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  1. What we have very is a virtual love shack!
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    Be my Guest

    I have a hunch that all eligible, possible suitors for the she-witch are steering clear of her...She is openly irresponsible and destructive. She'd be the ruination of any profitable farmstead...
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    Be my Guest

    Miss Brittany is a snake, an evil bitch, and trouble in spades... Frank is finding his sexuality and fixating on Dante... And a whole lotta of stuff to ponder on and has Tom learned any lessons???
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    Chapter 2

    An interesting series of jumps and quite the little surprise they found.... “Holy shit.” Someone said. “I see six hostiles.” I groaned. “I need Jump Gate activation NOW. Pass to NU. Run for the Gate.” I had everything this old girl could give, blowing out her ass end to move us forward, and we felt the vibrations through the deck plates as I drove us to the Jump Gate. I saw the gate spool up as I watched Nu Symphony’s aft shields light up with multiple hits from weapons fire as the Gate flared to life. And they jumped. We were right behind them. We dropped out the other side into normal space and I drove us away from the gate and brought us onto our new course.
  5. Let's hope the trip on the gentleman's ship is smooth sailing!!!!
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    Chapter 2

    Hoping it does not come down to this...
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    Chapter 2

    Lord almighty, could they possibly, truly, really be in Transylvania??? Looking forward to the next!!!
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    Chapter 1 Boy

    Thayer is deep in the hormonal swimming pool....let's hope he's good at swimming....
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    Chapter 34

    I'm gonna save some of my thoughts for my review, that and I need a new box of Kleenex, paper towels just don't cut it.... Please mark this as complete so your fans and readers can review this story... And truthfully, all I got is....from the bottom of my heart...
  10. And this is what I found this morning... tit·i·vate [ˈtidəˌvāt] verb make small enhancing alterations to (something): "she slapped on her warpaint and titivated her hair" Similar: groom tidy arrange brush comb smooth (titivate oneself) make oneself look attractive: "he was titivating himself, slicking his hair and freshening his breath" · "Grace had titivated in the bathroom" Similar: bathe shower wash up lave have a wash
  11. Things are in the process of taking off it would seem, out with the carpet and the ratty ceiling tiles, some cleaning and possibly painting and voila...new office space!! And a new word for my memory bank!!! Ralph nodded, “It can’t be worse than this smelly monstrosity.” “Bet the Estate Agents contact you with suggestions for titivating the place.” “You think?” “You bet”, she laughed.
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    Chapter 1

    Exciting times directly ahead...still curious as to who the two lost friends were, and what was the nature of the argument between Marc and his sister????
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    Prologue

    Could not have said it any better, much to unpack here and welcome back!!!
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    Chapter 2

    If there is family, in this case immediate family, the state of North Carolina then has no interest in placing him in a foster home, tell 'em to go pound sand... This gives me hope... The sun has gone down a little more. With the waves crashing, I think for a moment, and not a moment longer, that this will be okay. I'm safe. I'm okay
  15. Somehow, I see this getting out of control simply based on the numbers, there must be, in this country, thousands of people in the Blast stage...
  16. Loved this chapter, I remain concerned about Luis Barrasso of Amigos dos Amigos and the introduction of all the technology to others. Can/will Athena or Oracle know if sensitive information is being given to the wrong folks???? Keep your muse fed!!!!
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    22: Finley

    I think Finlay is just fine with what Emmet truly is....
  18. Well, your muse is certainly on the right track with story, so much packed into this chapter!!!
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    Chapter 33

    Grrr...sniff and as I look at the empty box of Kleenex, I've resorted to paper towels... There were casualties along the way, including the well-publicized closure of an auto parts distributor by the vindictive brothers that cost 2,000 jobs, along with the surrender of an insurance company and mining rights over a large amount of land in Colorado. But what they had salvaged was extraordinary, especially when pundits predicted that they could lose it all to the nefarious brothers. It was already touted as the next classic business school case study. Even their mother, with all her own formidable resources, couldn’t save her boys. While she was no pushover, Mr. Patterson could help taking satisfaction with how Mickey continually had her on her back foot. He often had made intimations (at Parker’s suggestion) that they’d go after her personal assets, too. I would have much rather seen the step-witch pay a higher price along with her drug-addled spawn, but there's impetus for a second book here, along with watching their lives in the future with various causes they champion...perhaps finding a way to save the auto parts distributor, but who knows what their future holds... As to the news there is only one chapter left, all I got is....
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    Peter’s Dance

    Love the story, looking forward to seeing how this goes....that and one could hope Barla finds a fishing net or hook....
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    Fragilities

    Mother always told me along with the fact that good girls don't pass gas, that going to bed with worries accomplishes nothing and nothing can be done till morning..... That they all need to communicate better is obvious, setting aside time to have quiet moments as a group, couples, and as father and sons is wonderful, but we've been there before in previous chapters and apparently to little or no effect as a result of those discussions. Will it stick this time, or will all of these repetitive issues continue to fester????
  22. Way to go Gramps!!!~!
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    Chapter 1

    Quite the departure from your last to say the least...an intriguing start, bring on the next chapter!!
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    Chapter 1

    Enjoyed this very much, and I think there's a chapter or two more that could be done...
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    Chapter 50 S2

    A very informative chapter with lessons for us all.... And...trouble lies across the parking lot....
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