chair and the pool. I can see how he could kinda scoot over to the edge and jump in, but how does he get himself out the the pool and back into the chair? I know he uses his upper body strength to get out of the pool, but how does he get back in the chair?
  25. Lisa

    Time To Tell

    I am impressed that Zu's friends took his being outed as well as they did. Unless they were just scared of him if they made an issue out of it. lol And how sweet is Zander that he wants to wait for them to be out of a smelly locker room and into a nicer place for him to say those three little words back to Zu? Ok, on to the next chapter.
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