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Interesting two chapters. Of course being computer challenged, the whole explaination from the marshal about how Weiss hacked into Dean's router and used it to do his encryptions, and the whole hard drive back-up, trebyte (or whatever that word was, lol), totally had me stumped! lol It's too bad they haven't figured out who killed him. I mean, they didn't even figure out who shot at Dean, did they? Even though the guy was lying right there, dead. Oh, and I was also thinking what Dean was thinking about his 'porn viewing' when the marshal took his computer. lol The U.S. Marshal Service will certainly be in for a treat! lol Nice chapter about Turkey Day. Dean can certainly be a kept man; he's dating money. hahah Looking forward to reading more.

Hey Owl! Loved the last chapter! It had me crying, it had me laughing, it had me crying again. That whole tragedy with Jeremy's dad and his childhood friend was so sad. I love Jeremy's parents; they're so supportive and intuitive, especially Beth. I also commend you on handling the quasi-cousin situation very well. By mentioning that Alex's mom was never really married to Ron, then that leaves Alex and Jeremy to carry on a relationship and not worry that they're related. Not that they were blood related anyway; that would have been really, I don't know, what's the word? Icky. lol And gross. But you handled it beautifully. I was a tad confused about the timeline though. I know Jeremy and Alex were four years apart in age. But when Alex left that last time when Jeremy was eleven (in the summer) and he came back two years later, Jeremy should have been 13 and a half, not fifteen. And then all of a sudden in the same year Jeremy's sixteen? Maybe I need to re-read it, but I was certain there was an age discrepancy somewhere in the chapter. At any rate, it was a fantastic story! I'm sad to see the end of the boys, but I look forward to your unfinished stories being updated. Hey, I think Indiana Summer started last summer! lol (Hint, hint)

Your words never cease to amaze me. Almost finished with my box of Kleenex. The whole confrontation with Matt and Andy reminded me of the time on the beach when Andy was such a fucking idiot and never saw what he was doing. At least this time he sees it and he's willing to fix it. Andy needs to learn to keep his mouth shut. I can understand how scared he was thinking that Julie would make Matt choose between them. But what Matt said about him being willing to let her go no matter how much he loved her, because he will never give up his love for Andy was just so beautiful and so powerful. I'll tell you; Andy sure makes people feel things they would never feel for some other guy. Matt, Trey, lol. Trey's 'confession' for lack of a better word when he told Andy he was staying put the next year and how he didn't want to lose Andy and how close he feels towards him, that was an emotionally great scene also. And I still don't understand if Andy and Matt are so in love with each other, why would they want a female to marry? Why can't they just be together? I don't get that. They love each other so much and they wouldn't let anyone come between them (well, at least Matt, haha), why would they even need a woman? And as I reach the end of each chapter, I'm always thinking of the prologue, which of course I'm really nervous about. So kudos to you agan Adam for crafting such a fantastic story full of humor, love and emotional turmoil. One of the best stories I've ever read. Can't wait for the next update. Andy better get his shit together! =)

It's only 8:20 in the morning and I've already filled my quota of likes for the day. Is that crazy shit or what? I only read two stories so far....oh wait. I guess if you're still logged on after midnight it counts for that day too. Oh well. Sorry, I tried to hit the like button....so what's up with you're only allowed a certain amount of likes? That's just stupid. Anyway...on to the story. Wow. So did not expect that from Jake. And me thinkith he denies it too much. "I'm not gay." How many times is he gonna say it? Until he convinces himself? lol Wow, Jake, who woulda thought? So Caleb got his first kiss, and wow, what a kiss it was! lol But even though he really liked it with Jake, deep down he knows he wants his next kiss to be w/Knox, right? Well, I wonder if Jake will mention to Carson that she was right. Without telling her about the kiss of course. I'm actually really proud of Caleb for not denying anything to Jake. And wait. Jake told him he was very special. Wow. I can't think of anything but 'wow' this morning! lol I cannot wait until the party! I'm dying to know what happens next! This was another awesome, angsty chapter furnised! You are the master of the angst!

Oh poor Allen. On top of being raped, now he has to deal with his homophobic parents. Even though Matt wasn't suspended, Allen still isn't safe from Kyle. All Kyle has to do is grab Allen after school while Matt's serving detention. Oh, and I noticed you wrote forth period instead of fourth. It was the first time fourth period was mentioned. Anyway, great chapter itari; very suspenseful!

I think Dean's going to have a good time in college. His rommates seem really chill. I wonder if being so far apart will hurt Dean's relationship with John? And it's really odd that the FBI couldn't come up with the identity to the guy those cops shot. Really weird. Great two chapters Daddy; looking forward to more!

