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  1. My reading list is growing!!!
  2. All I got is...WOW
  3. At least the boys are talking and hopefully the ground has been laid so there are fewer misunderstandings...
  4. drsawzall

    The Obsession

    It may never end... “Even better,” Coradiel added with an evil grin, “the nobles will want to thank us for our service. You wanted a reward? It’ll probably be five or six hours of talking to stuffy old family heads and trying to avoid being married off to their daughters or sons.” “Aw FUCK!”
  5. drsawzall

    Firestorm

    A true to life, fast paced story and very entertaining, thanks for sharing...
  6. Kellen is hiding something, one reason would be why he's an ass, another would be why he lost his magic, another would be that he's not all that, except when he looks at himself in a mirror... He truly is a passive/aggressive detestable A-Hole... And...he's comfortable using a phone, F'ing google it yourself....
  7. drsawzall

    Chapter 35

    It's such a huge, pun intended, for Calvin to consider. It's an irreversible decision as we all know that images on the 'net' live on in perpetuity... That he could get lost in the crowd of millions of images may/might be of some solace but...five, ten, twenty years down the road, could these images have a deleterious or harmful series of consequences?? At the end of the day, considering all the consequences Cal will need to make a decision that he can be comfortable with. Could he live with knowing his family could/might/may see him in the all-together, including images of him at erotic, seminal moments? It's one thing to desire to please one's lover/partner orally and anally, is that desire something you would wish to share with the known, free world??? Like drugs, the money is enticing...like drugs, delving just a wee bit invariably leads to more...with easy money for innocuous images, at what price does one give it all away? Then there is the 64-thousand-dollar question, is there a possibility of a relationship with Jordan, I certainly hope so, let's see what his reaction is to the 'harmless' swimwear photos....
  8. Once the boy's get over their shyness, I suspect the wheels just might fall off the proverbial wagon..... It would be interesting to see/read/hear nari's POV as well... Bring on the images!!
  9. An intriguing story, one that makes one wonder about the possibilities when we face up to our inner truths...
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 37

    Well...looks like there may be some company coming in the future!!!
  11. Could it be he's getting his info from the phone via a program similar/like Alexa or Waze??? It would be a hoot, or a howl, if Average Joe was his intended....
  12. I sense there might be an inevitable series of confrontations coming up, the attack that failed to kidnap Richter has set some larger forces in motion...much sooner than planned...
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 22

    Talk about putting my foot my cookies in my mouth....
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    Chapter 23

    Fantastic chapter, Marc needs time to process the events from the beginning. There are still many unanswered questions as well. As a warrior Marc has no peers, his strategies are first rate and now is the time to put those processes to resolving his personal issues. Some things were blown out of proportion, other issues had tragic results. With so much responsibility now Marc needs to delegate all that he can. Orders/commands/requests to those in his family who chose to operate independently need to be clearly understood moving forward... To me and my way of thinking, much of what's noted below still has questions to be answered... Warnings of the coming war that you have been secretly told you'll need to stop. An invasion force masquerading as pirates.
  15. Like @weinerdog how did he get the booze??? I can't completely blame Rod, his parents, however I specifically blame his father......
  16. Hopefully Candi and the wagon will show up...
  17. drsawzall

    Chapter 22

    Me hungry for the next chapter
  18. Wonder if they might happen across an audition for Idol....
  19. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    Looks like nothing is going to be easy.....
  20. drsawzall

    Guesses...

    Is there the slightest, remote chance that Claire and Brittany might be related??? What a sad commentary on this civilization.... "No, on the contrary. But my ma wasn't too happy about my decision not to follow the family tradition. My big sister is more made for it, but I..." She sighed again. "I really like the concept of our school, you know, a lot of it is very individualized and not mass processing, but there are still a lot of slaves. And many of them are just incredibly young and often not even mentally mature enough to serve in our current society. That creates a kind of pressure, not only on the slaves, but also heavily on the instructors, where I know I'm not up to."
  21. What is it that Qana isn't saying and how does it tie into Aether's comments??? Sounds like some high stake's skullduggery to me...
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 22

    Can't disagree with any of the comments above...however the following gives me pause for thought...I don't see the Fat Lady singing anytime soon...... “OK. Let’s work some movement in to this.” Ron moved over to the HoloTable and handed me the latest from the probe launch I requested. I scrolled down the info before handing the tablet back. “I know something is there. I can see its ghost, shadow, whatever you want to call it. But I can’t tell what it is.” Ron was looking at it, too. “Do you want to try to draw it out? Send a Wing in under cloak.” My hand pulled on my chin. “Maybe. Not sure if it would or not, but it would be great if they could get a visual on it.” I sighed. “Let’s try it.” Ron ran up a search pattern and showed it to me. “Yeah. Try it and let’s see what happens.” I tapped into the probes we had launched and pinged them a few times during the search pattern, and I was looking at the results as Ron watched the HoloTable. Nothing happened. I raised an eyebrow at Ron. “Thoughts?” He shrugged. “No idea and I checked with the Wing. They saw nothing on visual either.”
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 10

    Thank you for sharing this with us!!!
  24. drsawzall

    Chapter 36

    Wolf will be a protector and a great friend; Uncle Joe will be very pleased!!
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