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David is adapting to new routines and visitors so it would seem... Sassafras is a tree with three distinctly shaped leaves and is also used to flavor soda in some locals...
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Uhhh...Troy....what happened to minding the food??? Gay. Troy is actually gay. Suddenly I started flipping the fuck out. "I got to take a piss." I fumbled onto my feet. "I'll mind your food," he said with another cheeky smile. Legging it out of there I spent five minutes in the restroom thinking up an excuse to ditch him. After rearranging my new boner I stepped out and noticed Troy was gone.
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Admit it folks...we've all been there....no you dolts, you're keeping your clothes on....sheesh.... “OK, you caught me. The one time I went to a friend’s birthday party at a bowling alley, my first few rolls, someone guided me to the line and I rolled it between my legs. A few rounds later, after listening to everyone walk up and throw it, I tried that.” “Oh, that couldn’t have been be good.” “It wasn’t so bad. I knocked down seven pins.” “That is good.” “The problem was, they were in the next lane.”
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I'm not sure Jasper would be all that loquacious around Deidre as to his 'work' affairs...I don't think she's totally clueless, but wrapped up in how she views her life, as she thinks it should be... I'm not sold on Val and Marina change of heart unless there was/were another outside influence such as Noah's older brother.... Can't wait to see the fallout once Jasper and his cohorts are arrested and make the news...will that event force a change in Deidre's living situation???
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Or completely or willfully ignorant....
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And now the noose is beginning to slowly tighten as Arlo is still being chased!!!
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It may not of happened just the way that Max envisioned it but...he's found a form of freedom...unlike Conrad who wishes for the quick ending a vat of molten steel offers... As to Chris, is he a survivor, a coward, or something else???
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A sad reminder about just how far men can be pushed in a world of oppressive rules and morals....
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May CSR Feature: The Answer by Wayne Gray
drsawzall commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
This story is a true gem and a worthy inclusion in the Can't Stop Reading feature!!- 8 comments
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This short story manages to pack quite the powerful punch over the arc of our two protagonists' lives. This is a terrific read!!!
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As a fan of your writing, Bluegrass Symphony stands out most to me, I am surprised I missed this and now will go back to read more of your works. I though as others that both the story and the poem went hand in hand very well. That you were able to seamlessly move through the arc of their 'relationship' was so well done, and to me...this story stands on its own merits. I found the following line(s) to be very powerful... The most brilliant, wonderful smile lit Ian's face. "I'm in love with you. I have been almost from the start. You didn't ruin my life, Shawn." Ian rubbed a thumb across Shawn's cheek to wipe away a tear. "You were my choice. One that I have made over and over."
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Bryce constantly amazes me; in fact, the whole damned family does!!! What I can't remember, when did they gain another son?
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Act II - The Bitch Is Back
drsawzall commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - The Bitch Is Back
Where can I find 'bones' like that???? Gabriel’s fingers brushed Ray’s jaw as he helped him button his collar. “Next time you go as wolf, I’m actually buying the collar,” he murmured. Ray leaned in, brushing their noses together. “Only if I get to chew my favorite bone again.” And now we have some proof, we know from a past chapter the bitches, I mean the wart infested toad sucking leeches are slowly draining power from the wolves, and "mother'' says the magic words.... Ray's power does need to be studied, in the library, are there old, dusty tomes that that might/may hold clues??? What about the wolves that were chasing Ray at the beginning of this story, do we know/understand anything more about them??? -
Beyond all Misunderstandings
drsawzall commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Beyond all Misunderstandings
Danny and Ryder need, and I noted this in another story, no plan of battle survives first contact with the enemy....- 31 comments
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I have to concur, if the translation were to appear in parentheses just after, it would be so much better and not break up the flow of the story.
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As the estimable Ben Franklin noted...Beer is proof that God love us and wants us to be happy..... Go forth and be happy!!!
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Having worked in facilities management I can understand the need for on-going maintenance!!! Looks like a couple of busy weeks of traveling are coming up!!! Homework for year 2 students, it is almost too much to think of...I can remember in High School a teacher assigning a term paper over a school vacation week, just prior to that week. I had to tell him he needed to discuss with my parents as we were traveling...My father told him if he were better at his job, stunts such as this would be totally unnecessary....
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We'll give this a couple of chapters and see where it goes.
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Wow...simply did not see that coming
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There Is No Other Place I Wanna Be
drsawzall commented on Bry Bryant's story chapter in There Is No Other Place I Wanna Be
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Loved this chapter and seeing more of the kids!!!!
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Chapter 2 - New Friends
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 2 - New Friends
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Thank you for this chapter and in the manner, you addressed a difficult subject.
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Love the idea of a flaming zombie apocalypse, but the best laid plans of mice and men, not to mention that no plan of battle survives first contact....
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History belongs to the victors.....
