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Good Value for the Money
drsawzall commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Good Value for the Money
So it is a four slicer and built for bagels!!!!!! Vince...cream cheese and lox go on after you toast the bagels...😉 -
What a way to run a meeting geared towards saving humanity from the dark side....color me not impressed... Behind them, he heard Garran sigh resignedly. “Ewan, I need to fuel up before I leave again for Ironwood. Show me where the kitchens are. I don’t need to witness any more of whatever that was…” Ash, smirking triumphantly, pulled Desmond out into the hallway, whispering playfully, “Come on, let’s hurry. The catacombs can wait—just a little longer.”
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A Future for the Port Boy
drsawzall commented on Celian's story chapter in A Future for the Port Boy
So Remy is on the verge of freedom or being sold, if freed, where would he go, would there be a place for him, possibly upstairs, acting as a de facto majordomo??? If Remy were to leave, the house would fail to function.... -
Noah is a twin to the two-faced god Janus....what a sarmy prig, don't think for a moment Nick's mom doesn't know when she's being buttered up.... His back was half-turned toward me, the soft curve of his spine visible in the low light from the TV. My eyes tracked down to the waistband of his underwear and the shape of his legs stretching toward the edge of the mattress. I noted only the lightest dusting of dark brown hair covering his legs. And the bulge. Definitely the bulge. “Uh. Hi,” I said, as eloquently as I could. He looked over his shoulder, smirking. “It’s hot.” “It’s like sixty-eight degrees.” “Then I guess I’m hot.” Only in your mind Noah.... Why do I sense Jonah is going to be more than a bit player in this twisted, angst-filled, hormonal drama??? Jack needs to grab hold of what little of his sanity he can, remember he has testicles, and take a step forward for himself...I understand he's got issues and is in serious need of intensive professional help, but please, for the love of God, stop wallowing and take a shower without having to be reminded. It's like eating an elephant - one bite at a time.
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A move like this is bound to send shockwaves across Confederation space. You can bet there will be resentments. What will come of the hurt, angry feelings? Will his enemies strike back, plot a removal of Marc???
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Chapter 6: How Do You Feel?
drsawzall commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 6: How Do You Feel?
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I simply sense danger, rugby players aren't known for their 'finesse'....then there's this... ‘No way! You simply shouldn’t do it in a secretive way. Hire a model for a short photo session. You pay for it and promise that the photos won’t end up on internet.’ ‘More decent, but also more expensive. How about helping me find somebody?’ ‘Maybe I can,’ Alarik said reluctantly. ‘There were a couple of naked guys acting in Cliff’s latest movie.’ ‘Very good, but preferably no Moroccan or Turk. Not for any particular reason, but I don’t think the rugby guys would appreciate that.’ I am suspicious that Wolf is a conflicted gay person... Justin showed the photo of a man in his late twenties with a serious face, short hair and conspicuously muscular upper arms. His right hand was resting on his shoulder, his left hand on his right elbow, as if he was about to embrace himself. ‘I forwarded the photo to Wolf. He immediately wanted to know who this is.
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Would someone please terminate the F'ing rat.....
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The Tale of Two Little Reeds - Third Scroll
drsawzall commented on Page Scrawler's story chapter in The Tale of Two Little Reeds - Third Scroll
Very powerful imaging.... In silence, they sat like that—hands clasped, memory shared, the past no longer cold between them. Just a small space carved out of the dark, where voices could be safe. And heard. -
The simmering tension is building ever so slowly....
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Chapter 6: City of Paradise
drsawzall commented on Tomkin Watts's story chapter in Chapter 6: City of Paradise
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Lest we forget, there is still the issue of Elias and his status of being a political prisoner.....
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And therin lies the rub....or at least part of the truth.... Robin leaned forward then. "Another question must be asked. This sort of theft is not a casual thing. There needs to be a motivation. Are these Kawisps simply thieves, out for profit; or are their motivations more along a political line, aimed squarely at damaging your people?" All the Loturi looked uncomfortable at Robin's question. "I'd take that as a yes on the political option," Kippy said quietly. "It happened long ago," Anon said then. "A number of lifetimes, at least, for my people. The Kawisp are longer-lived than we, and their memories not so easily faded."
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And the training intensifies, does Richter feel his time is short?
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I think your best chapter yet, I could not stop or get distracted till I had finished. What if he had been looking at it all wrong? What if this woman’s gift was not an alternative to God’s power, but simply a channel for it—a strange, ancient, and unlabeled vessel that the Lord, in His infinite mystery, had chosen to fill? His fear had not vanished, but it was being overshadowed by something far more potent: a profound and unsettling awe. He was no longer certain where the boundaries of God’s mercy truly lay. Now...if only the illness that left Esteban could somehow find its way to the other priest...and work its magic in a short 24 hours....
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Sandy's Hearing and Thanksgiving
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Sandy's Hearing and Thanksgiving
Sandy's parents bear a portion of responsibility; there's no escaping that... Hopefully, Gavin fully comprehends the very narrow path he must tread... And Jeff...one can only hope he comes out of this unscathed... -
Don't tell me he's driving solo, clear the sidewalks, folks!!! Seriously, looking forward to this!!! Enjoyed this short very much, you are truly hitting your stride with these!!
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Oh no...will Ethan be ok??? After they ate Ethan A great chapter!!!
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But does he??? At least from his phone... Maybe the time had come for Kilroy to delete the group from his contacts, to wash his hands of that dark side of his life. **************************** Kilroy rose to his feet. Keeping busy was always the best way to quiet his mind. Sever the connection between professional and personal. Wasn’t that what he had always done? Have other members of this group used the hotel as well? If so, will the good doctor's name come up from a search of their phones?
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Completely forgot Jacob was making an appearance halfway thru..much to the laughing that was to the detriment of my supper....
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David's defacto deflowering was anything but romantic...still for a first time...pretty funny!
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From the frying pan to the fire...What do our heroes outside of Lauren truly know about Rikard...
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It would seem that both Lauren and Elias are/have been compromised...When does he find out who he is??? Love the following...
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The very first order of business is rooting out the spy and using whoever it is for their own ends... Second order of business is letting Elias know just who he is... Third order is finding a way to send a shiv up Evans backside...
