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An Overnight, a Phone Call, and Assholes
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in An Overnight, a Phone Call, and Assholes
Well...if this wasn't a chapter full of omens portending future events.... So many detours this story can take... Jeff finds out about the gun; there isn't a snowball's chance in hell he stays on the straight and narrow this close to military school. This is after all a @Lee Wilson story... Pervy the Uncle is about to make an appearance...will he leave without any parts or pieces missing? @weinerdog, it ain't the size of the dog in the fight, it's the size of the fight in the dog, or at my age, that hopefully the dog can fight.... I don't think we've heard the last from the two members of the Junior Asshole Club, and possibly their parents...I think we'll find out that collectively, the grouping of younger and older, has an IQ aggregate of -40...and that's without any additional siblings to skew the Bell Curve even lower... My spidey sense keeps hearing that song, Lawyers, Guns, and Money.... -
Alan kissed a boy and he liked it...with apologies to Katie Perry.... Alan needs to own up to his decisions, when asked he had multiple chances to say no... I think a little soul-searching is in order... I worry he may try and pull a stunt at the photo shoot....it may just be my spidey sense but....
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Shifting Tides and Secret Missions.
drsawzall commented on E K Stokes's story chapter in Shifting Tides and Secret Missions.
Thanks for this, I had to augment what I thought I knew...who knew!!! The Romani/Gypsy have an amazing background and many cultural contributions... https://www.askdifference.com/romani-vs-gypsy/ -
One wonders if Kirk was Scandinavian cause he got a Viking send-off...
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I wonder if he could ever quit before his retirement...
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Can't disagree with any of the above comments, I can only imagine the horror idf either Val or Marina found a dildo belonging to Noah!! I enjoyed seeing more about the boys, it fleshes them out into three-dimensional characters...
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Ya think??? “Regardless, I don’t like this,” Coradiel said. “It feels like we’re picking fights for the sake of fighting. And I’m tired. We’ve been at war for days now, with no rest in sight. Risking life and limb. We achieved our goals-” Sounds like the rain is over, thank goodness... And...after this last mission, someone needs to plan a boinking extravaganza...
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Those playing with house money just may be a tad nervous...
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It would seem that a certain Lord Chancellor is quite smitten with his gracious dancing partner...
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Shifting Tides and Secret Missions.
drsawzall commented on E K Stokes's story chapter in Shifting Tides and Secret Missions.
Eitenne is quickly learning that appearances can be quite deceiving...that most folks aren't what they appear to be, as others have noted, how did the Cardinal know of his association with Charles?? I suspect that there may be issues/trouble with traveling with the gypsies...Who among them knows of the sudden reason for his appearing just before they set off? -
Nothing in life is free; every action comes at a cost. Hubris isn't part of Troy's makeup. What will he do when he runs into someone who's a bit stronger and wants what is his???? I beat the system and managed to take what's mine. There's a reason that Las Vegas is so inordinately stunning, the house always wins....
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Wow....not sure what to say, a reversible vasectomy seems to be a bit much, but then again it might be for the best...
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Let's hope the trip for the girls isn't unexpectedly cut short halfway thru....what are the odds???
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If Scarlet the Bald can't slaughter the council, perhaps turn 'em into ugly toads infested with puss-filled warts...cursed to spend the remainder of their lives next to the Koi pond... Somehow, some way, this council needs to be taken down a peg or thirty...Kings rule, councils advise, and hope it is taken as intended... I have to think the big lie in all of this was the feeble reason given for the Ironwood Legion's "reluctance", something is amiss in all of this, and it is more than the leader hating humans... Danger Will Robinson...Danger...something smells like bullshite.... The main body of our military comes from another settlement, far to the north—the Ironwood Legion. They are… fiercely independent, and have grown dissatisfied since we chose to support you and Prince Rory. Their own ruler—a man with little love for humans—has called the warriors back, and communications have been strained at best.”
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All we can pray for is...
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We may have to table any further comment from @weinerdog on the grounds of repetitiveness... Thanks for this!!!
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More Legalese, and Back To the Boys
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Legalese, and Back To the Boys
More importantly, have you had your weekly shower yet @Ticklishboy30? Depends whether it's stiff and crusty from over use. Now...what the heck was my original comment gonna be??? -
Very intriguing to say the least…what will be the fate of this unborn child, the Black Oak?
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Insert the theme from Jaws here….
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The Night With Mr. Maddox (Finale)
drsawzall commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in The Night With Mr. Maddox (Finale)
Note to self, should not have read this in the doctor’s waiting room…. -
Aiden certainly surprised Will with the painting and the little speech at Thanksgiving...Catlin bought some grace at the dinner table by refusing the wine, but she's not completely in the clear. Asher is not hiding his feelings. Will he erupt at some point? As to Joey, Elvis named it!!! Don't ask me why, but Aiden sorta sticks out at the moment...
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Pudge and Prejudice: The Sockrifice
drsawzall commented on Inkognito's story chapter in Pudge and Prejudice: The Sockrifice
Simply fantastic and enjoyable...loved the following... “It was a symbol,” Ryan said flatly. “Of order. Of peace. Of me not being emotionally harassed by a loaf with legs.” Lee joined them. “You should write your next essay about this. A metaphor for inevitability. Cyclical loss. The entropy of textiles.” “I’m going to write a revenge thriller,” Ryan muttered. “Pudge: Blood on the Dryer Door.” Elton snorted once. Jack nodded solemnly. “He accepts your offering.” Ryan buried his face in his hands. “He’s not a god, you guys. He’s a sock-eating pug with IBS.” -
But can you keep it??? This is what I've always wanted.
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Gray is busy & Vince is more open
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Gray is busy & Vince is more open
Could not have said it any better!!! Freddie had me in stiches with the following... But sufficiently in tune to keep his thoughts private, besides”, Vince grinned, “wife number three is half his age and nothing to be proud of.” Except her t*ts and they’re not real... So, Vince has found that the land out behind the house has some form of planning permission, if marketed correctly, could be worth a million or more. An ingenious plan to set up a trust to fund the projects they see as worthy, by virtue of their being the trustee's...the old man must be rolling in his grave with that bit of news... -
Everything has at least two Sides
drsawzall commented on Celian's story chapter in Everything has at least two Sides
Matthew and the farm are in financial purgatory, it would seem. Tom is still an a-hole, but less of one now. I can't see Chris ever going back to the steel mill willingly, I can't see Frank as Whip Master, and...what is Mistress Alice up to?
