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  1. Thanks, Parker. I deliberately left Casey's sister as a shadow figure, a question mark. I appreciate the review.
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    Up In Flames

    Glad you liked the chapter name, but I'm not gonna comment on the future for Casey. No spoilers here. Sorry. hehe
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    Slither

    I'm kinda new to creative writing. Business writing taught me to express myself succinctly, so I really have to work hard to fill a page. It's good to read that I still got the idea across. Thanks for reading, and for leaving a review.
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    Let Me Start Over

    No comment on future chapters. lol. Thanks for the comments.
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    Friends

    Thanks for the review. I'm really glad you're liking the story.
  6. Better late than never, Parker. Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
  7. Hi Lisa. I sent you a PM. It's too long for a reply to a review. I may post it as a blog entry.
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    Friends

    Friends Mary asked Sam, “What’s up with James lately? He acts like he just lost his puppy or something.” They were walking to class and Sam was carrying her books. “Babe, I wish I knew for sure, but I think it’s got something to do with Casey.” He shifted the books to his other arm. “When I mentioned going to see him yesterday, James didn’t say a word. I know they’re friends – they say hi in the hallway, but it’s as if James doesn’t want to let Casey get any closer.” “Well, is there any
  9. Running Round in Circles James got the locker open on the third try, and changed out the books in his pack, so he could go home directly after gym. “Chem, algebra, Gatsby. God, Gatsby sucks… Aaaaaurgh!” James spun around, his fist doubled up and drawn back, ready to strike. Then he saw who it was. “Sam, what the fuck is your problem?! You know I’m ticklish.” Sam had walked up behind James and stuck his thumb in James’ ribs. Behind him and a little bit to the side was a pretty girl with red hai
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    Thirsty

    Thanks, Lisa. If you haven't already, I recommend reading chapters 7-10. There's new material in there, and sequence of chapters is different.
  11. reminds me of some guys I've known no concept of relative size
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    Lightfoot

    I hope the new edit and new chapters smooth the story for you.
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    Slither

    I got you beat on late responses, buddy. lol Yaupon holly (ilex vomitoria) is a native holly here. The berries are an emetic.
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    Slither

    Again, sorry to be so late replying. Thanks for taking the time to comment.
  15. Sorry to be so late in replying. Thanks for the review. Strange things happen everywhere. I hope you'll enjoy future chapters.
  16. Thanks. I fell in love with these characters - all of them. I'm glad others enjoy them, too.
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    Up In Flames

    Thanks. Sorry, I just noticed the review. Yep, life IS a crap shoot.
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    Fairview

    I really wanted the reader to feel some of what I feel in a cemetery. There's sadness, of course, but all the rest of life, distilled down, as well.
  19. rustle

    Chapter 1

    Thanks for reading and commenting. These days, I prefer a kayak, but they don't have many gators in central Texas. I miss 'em. If this trip hadn't affected me so much, I probably would've never written anything, but that weekend left its marks - mostly good. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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    Thirsty

    Thirsty He reached down slowly and picked up the arrow that had fallen, careful not to make a sound or lose sight of him. Nock and draw, his new take-down bow wasn’t as powerful as the compound bow he left at home, but from forty feet, it wouldn’t matter. In less than one breath, smooth and unhurried, he released. As the bowstring sang and faded, he watched the bobcat go down, twitch twice, and lie still. James stood, nocked another arrow, and slowly circled toward the cat, never taking hi
  21. Hi Patrick, welcome to GA. Finding a partner is like finding a job. It takes work, and networking is your best strategy. Online communities may help some. Finding a discussion group that shares one of your interests, or an organization affiliated with your career wouldn't hurt. Especially if they meet in a nearby city, so you could visit the city and meet up with folks. Lots of couples now meet online. Somebody suggested the best way to meet a companion is to do the things you enjoy, and see who enjoys them with you. At least, you'll start out with something in common. Good luck and good hunting!
  22. Is it just me, or did that last question sound fishy?
  23. Ever had a funny feeling...? Pay attention to it.
  24. He's in bed asleep. What's your favorite Halloween costume you've ever worn?
  25. "in order to help them understand me quickly" In certain situations, it makes things a lot simpler, and answers the question at hand. If I say gay, it shuts down phobic rants.
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