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I was actually just going to write 'review'. Hudson, you did a phenomenal job critiquing Addy's Sparkle series!!!! As Tim said, you certainly have set the bar high for the next critiquer (yes, I just made that up!!).
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I absolutely LOVED this story!! @Valkyrie, you should definitely read this; it's great. I spent half the time rooting for Adam, and the other half was spent wishing I could smack him upside his head! But I also wanted to just wrap him in a hug because his life wasn't all roses and unicorns.
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Dammit. I did as you said (it was VERY difficult since the thingie is constantly moving), and it worked, but I got a bar that said I pasted with formatting, and I need to delete the formatting. I ignored that, but it didn't come out.
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That's too bad. He's my new favorite dancing/running/jumping guy. Well, he's the ONLY dancing/running/jumping guy! Anywho...if you don't mind, Tim, I'm trying to catch up with chapter fifteen! hehe
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I feel badly for Andy. He's under so much pressure and stress, but none of his priest friends know this. Maybe if he found one he could confide in (Father John maybe?), some of his burden would be lifted. I'm looking forward to his meeting with Marcus at the LGBT center. That should be very interesting! Marcus did that on purpose I'm sure.
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Well, that seems easy enough. lol Ctl C and Ctl V are the same used in Google Docs, which I use on a daily basis. It just seems like a pain in the ass to do that every time. I really like the dancing/running/jumping guy. He should be on the list of emoticons. Can't they stick him in there somewhere?
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I agree with LadyDe; I don't trust Sammy. I really like this new story, Mitchelll! I'm looking forward to reading more! It was awesome seeing Shane and Jason again, and of course hearing about Victor!
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Parker, this was beautiful. You had me in tears. My thoughts and prayers go out to you and your family, and I hope your mom gets better.
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Pick one up? Like how? What do you mean? Remember, Tim, I'm really technology stupid here!!! lol Which reminds me, I still need to finish THAT story!!
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I'm waving to everyone here!! haha Anyway...back to the story: Reggie is just refreshing to read about. He's honest, smart, and so, so funny. He doesn't even know how funny he is. I'm so glad his real friends are still his friends. Abe's an ass (as are S&S), but I think Abe now regrets the nasty thing he said to Reggie.
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I COULD HAVE EATEN ALPHA-BITS AND POOPED OUT A BETTER JOURNAL I laughed at this line just as much now as I did when I first read the story! Omg, this is funny!! and hehe Reggie's slowly coming to the realization that Mr. Byrd may actually have had something in mind when he thought up this journal exercise.
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Oh, Ron, I remember now how funny Reggie's journal was! He has some sense of humor! I'm looking forward to revisiting this story.
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Yay!!! I just got a notice that it's posted!!!! Hey, how can I get to the emoticon where the figure is running across the screen?
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I absolutely LOVED the banter between Zena and Kian. She's a smart little girl, and Uncle Daven has taught her a lot! The kitchen scene with all three of them was heartwarming to read about. Great chapter, Sui!
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Jeez, what rock have I been hiding under that I didn't see this chapter posted? I'm glad Seiko is dead; he was a monster to his own grandchild. Thankfully now that Kian woke up from his coma, they can both be safe from now on. I am curious what Daven's father has to do with the cube. Ok, on to the last chapter.
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I really hope Bailey can surprise Chris and his idiot cohorts when they go into the field. The football team should now realize the strength and endurance needed to work on all the apparatus and the floor mat. They should respect the gymnastics team instead of sneering them. Now that I'm all caught up, Mom, I need more!!!!
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Dodger, Wenmale's right; look at Banjo's paws. That should give you some idea on how big he'll get. I believe they stop growing at about a year, maybe a little after. I found this link on Google: http://goldendoodles.com/care/growth_chart.htm And this: http://dogtime.com/dog-breeds/goldendoodle#/slide/1
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Bailey's dad was wonderful when the coach at the last school wanted Bailey to quit the football team. Like, WTF? Thank God his father got him out of that bigoted school! Justin's being a great friend. I just hope Bailey can let him in someday soon. He needs a real friend he can talk to about anything. I've noticed in every chapter, there is at least one sentence with the word 'ripped' in it. Was that on purpose? lol
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My heart is just breaking for Bailey, but also for his mom. She's living in her memories of her husband, just like Bailey's doing. Bailey has so many wonderful memories of his dad, and he needs to keep all the medals and mementos that remind him of his father. One day he'll regret it if he gets rid of them now. Justin and the rest of the gymnastics team are wonderful -- trying to help Bailey and be there for him, and just welcoming him to the team the way they have. Bailey's lucky to have their support. Oh, I noticed a typo. At the beginning of the chapter, the coach is calling for Owen. He uses 'Chavez' for Owen, but then later on in the chapter, Owen is now 'Patterson'. Just thought you'd want to change it to either Chavez or Patterson.
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I really like reading Bailey's POV. I didn't catch on to the cutting either. It makes sense though. I can see him doing that (is that the 'it'?) to cope with his father's death. And maybe also deal with his mother's nastiness. So what happened that was so bad he can't stand being touched now? Is it the previous bullying in his last school? I'm looking forward to reading more about Bailey.
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Oh, Mom, I'm so far behind! I'm trying to play catch up. Now we know how Bailey beat Declan in push ups. I'm wondering if Bailey could have kicked Chris and Eric's ass that day they cornered him. He should have. I'm glad Declan wants to talk to Bailey. Declan seems like a good kid; he's just confused. He should do what's right though, and tell everyone Bailey won that contest fair and square.
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Yeah, I would take that out because your sister may get upset if she sees it. For all intents and purposes,she is your sister. Banjo is an adorable name! I wouldn't change it because he's used to that name, and you don't want to confuse him. Is he neutered yet? How old is he? Once he's past his puppy stage (and already neutered), he should calm down a bit. lol
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Dodger, this was absolutely hysterical! You are one funny dude! You have such a good sense of humor, I couldn't stop laughing! I just didn't understand the note in italics. What do you mean she's not your real sister, and no one is named Stardust?
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I agree with everyone who said Liam should have that eye looked at. And his head! The way the punch was described, his eye got the whole impact. Good for Liam for sticking up for himself. Even if he did taunt the asshole, hitting him was unforgivable. Pardon the play on words. The sorta play on words. And I say press charges!!!!!!!! Show that bigot that hate crimes are punishable, and there are consequences for his hate. Awesome chapter, Lit!
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Alek is a different person now, and I think Tim is right when he said if they had met for the first time now, their relationship would be completely different. It's very difficult to let go of old pain and the fear of being hurt again, but I give Liam a lot of credit for giving Alek a second chance. Even if they start out as friends, it's worth a shot, right?