Krista! You're back! lol Poor Trouble! Corey didn't even feed or walk the poor thing. hahah I know, I shouldn't be focused on the puppy. But damn, that kiss. What's with Clnton taking off for the kitchen and just distancing himself from Corey? And why is Corey letting him? And what's with all the C names for the boys? lol Corey, Clinton, CJ? Oh, and Corey's dad is such an ass! I can't believe his mom would let him talk to him like that! He's not allowed to come home b/c he's hanging with a friend? Seriously? This guy needs a jolt of reality! And his mom's ok with this??? Great chapter Krista! Hope the next one is quicker!

Awww, Sadie is so cute! She seems to be very well trained. I hope they bought her food also. As well as chew toys and dog treats. Hopefully she and Max will get along well. Great chapter Daddy; looking foward to finding out who the shooter was.

One more chapter to go! This story is so exciting! Who the hell wants Dean dead? Was it the next door neighbor cops that called Dean to warn him? I just wanted to point out a few errors: gymn is spelled gym, succesion is succession and flippid is flipped. Also, I noticed in a few chapters that sometimes you have the dialogue of two people in the same paragraph. You should always separate the dialogue of the different people. This is such a great story! Ok, on to chapter 12!

I just found this story and am up to chapter six. It's so intriguing and has me wondering if anything else will come of Bruno's death. I was also wondering, since it was never mentioned, that how would Bruno know what Dean's room looked like? If Dean's room overlooked Bruno's dining room, then Dean was looking down into his neighbor's dining room. Unless of course Dean's bedroom is on the first floor. Shit, never thought of that. But even so, Bruno must have known the set-up in Dean's bedroom b/c he shot the bullet right in the paperback books like he was planning. So he knew exactly where the books where in relation to Dean's bed and he knew he wouldn't make a mistake and shoot Dean by accident. But how could he know how Dean's bedroom was set up? And wow, what a guy Bruno was! He set up this whole trust fund thing with college and all that money for Dean. That's amazing considering he barely spoke to the kid. Wow, wish I had a neighbor like that. lol Oh, I noticed a mistake or discrepancy. You mentioned John picked Dean and his mom up at 10:30 to go visit the IU campus which was at least an hour and a half away. They got there early enough to look around before his eleven a.m. appointment with the Dean of Admissions. That's impossible. They must have had to leave the house at 9:30 at the very latest, not 10:30. Unless John drove like Mario Andretti. lol Ok, onto chapter 7!

Awwww, thanks for the shout-out Marky! I'll beta for you if you want. It seems like you're not crazy with your updating schedule, so I can handle that! lol Although I only noticed two things I would change in the chapter. But yeah, if you want me to look the chapters over before you post them, just shoot me an email with the attached chapter. My email is in my profile page. Anyway, back to the review: great chapter Marky! I really enjoyed it! I really like Paolo; he's shy, but not too shy, know what I mean? And I'm proud of Mark for not denying who he is. I feel bad for Paolo; he's getting so emotional. I hope Mark can cheer him up. It seems like he really needs someone to talk to. It reminds me of Days of Our Lives; I started to watch the Will/Sonny storyline on YouTube and boy poor Will definitely needs someone he can talk to. Anyway, email me if you want me to proof the chapters!

Omg Renee, I was laughing so hard about the doggie door! I've done the same thing, except I'm putting my two dogs IN the house like by the front door and then I get in my car to leave and they come bounding out the doggie door which I of course forgot to close! lol And man, Shawn's mother is a piece of work. Using your child as a pawn in your game is despicable. Thank God he and his dad are rid of her. What a bitch. Awesome chapter Renee. Glad Jordan and Shawn are getting closer.

Yeah, you better hide under your bed! I'm looking under the white pages for your address as we speak, err, write. lol What a cliffie! Omg, Amanda is psycho! She stole her father's gun for Christ's sakes! AND CARRIED IT WITH HER ALL DAY IN SCHOOL!!!!! Shit, don't they have like detectors or something? I thought all schools are supposed to have that now since Columbine? What a scary thought of her going bonkers in the middle of the hallways, waving the loaded gun around! It's also scary that she even knew where the safety was! lol And Ethan, get a brain you moron! Tanner is your best friend. Jesus, let him try to explain himself. Why are you believing your psycho g/f? Jesus, I just wanna smack him upside his head! Hmf. Maybe Jonathan and Gibby will pass Tanner on the way to the mall. One can only hope. Ok, counting down the days until next week. Shit, it's too long of a wait! Awesome chapter KC! Have a great Memorial Day and omg, wait, I have an address....(getting in my car/plane now) lol......

