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And the party is just getting started….

Your best chapter yet…

Not to mention Whip’s bone….

leave it to Nils to see the best path forward….

Poor Daventry…thank goodness he’s got Grainger…I foresee a lot of backstabbing intrigue….And fun between the sheets!

Or pull your britches down and pass the lanolin….

So true, some professional advice would be helpful as well…you simply can’t turn of so many years together as if it were a spigot.

Thanks for the comments and sticking with the story!!!

Who hired the Red Mantis??? Was it the Queen???

You forgot the bus was full of nuns escorting the choirboys to their next gig...

The following gives me pause, and at least Micah was driving... He sighed, then looked around quickly. In a low voice he said, "Killian, you have to understand that this is my job and I have to remain professional. I've already gone out on a limb telling you as much as I have. If any of this leaks to the media, it'll be my head on the block. Besides all that, this is a murder we're dealing with, and while I realize it's not your first murder, we could be dealing with someone extremely dangerous. I want you to be very careful from here on out. Got it?" I nodded. "I'm always careful." He rolled his eyes. "Right, and I'm the Pope. Now get going so I can do my job. We can talk more tomorrow." "Thank you, Sgt. Kaplan." Micah was way off base pressuring Killian to break a confidence...not a good move...

I can't disagree, and it is critical that Henry get factual information...Tom or Dante, possibly, Sawyer, not in a million years..

I think it was a mistake to leave Miller alone while Hank went to get Jessie...But he got just exactly what he deserved. Was he broken, or simply humiliated? Will Miller want to seek revenge and put Hank in his place? If that's the case, I expect Miller's diet may include a copper jacketed, lead hollow point.

The end of the chapter, not disregarding the hot sex between Sean and Gabriel, has me worried for Scott....

It picks up and gets better I assure you!!

And so it begins: Gabriel and Sean finding chemistry, Lonnie, the ever-patient watchdog, and, not least, Fredrick officially having a possible 2-for-1 assignment... And...what's up with the room service employee???

Thanks!!!

Give it a chance, it does get better I assure you!

Thanks, I hope you stick with this, and I appreciate the comment immensely!!!

I haven't had a chance to go back, but Camille's leaving Rowan with his father also came with conditions he set down...I believe concerning the frequency with which she could contact her son... And this is on Rowan, he could have, at any time, let her know what his father was doing to him... Nuno, would you be so kind as to remind me what those were? While I agree this chapter was cathartic, neither of the three of them holds the high ground; what dynamic comes out of this will be interesting to see...

Is this a proverbial calm before the storm, a tempest in a teapot... Or acceptance, no matter how difficult... The limit arrived. The composure broke. The tears arrived without sound. The tears were not about the sex. The tears were not about the betrayal. The tears were about the hope.

Is the Deer planning to sacrifice himself? Shouldn't the chapter be better titled Underhanded? Who's giving Arlo a "hand"!!!

Thank goodness it wasn't a stop sign....or a pooper scooper....

I feel that you should continue!!