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That Amanda! I wonder what her father would say if he heard her degrade Gibby that way. What a bitch. How could anyone see anything in her? And of course Ethan probably ran to Amanda to find out wtf happened with her and Tanner, and she most likely spun him a tale of how Tanner came on to her or some shit like that. And Mike just wanted to start a fight by even bringing it up. Poor Tanner. Oh yeah, I also wonder what dearest Principal Gray would have to say if he knew his darling daughter was stealing exam answers and cheating? Would love to find out! Another awesome chapter KC. Just annoyed I have to wait another week for more! That's just proof of your awesome writing talents!

Well at least Daniel wasn't an ass this time! I definitely don't like what Richie is doing to Terry. All he's doing is avoiding Terry and they really need to find out what's wrong. Good chapter BiggestFan; looking forward to more!

Ah, poor Mark. He had to go and crash into someone. And pass out. That's pretty embarrassing! lol Luckily he crashed into a cute guy....who wants a date. I thought they were only in boarding school. Are they even old enough to buy beer? I thought they were sixteen? I did have some constructive crit though: when you have dialogue, and one person is talking, keep their dialogue on the same line. Don't skip a line and then have them speak again when the other person hasn't spoken. It's confusing. For example: Geez Maisie, cool it, will you!” “I’m fine. Just tripped or something, I don’t know.” But I did. “Memory’s a bit foggy.” But it wasn’t. I remember it all too well, but I just can’t bear thinking how big of dork I was. Crashing into a guy twice is not at all cute..... This all could have been in the same line b/c Mark was the one speaking. When I read it, I thought he said one line and then Maisie said another line, etc., but I was wrong. Also, the same holds true in this example: “What is up with you and ‘sorries’?” “Look. If you want to apologize that bad, then buy me a beer.” He smiled and I could swear I saw this faint pinking in his cheeks. “Then we’re even. This was all spoken by Paolo, but it should have been all in the same line structure, not three separate lines. Do you know what I mean? Anyway, enough of the English lesson. It was a great chapter and I look forward to the next one!

Gahhhh, I was so psyched to read about Jordan and Shawn hitting it off, and YOU ENDED IT!!!!! lol Guess I have to wait for the next chapter. Hey, Jordan should work for the "Lie to Me" people; he's good at reading people and their lies. This chapter made me wish my state wasn't a no-fault state.... Anyway, it was good that Trent opened up; at least he gave Jordan hope that there's life after being cheated on. It'll take time, but Jordan will get there. And in the meantime, he has his pooch. lol

Ha! Finally we're back to Jace and Merry! Glad they finally go together. Surprising that now Merry is a nympho! lol So, what was with the other chapters? How do they relate to the story?

Ugh, I have such a bad feeling about this. Did Chris's father think he was going to meet with David to convince David to break up with Chris? How did he die? We don't know that yet, do we? Maybe I just don't remember.....Shit, I hope he didn't have a heart attack in David's office. Omg...and David has to tell Chris all this and they both have to re-live it. On a positive note: it's great that Chris is letting David be a bit more affectionate w/him, and he feels positive things b/c of this (the butterflies in his stomach, etc.) Great chapter Kim! You always leave me wanting more!

Great story Marky! Loved the plug for Comicality! Too funny! lol I love Jo; she is just too cool. I'm glad Mark found a friend so far away from home. I look forward to the next chapter.

KC, I think Amanda's gonna win villainess (doesn't look like it's spelled right, but it is, lol) of the year in the next GA contest! What a BITCH! Good for Gibby for telling the principal something he already knows. And the principal; what a wuss. Amanda has him wrapped around her fingers also, along with Ethan and probably her female entourage. I think Daddy Dearest is afraid of his little terror. She must be horrible at home. She obviously had no discipline growing up and got everything handed to her on a sliver platter. She expects everyone to bow down to her. Incredible. Good for Tanner for not giving in to her demands. And what were on the strips of paper? Some game and he has to choose a strip of paper and do what's it says? I also like the way Gibby sent in his laundry demands for her. I bet she does something to the jacket though. And Ethan.....Christ, grow a pair! Tell that bitch she can damn well wait for him and when he's good and ready he'll take her home. If not, her legs still work, don't they? Shit, talk about pussy-whipped! Another great chapter KC; too short though!

