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  1. Certainly is, in between the guns, bombs, and car crashes. If you check out his linen closet, you'll find ginormous boxes of Kleenex....
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    Chapter 12

    Who does he think he's fooling??? Thanir seems to forget that they all but divorced themselves from Lyria in a very bloody purge...they have no right to dictate to them any more...I'd tell 'em to go pound sand...and what can the Sura expect with any agreement that may could wipe them out just to satisfy power hungry assholes in the future??? Lyria has forfeited any possible claim on Sura; any possible agreement between the two has to be as equals, restoration of all their confiscated properties, along with financial restitution. Not to mention the return of all who never made it back home... “The Sura have a lot to gain from an agreement with the Lyria Kingdom,” Thanir said, holding his right hand tight. “There have been rumors that they have grown their island and changed their power structure. The Nerasa Kingdom is sniffing around them and may attempt a soft annexation. However, Sura Island is still part of Lyria; any annexation done by the Nerasa Kingdom would trigger a war. It is not something the Sura would want. Lean on that when you meet the new Sura Chieftain.” Find the cure for the child, and send them on their way back home...this isn't something easily fixed....
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    Chapter 15

    While it wouldn’t serve the story, Calder and his four goons would never left the property…A sudden case silver coated lead poisoning would explain why…. I thinking he’s a tad too overconfident, and that will be his downfall…and he should be put on the defensive ASAP… God forbid Calder hurt or harm Xavier…not sure he’d live long enough to regret it..
  4. Don’t believe him dear author, I have heard he has dropped trow after the wine has been served and two chapters in…
  5. Well, that was a surprise and there will be consequences for all involve in this circle!
  6. drsawzall

    Chapter 14

    Therein lies the rub, what most actors lose or forget.. I wasn’t acting,” I said quietly. “I know.” She turned to me then, her expression unreadable but not cold. “Don’t lose that,” she said. “The industry will try to take it from you. Protect it.”
  7. Oh boy…nothing like brotherly love…
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter Five

    Cole…call me, 555.444.6969
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    Chapter Five

  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    It would be poetic justice if all of Acosta’s plans came to naught…
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    It would be poetic justice if all of Acosta’s plans came to naught…
  12. Finally, someone for Callum and it will be fun to see where it goes
  13. Just so sad and pathetic..not sure where you are trying to go with this one, seems like a lot of unnecessary overkill and much seems redundant…
  14. Spot on, couldn’t say it better….
  15. Save me some of the rhubarb, apple crumble and ice cream!Should I bring the Volvo?
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    Chapter 11

    With all his caterwauling about the Prime Minister Gesi Ajai puts another nail in the box he is building…someone soon will put the pieces together…my bet it will be Soriel… And the fates decree a trip to Sura Island…an island with its own difficulties…and will Raith be granted permission and will he be welcome?
  17. You ain’t the only one pardner…I’m still not over that one!!!
  18. So many stories I’ve missed…thanks for increasing my reading list! 😁
  19. drsawzall

    Chapter 10

    Whatever Naeri’s faults, she redeemed much of her transgressions by knocking the tea cup from Yulin’s hands. Her quick and decisive reaction saved his life. One more nail in the box Gesi Ajai’s downfall. There a number of disparate clues out there and it is only a matter of time until he’s finally found out…
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    Chapter 9

    Where there’s a need and a way forward, those determined will find a way to succeed. Amd another piece of this large puzzle drops… Wiping away tears, Azula read on. The minister named Gesi Ajai had landed a windfall by becoming the new minister of finance and leaving his ministry of agriculture to a subordinate. Azula frowned; somehow, that felt important, but he could not fit it into his clan’s misfortune
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    Chapter 8

    A masterful gathering evidence and following leads, leaving no stone unturned… And as noted Gesi Ajai has unwittingly slipped up once again…The pressure he must be feeling is slowly building… Gesi Ajai turned in his seat to see who the Draeya Prince was inviting. He had to hide his surprise when he saw Eden’s mother and sister. He had been looking for Eden to join Naeri’s entourage as she prepared to enter Raithion’s house. What the hell were they doing here? Oh no, was Eden the dead palace maid? Unable to hide his frown, Gesi Ajai shifted his attention to Olneth, who sat next to the Grand Dowager undisturbed. Gesi looked at Raithion and cursed under his breath when he saw Raithion watching him. *** Raithion noted Gesi Ajai’s small movements but had no time to dwell on them.
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    Chapter Four

    I happen to know a time traveling capybara courtesy of @chris191070….
  23. I’m suspecting ifin Albert twere to be bitten by a rattlesnake, it’d be the snake that dies… And…if the boys up and move with Fletcher’s animals, they best be on the lookout for trouble along the trail…
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    Chapter Four

    Oh, I read the synopsis and saw the pic of jerk face on the motorcycle…hopefully he swerves into a pond…
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    Chapter Four

    Hey…I spotted him first!…just gotta step into my rejuvenation chamber/time machine…
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