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    Chapter 4

    See below....
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    Chapter 10

    Why is it the those with the strongest hate in their hearts are the ones who disobey the precepts of their faiths???
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    Chapter 9

    One can only hope the phone is with Thomas so he can be tracked...
  4. A powerful chapter!!
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    The Party

    Oh my goodness...brings me back to my wayward misspent youth...just after the dinosaurs passed and before we discovered leopard skin loincloths....
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    Chapter 7

    Like @Flip-Flop, I also was 10 years old at the time of the assassination and in the 3rd grade. As soon as school let out, I ran all the way home to tell my mother the news. She was in the kitchen quietly crying while listening to the radio. At the time we did not have a TV in the house as we siblings constantly fought over what would be watched. My older siblings would be home later and as such, my mother took me to the next town over and rented a TV. We were glued to it for the next several days. I was alone in the living room on the day Jack Ruby shot Oswald...It's a memory that is still vividly clear... My great grandmother had come out of her room to see what the fuss was when I yelled in shock...She was born in 1875, 10 years after the civil war, and saw so many things, electricity, flying to the Philippines to stay with her daughter who was doing missionary work, the first running of the Boston Marathon, both world wars, the moon landing, and so many other incredible events. She passed in 1976, one indelible memory was telling me stories of her great uncle Benjamin who was born in 1798 and passed in 1887. So much for reminisces, I loved the fact that Phil was able to get outside!!! Let's find Stanley and get Phil a date!~!~!
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    Chapter 9

    It will be interesting to see if she connects with Josel or Zdain.....
  8. Once again, thanks for taking the time to gift us with your craft, it is appreciated!!
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    Complex Tour

    This new retreat is/has covered all the angles so it would seem, I jest...including the end of the world...
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    Eighteen

    Simply loved the last paragraph, it is after all what friends are for!! “I think you’ll find the word is Lesbian”, there were grins all round at Hughie’s intervention, but it was a trap they were all trying not to fall into. On a lively night out, the chance of getting away with an evening without the use of the word faggot, queer, fairy or poofter was difficult. The irony was that it affected Keith’s mates more than him, he was aware that whatever the liveliness of their language, they had his back when it was most important.
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    Chapter 5

    It would appear to me that the good old Dr Dumbass is headed towards early retirement and serving time for grievous assault on a minor...at the very frigging least... Perhaps he should follow the following advice....While I can't, ahem...nudge, nudge, wink...wink, personally attest to the efficacy, I know others that could... Oh and when confronted with a cliffhanger, I recommend the following course of action...
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    Chapter 5

    @Summerabbacat, I think I have just the tool to be used...It is just the device that is used to neuter young bulls...
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    Chapter 3

    ow deep into the semester are we...if this joker isn't attending classes the school should have terminated his access to the campus and the buildings... Needless to say, it sounds like a war council is needed to ensure all avenues of escape are covered... Especially the highways leading to the airport...
  14. The following is sooo true... “Never take the road less traveled on a Tuesday,” X-Ø added. I chose angry as my emoticon...it is well past time to bring the battle to those who so desperately need it.....nuff said!!!
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    Coastal Holiday

    This neatly sums it up for me as well!!
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    Chapter 13 S2

    Devin's prank was a work of art to say the least...and a new, New Year's tradition has been started with the two families. I have to wonder if both fathers are into college basketball and March Madness... As to looking for treasure, they should consider the following...and to note, some believe some of the missing gold is stored in a cave... Confederate gold - Wikipedia
  17. A big truck or a garden shed possibly??? Falling into a swimming pool or a sewer??? Struck by righteous lightning, bonked by baseball sized hail??? Last but not least, a 60-year sentence to a max security prison???
  18. Thank all the freaking deities in heaven... Karl and I waited impatiently while his father called home. I knew when he relaxed that Barry was home; but I knew, Karl would need confirmation. It came when Karl told her, "Keep him there. If Stephanie shows up, don't let her in." Personally, I'm thinking euthanasia....
  19. Late to the party on this, Stephanie is right up there with the pantheon of despicable characters who inhabit your stories, I suspect Karma will find her to deliver her just rewards... I too am curious as to the origin of the deadly fire and loved the courtroom scene!!! Nowe on to the next chapter and wondering how I missed this one!!!!
  20. Thank you for this, the job of any author is to set the hook and reel the reader in, and boy did you do that as you can tell from the various comments from me and others along the way. I very much look forward to the next book knowing all sorts of adventures await our intrepid protagonists... Now, here's a thought, can another magical person like the witch in the swamp see through the new faces???
  21. Personally I hate it when this happens to me... “Looks like it”, he didn’t sound happy, “me bits’ll be left all dangly; I like my support.” Of larger concern is the sources of funding from dubious sources...if you don't make the vig, the knuckle busters and leg breakers just may stop in for a visit....
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    Chapter 16

    A very powerful chapter to say the least...At some point Andre should have that conversation with his parents, it closes the loop so to speak! As to Ollie's mother, what can be truly stated...she has more than defined herself and until she seeks the help she so urgently needs, the less said about her, the better...
  23. What mama needs is a blaster shot from close range and then the destruction of all the goutra and other narcotic pills...
  24. At the risk of sounding like a broken record or parroting previous reviews, this tale of policing has just about everything, including bits at the kitchen sink. This story is another fine example of why this story site is one of the best out there for the quality of the stories presented to the reading public. Take a moment, read the other reviews, and get cracking on a tale so intriguing, you'll be binging!!
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    Epilogue

    Thank you for this story, fantastic conception, well done, written, and had me like so many others hooked me from the get-go!!! Only other comment I could make is....mmmmm cake!!!
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