Now that I'm all teary eyed at 6 a.m., I gotta get the kids up..... This was a beautiful story. Jerry should be smiling down from Heaven blessed that he was so loved by his family. They all had such wonderful memories of him. It's also so beautiful that the siblings and spouse (s) are all their to support their mom and to support each other. We should all be loved like that. =)

Foreshadowing, hmmmm....I got chills when Matthew turned around to look at his house again, getting a strange feeling he wouldn't see it again. Let's see, oh yeah, when Bill thought that Sarah's was taking deep breaths or something in between her apology, but then he put it at the back of his mind. Oh, and the Orlando boys, are they up to no good? Are they gonna corrupt these kids when they visit the nudist camp? lol So...where the heck is Sarah and why did Bill cook dinner and no one mentioned Sarah? Is she in her room? Or did she take off somewhere? She really is a witch! Sorry, but seriously, screaming at the top of her lungs for her husband to get his fucking ass down here now, omg, if I ever talked to my ex like that! Oh shit! lol She's a bitch, but Bill, omg, those boys are so damn lucky they have him. He's so loving and understanding and GENEROUS. Not just about giving them all money for the mall, but b/c he's considering Kyle and Nicolas as family. He's just wonderful. Well, I hope that Sarah didn't do something stupid and selfish to get back at her family. I just have a bad feeling about her... Which means that I'm really anxious for the next chapter! lol

Wow, I feel so bad for Oscar. Jean a shrewd one, hm? I wonder what other boys he's gotten in trouble? Maybe the teacher's son perhaps? lol Oscar's parents are horrible. His father is going to "beat the sissy" out of him. They're more concerned with the fact that their son let himself be seduced, rather then upset that he got in trouble at school and suspended for a week? I think their priorities are a tad screwed up. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder if Jean will feel guilty the next time he sees Oscar all bruised? I hope we don't have to wait another sixteen months for the next update! lol

This whole chapter proves how brave Jordan is. Even with his pain, he was able to call Mitch, arrange for him to take his shit, and make lists of things he wanted changed in the house. I'm amazed he didn't just fall apart. And Mitch, what an asshole! The guy he was cheating with was cheating on his wife! A wife he said he wouldn't leave! So that means that Mitch and this guy actually HAD A CONVERSATION ABOUT IT!!!! Jesus, how many times were they doing this????? He's a piece of work Mitch is, expecting Jordan to just take him back with open arms. Suggesting that JORDAN is the one who's throwing away what they had. What an ass. But Jordan's emotions are totally understandable. First he feels the anger and hurt, but then he still feels the love. You can't just turn a switch to stop loving someone. He'll love Mitch for quite awhile I'm sure. But as he said: he can never trust him again. Excellent chapter in capturing all the emotions one goes thru when something like this happens to them. Looking forward to the next chapter. =)

Awww, I'm proud of Jon for talking to his dad and apologizing for his past behavior. Although it is certainly understandable, it's good that he realizes how he was acting. It's definitely a step in the right direction that he wants to be happy and actually have friends and not be a recluse. Hopefully Peter and Jon can be friends and support each other. It seemed like Peter was holding something back in his explanation of their move. Great chapter Caffled; looking forward to more!

You know, the more I think about this, the more it seems like the mother just took off w/Alex w/out his father's consent. Also, I think the way she lets her new husband talk about her child the way he does is unforgivable. When he made fun of Alex's shyness, by her not calling him on it and telling him he can't speak about her child like that, she is agreeing with him. Even if she doesn't agree with him, she should never let him speak negatively about her son. Now Alex probably thinks there is something really wrong with his head if his mother isn't correcting his step-father. Anyway, I was just thinking all of this after I added my review! Sorry! Looking forward to more! =)

Love your new story Owl! I was crying right along with Jeremy and Alex when Alex had to leave. I feel so bad for Alex; he really needs a friend. His step-father is not half as nice as his uncle, and his mom sounds like a witch. I hope that's not the last they see of each other. Oh, and I commend you on the continuity of Jeremy's speech impediment. It must have been hard to be so aware of that every time you wrote his dialogue! lol And that observation that James had when he saw the kids cuddled up; I don't think at age six, parents would really be thinking that their kid shouldn't be so touchy-feely with their cousin. He is only six after all. Anyway, love the story; can't wait for chapter two! =)

