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  1. As I am retired, every day is a holiday....Spring as sprung, a little wetter than usual and yesterday was 79 degrees F and today we are low 60's F. We should be breaking out the lawnmowers in the next week or so... Already started next years firewood pile, want to get that mostly done before the notorious black flies come out, and very glad we've got summer approaching... Just turned the thermostats off, flannel shirts, sweatpants and sweatshirts are my fashion choice for a bit!!
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    Prologue

    Things that make you go hummm.... His strength was waning. He’d never felt the weakness as quickly as this. He would not be able to wait for a major crime much longer. He would have entered Detective Saggio, but he felt he was too weak to risk that and lose the capability to astral project forever.
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    Chapter 2 (3/6)

    I'm looking forward to this part of the story moving forward....
  4. A couple of things come to mind...our protagonist needs to find some professional help; he's wallowing in self-induced miasma. And his family needs help as well.... In golf there is a saying about the thought process one can take when standing over a tricky shot...paralysis by analysis...
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    Chapter 11

    Leo needs to take advantage of the tech and get a tongue ASAP...now after having sex, what else wil the rat demand??? Is there any chance of Jeisa getting preggers?
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    Chapter 2

    Better him than Killian or Joe, I only hope a future murder Killian investigates wasn't caused by his driving....
  7. What will he decide, England has no fond memories, will Charles follow?
  8. Thanks for the updates and additional background info!!
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    Chapter 2 (2/6)

    As noted, if extreme measures are about to be used, it's time for the rescue to begin...
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    Chapter 2

    I'm assuming with his clothes on..... Reap the wild wind also comes across in rural American communities as "Inherit the Wind, which also is play/movie about the Scopes Monkey Trial and the teaching of Darwin's theory of evolution in the 1920's... So true, tho you're ministering to the squirrel population in your neck of the woods is a testament towards your good character... I have a close friend who continues to save my soul, and while his intentions are fine, his dogmatic approach can be a bit tiresome, as reason and logic fail him. When reminded that woke originated with Jesus he finds an excuse to be elsewhere as he thinks of another approach... @Josh Aterovis...who's driving???? "Actually, you might get to meet him tomorrow. He and Asher are dying to see the new place and meet the roommate, so I invited them to come over tomorrow. They might even stay the night, kind of like a slumber party. If that's okay with you, I mean."
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    Chapter 13

    I have to wonder if the mysterious Lady in Black is behind this, using her powers to manipulate and dupe bank executives .... As to Charles Kensington, if he owns a house in Brighton, an audit of his finances should prove his ownership...
  12. One heck of an effort in response to Prompt #9!!! It begs the question, what would you do if you woke up one morning, and nothing was the same?
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  13. Very enjoyable and many thanks for posting...It's tomorrow way out, way...way out over the Atlantic ocean
  14. I had much the same feeling @LeatherNickLondon, what I liked best about this was the underlying themes of catharsis...
  15. And we know the bitches witches have something up their proverbial sleeve....is Ray the chosen one to end the strife between the three groups??? The witches? As if they needed to be told… But diplomatic curtesy demanded to keep them officially updated.
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    The Contract

    Perhaps David could be enchanted to look like Arlo if things get dicey....
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    A little Trust

    And here I was hoping Anduin 'fell' down a set of stairs....
  18. Again another lovely chapter...loved the following description, I could see it so vividly in my mind's eye... A diminutive woman opened the door, short yet rather wide, she was substantial yet bustled away in a lively manner, set off by a warm welcoming smile and an apron that was so vividly coloured it almost hurt the eyes. Hummm....something to ponder over... “What about Jasper?” >Don’t go there, Bri. Don’t go there.
  19. Only if you haven't been imbibing....even sober it's more than a mouthfull...
  20. It would appear, at least for the moment, the mission debrief on the Mars mission was successful
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    Advantage

    I don't know if the Senator fully understands the implications facing him...and kudos to Bryce for standing up for himself...the following gave me much admiration for him... “I’m okay dad.” He turned to smile tearily up at Nicolo, wiping a hand across his nose. “I’m okay papà. I’ve said my piece. I will be okay.” I reached up to pull out his hair tie, and ruffled it. He was so strong, I knew he really would be okay. He turned back to give me a smile too.
  22. Not sure what to say here....its like we are in a rinse and repeat cycle...
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    Chapter 29

    Am I wrong in thinking Jolanda is her own worst enemy??? But would Josel care about her looking like this? It wasn't the first time the same worry had flooded Jolanda's mind. She felt herself trembling - so upset was she. No, Josel had to care about her! After all, she was Vargan. If Jolanda wanted Josel to love her, then the boy would love her. I suspect at some point the disparate groups of evil doers will end up fighting one another....
  24. Could not have said it any better...thanks Chris!!!
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