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Everything posted by drsawzall
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One wonders if the Central Foundation Boys' School is a boarding school or a day school?
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The beginning of this chapter reminded me of an old TV show, Are You Smarter Than A Fifth Grader, only we have third graders working here... The Crown of Red Herrings is strongly being considered for at least two likely suspects, which in and of itself is another colossal red herring. It is early days, and the author is seriously indicating that either Aiden or Catlin, whilst other worthwhile suspects remain lurking in the lily pond weeds. The man banging on the bedroom door, breaking up Joey's insemination seminar... The man jumping the fence, did he or was he banging Keiyara... Then there's the rock, and we all know rocks can't talk, but...DNA can sing a pretty impressive tune.... Joey's father, I would suspect his only reason would be money, either paying for college or a possible life insurance policy. Or it could have been accident as a result of a fight that night near the pool... Keyara's roommate, did Joey bang her also.... And I feel terrible about this, could it have been Joey's mother.... Aiden is up to something, he's moving all too fast... For someone needing hope and help, Catlin is not all that accepting of hope, help, and confirmation of the pregnancy... Someone has to tell Adam to start acting rationally... We've yet to see Miss Scarlet or Colonel Mustard appear....
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Here's hoping in this case the goblin isn't alone....
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Naked tea & LGBT history
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Naked tea & LGBT history
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It was a dark and stormy night?
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Act II - Empty Chairs At Empty Tables
drsawzall commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - Empty Chairs At Empty Tables
I believe she will stop at nothing to become Queen of the Bitches...Witches -
Chapter 19 - Finding Others
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 19 - Finding Others
Hopefully not Unda the Table.... -
Act II - Empty Chairs At Empty Tables
drsawzall commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - Empty Chairs At Empty Tables
Mother is only interested in her acquisition of power...letting her go back to the coven is/will be a mistake.... -
Secrets Unveiled, Bonds Forged.
drsawzall commented on E K Stokes's story chapter in Secrets Unveiled, Bonds Forged.
Corin is an enigma, and could very well be a wild card in all of this, we know he isn't one of the Romani...where is he from and is he a danger toEitenne? What is his obvious connection to the wealthy merchant? Much to unpack here.... -
Danae had best be careful, hubris is a trait she would do well to emulate...
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While society may have grown into this type of society, it certainly fits the definition of dystopian. That given an approximation of equal ratio of men to women, that fully a large portion of the population has nothing but their backs and labors to the "progress" of this society. It is beyond sad that someone could be born and die never having the chance to improve oneself, that the only escape from those brought into the mill might be a longing for a dip into the pool of molten steel as those born into it, know no better. Then there is Matthew, an educated man, one among a select few, who lack the ability to see past what is, and what could be. I'm often reminded as I peruse our society as it is, reminding myself of history's lessons, we so blithely ignore. Internal pressures never go away; the Russian Revolution of 1917 proves this. Or when large parts of our society, vote without thinking, believing the falsehoods of demagogues, that your neighbors are eating your dogs and cats...or when our leaders lie without shame...That colleges and universities are now being told that the key to unlocking federal funds is to teach the current administration's agenda.... Ooops...time to give my soapbox a rest...
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You think you're slow, I've seen continents drift apart faster....
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Could Grammarly be considered an evil creature feature?
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Is this the calm before another storm?
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Chapter 17 - Blame
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 17 - Blame
More importantly, how will they hook up with Dorjin or find other rebels??? -
Bobby is getting one heck of an education…
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Something about Jack Taylor isn't ringing true. Could he possibly have had an insurance policy on Joey? The whole thing about misremembering Will's phone number is interesting, seeing as how it was written down for him... Catlin is becoming suspect #1...is she being set up with her bad acting, mysterious ways, is she an all too obvious red herring??? Aiden's suggestion that he see a lawyer before giving her any money is interesting and on point. How will she react to such, seeing as how she won't allow company on any of her doctor's visits??? Then there is Aidien's desire to get married all too soon. Where was he at the time of Joey's death? Wasn't he the one who "found" the misplaced note? Searching that bedroom by himself would have given him time to conveniently 'place the discarded copy...Is he trying to cast any suspicion aside by rushing into marriage???
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If He Thought It Was Bad Before
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in If He Thought It Was Bad Before
I'm looking forward to Gavin getting his just desserts....someone should use their phone to record what Gavin and A-Hole Jr are saying/doing....- 26 comments
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It would seem that everyone's path is leading towards a climatic battle....
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That noose around Jaspe and his brother is getting tighter and the situation a bit more serious...I wonder if there were others on this side of the channel who were associates and not yet apprehended...finding one could lead to having them turn and cough up Jasper's location... Denise's suggestion about the flat with a granny apartment was very insightful!!!!
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Etienne needs to be careful…The priest and his aunt are bad omens…
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The was a kid named Kenny in my 7th grade class, the first time we had to take showers after Gym was an eye opener, as he was a man among boys...there wasn't anything small about his appendage...
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I love, love...that is when I am not being Uncle Cranky... .
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A deepening romance and new powers await to be fully discovered...what of the potential treasure on the recently acquired property??
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I found the part about the gold coins intriguing; a $20.00 gold piece is 1.075 troy ounces, as gold is measured in troy ounces. The price of gold today is $3320.00 per troy ounce. New, gold 1-ounce coins are selling for $3400 to $3500 depending on the vendor. price of gold today - Search Factor in that these coins are antique can raise the value: Used, a $20.00 coin may fetch a bit more than the price of gold today, about $3500 Mint, condition a $20.00 coin could run nearly $10,000.00 An uncirculated $20.00 coin could fetch upwards of $54,000.00 cost of a 1864 Confederate $20 gold coin - Search So the ESW made an appearance and was caught on camera, most likely anyone looking at it will see an emaciated, beat-up wolf... Can't for the life of me understand the neighbor Duncella...she needs to be told to mind her own business, if not charges for harassment will be filed, and appreciate the fact they are the best neighbors she will ever have...