Well, brothers will be brothers. And friends of brothers will be friends of brothers. lol The boys were cute when they tried to tickle Kyle and Jacob. Too bad K&J one-upped them. hahah Matthew's line, "Uh huh. now be vewy, vewy quiet, we're hunting wabbits." was hysterical! Had me laughing so hard even the second time around! lol Can't wait for the next chapter and their adventure into nudism. heheh

Ah, you're finally back! I really like this story. I'm nervous about Kyle; he seems like a loose cannon and we already know he's a psycho. I hope he doesn't grab Allen when Matt is around. Oh, and Allen never looked at the note that fell out of his locker...hmmm, bet it was from Kyle. Oh and Matt's mom's name is Eliz, not Rebecca. lol

Wow, two chapters in one day! I know a year isn't a whole lot of time to go out and start living again. I actually don't think Scott will be able to see anyone romantically until he speaks with someone. He needs to feel in his heart that he CAN let go. He knows deep down that Steve would want him to move on. But he has to feel ready. A year may not be enough time. Two years may not be. But he needs to work on it. I'm looking forward to his meeting with the therapist next week. I think Noah was pretty cool, ok, no, he was hot. lol But he had no idea what Scott had been thru; Scott needs to give him some slack. He should at least feel flattered! Great two chapters Fitz! =)

Oh man, now Ethan has some sucking up to do! No, not Amanda; Tanner! He needs to apologize to him. And his teammates for losing the game FOR NOTHING! lol But yeah, he's only human. I'd do the same thing and jump to conclusions before finding out the truth. And Amanda, now is she with Ethan for Ethan, or just b/c he's the quarterback? What a user. I liked the scene with Gibby and his dad, but especially the scene in the pool with Tanner. Tanner seems like such a nice kid. Totally different from his buddies. And yes, you are a tease! lol Looking forward to Monday. Well, not really wanting to rush the weekend, but yeah....

Can you believe Mitch?! What an asshole! Can we try again; is he on crack? He must be b/c he's delusional! Oh yeah, let's give the sucker Jordan another shot to be humiliated! What an ass. I'm sure the kiss was more than just a "save". Too bad Jordan didn't stick around to hear Shawn's explanation. Great chapter Renee. I'm looking forward to more.

Well I guess Oscar now knows who his real friends are (even if he just made them,lol). His other 'friends' weren't friends at all. Especially since they didn't even let him explain anything. They already condemned him before he got a word in. Great chapter James. I'm looking forward to more. Oh, I wanted to point out one typo: waived is waved. Unless it's different in England. =)

Hey furnished! Congrats on your graduation! This chapter had so much in it. I want to cry. My heart is breaking for Caleb. Your writing is just so beautiful; the way you talk about Caleb's feelings and how everything is converging and it's getting out of his control and his friends are worried about him; it's all so real. He really needs to tell his mom something. He really needs to talk to someone other than his sister about this. A therapist would be nice. Some meds may be even better. He does talk like he's suffering from depression. I wish I could just hug him. lol I'm surprised Caleb's mom didn't push him to talk more. But of course she knows something's wrong. Us moms know these things. And of course b/c Carson called and probably just added to Caleb's mom's worrying. Well now that you're a graduate hopefully the next chapter will be out quick! =)

Ok, Jacob is a sick, controlling bastard. Jeremy needs to get the fuck out of there before Jacob kills him. And why is Jeremy not in the hospital? Jacob must have broken many body parts, hitting him with that rod. Isn't there anyone Jeremy can stay with for awhile? Tiara? Chris? Anyone at all? He needs to get out of there before Jacob kills him. Jacob is an unstable psycho who should be locked up. Looking forward to the next installment!

Holy shit! I'm at the edge of my seat! Who's coming for Derek? Gordon? Great writing J; can't wait to see how this plays out! =)

You give so much wonderful detail I feel I'm right there besides Jon. Luckily I'm not, otherwise I'd never make it back to the headmaster's office. lol I would definitely need my own GPS to get me from building to building. I'm already of wary of Ellis and I hope he doesn't make trouble for poor Jon. That's all he needs. Awesome chapter as usual Caffled!

Ah finally an update on one of my favorite stories! Poor Lucca having to re-live such a horrible time in his life right before his eighteenth birthday. He's so lucky to have Addie. I'm glad how Lucca and Sam's relationship is progressing. I still think he needs some sort of closure from Matt though. And of course I can't wait to read about Jeremey's disclosure about Matt. (Lucca will find out, won't he?) Great chapter as usual in...hopefully the next chapter will be out sooner?

Wow, no wonder Chris is blocking out his relationship with David and his father's death. One of his defense mechanisms kicked in to protect himself from remembering that tragic part of his past. He can remember his father, but not David or his father's part in his relationship. It's obviously too painful for him to remember so his brain blocks it out. On the plus side, him and David can certainly make new memories, like they just did. lol I'm looking foward to their night out at David's company event, and I'm curious what Taggert is going to bring up. Great chapter Kim!