I mean to add to my comment where Josh said that Terry can't be gay b/c all the ladies are after him. I guess Josh never heard of Rock Hudson, Ricky Martin, Randy Harrison, lol? hahaah

Josh is an idiot. Daniel is an idiot. I don't know who's the bigger idiot. "Now of course you aren't gay considering the effect you have on the ladies." WTF????? That is the stupidiest comment I think I've ever read! I reiterate: Josh is an idiot. Daniel is just acting like a douchebag. I understand he's majorly crushing on Terry, but his brashness and nastiness is uncalled for. That last comment where he said he didn't know "you people" can fall in love and stay together, or some such nonsense just had my jaw gaping open! What an ass. I have no idea how Daniel is gonna be able to redeem himself now. If I were Terry I would have quit with a stern F.U. lol

Shit! Yeah, I meant AUSTIN needs to learn some self-defense! lol Sorry. And chapter three will be finished soon!

Omg, Ethan proudly bringing his potty chair into the bedroom was hysterical! Well, thank God it was only pee Christian had to clean up! lol And I really liked the way Christian handled the oatmeal situation. Sometimes I wish I could start all over w/my three and get it right this time! lol Anyway, the little "monsters" are adorable and I can't wait to read more about them! =) I'm glad Christian seems to be "crushing" a bit on David. That's a great start to coming to terms w/being gay. And the whole scene w/Taggert and Jimmy was terrific; I felt the love that all three had for Christian. I anxiously await the next chapter to see what tragic thing David's been hiding.....

Holy shit! I've been at the edge of my seat since the beginning of the chapter! Boy do you know how to write suspense! lol I don't know what rock I crawled out from, but I totally missed the chapter before this one! Now I have so many questions. lol And poor Jason; he better live! Looking foward to the next awesome chapter J! =)

Ugh, the chapter ended before Caleb met Knox! Damn you! lol That whole scene in the cafeteria was like surreal. Did Knox see something in the way Caleb was looking at Avery when she asked him to go shopping w/her? Is that why he stepped in? That was rather odd, since they don't speak really and hang out together. And Carson. I bet Avery tells her what's going on with her and Caleb. I bet Carson watches Caleb way too much now and has figured everything out. Of course little Jakey is totally oblivious. lol I feel so bad for Caleb; it's like his life is unraveling thread by thread and he's too numb to do anything about it. Can't wait to find out what the deal with Knox is! Oh, and I gotta check out your new story! hahah

Bitch-slap Amanda, tar and feather her and tie her to a post in the middle of the school yard, naked, (already tarred and feathered, mind you) to humiliate her, see if she likes it! The bitch! lol But no....no one would do that b/c omg, she's the principal's daugher. She must be exempt from any abuse. Too bad. She needs to be knocked down a few pegs there. I wonder if anyone will come to Gibby's rescue. I would like it to be Tanner, but will he leave the safe confines of the popular table to help the new kid who the bitch of said popular table threw the pudding at? (ha, did that even make sense? lol) I wish Shelby was there; she seemed pretty cool and a good person to vent to. Great job KC, anxiously awaiting Monday's installment.

Hey, there's a limit to how many "likes" you press? WTF's up with that? That doesn't make any sense! I feel so bad for Jordan. He will relive that horrid picture in his mind for a long time to come. And the tears will take even longer to dry up. And his trust will be totally shot. It will take him a very long time to trust any guy again. I agree w/Intune: I'm curious to know what Mitch could possibly say to justify his infidelity. He's a bastard who should burn in hell. There, I've said my peace. lol Great writing Renee; very emotional, very heartfelt and realistic. I look forward to the next chapter.

Wow this was an intense chapter. I'm glad Andy finally was able to put his mom to rest. Funny, no matter how old you are, when you lose your mom, it's like part of you dies too. And no matter how old you are, you still miss your mom. And poor Andy had to lose his mom at such an early age. I'm concerned about the trial for Joey's "parents". I use that term loosely. lol The judge already ruled about bail, so why should he give a fuck if the Adams' can't afford it? It's their problem, not the Judge's. Judge Whitt should just lock 'em up and throw away the key. Oh, and why wasn't Andy's dad there at the trial? Shouldn't he have been there since he's the "foster" family? Another great chapter Billy! Looking forward to more!

Gee, where have I read this before? lol Glad you're posting here; I kinda hate emailing people. =) But there wasn't a prologue at the other site.....