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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 10

    Hopefully surgical skills will only need to be used on the two goons.
  2. Perhaps we need Dr Livingston to pull the stick from Stanley’s backside…..
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    Frank

    My goodness this was an intense chapter and very well done.
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    Aftermath

    Taggert, living on a self imposed island is beginning to see that it’s ok to step off and test the waters so to speak…. The other commenters above have said it much better the I could. This was a fantastic chapter…
  5. My comment from the first time reading this... Simply a masterclass in story arc and development. In many ways it was a rollercoaster ride for the gamut of thought provoking emotions. All in all it demonstrated that as flawed humans we are capable of redemption. Poingant, sanguine, and heart wrenching. I found the ending simply powerful.......Thank you!!! Thanksgiving is coming up in six weeks or so. MJ will be there. Come up to the Twin Cities for the holiday. Carrie would love to get to know you, and the kids need a chance to meet their uncle.” Sarafian’s face looked wary. “I don’t know. I’m not—” Knowing what a leap for him such a visit would be, I cut him short, and covered his hand again. “You have to be there. You’re family.”
  6. drsawzall

    Chapter 17

    When this is all over and accounts settled, I believe the following just may become reality… Your home is beautiful and warm,” Raithion said, looking toward the house. “Yulin loves it here. And the women in the kitchen have shown Skye so much love than I could have imagined. Thank you for inviting us into your space.” Azula settled the heavy towel around his neck. “What about you, Raithion? Are you comfortable here?” They reached the heavy front door, and Raithion stepped ahead to hold it open. “I do feel a peace here that I haven’t felt in years,” Raithion said honestly as they stepped into the cool, quiet hallway. "I've slept deeply, eaten good food, and spent hours enjoying the weather in your courtyard. Everyone we've met has been very kind. We love it here."
  7. drsawzall

    Chapter 16

    To a new beginning and let justice be served! It is time to make Gesi Ajai pay for his crimes. A cornered animal is at its most dangerous…What comes won’t be easy and I expect plots within plots…
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 15

    Hopefully the meeting in the morning should go a long way towards normalizing the issues between them. When Azula meets with the Basileus Dio, nothing less than full independence from Lyria should be granted…
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 14

    Could not have said it any better….
  10. And now the hard part comes…rehab!
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    Chapter Six

    Early days yet…but Ryder has set the hook, now to land Owen. Cole…call me we don’t live that far apart, 123 Maple St, Anytown 23455
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    Chapter 9

    Perhaps they could alternate nights and positions….. This is tragically hilarious… The worst kept secret that keeps the town laughing and placing bets..
  13. So mother wants to marry Rose off to Oliver….a minor complication hopefully! And finally the boys consummated their love by having their cake and eating it too!
  14. I agree with all the others and look forward to more!
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    Chapter 12

    Or one with a reoccurring rash in his secret place…
  16. drsawzall

    Chapter 11

    And now for the fun part, the original Mission Impossible!
  17. Certainly is, in between the guns, bombs, and car crashes. If you check out his linen closet, you'll find ginormous boxes of Kleenex....
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    Chapter 12

    Who does he think he's fooling??? Thanir seems to forget that they all but divorced themselves from Lyria in a very bloody purge...they have no right to dictate to them any more...I'd tell 'em to go pound sand...and what can the Sura expect with any agreement that may could wipe them out just to satisfy power hungry assholes in the future??? Lyria has forfeited any possible claim on Sura; any possible agreement between the two has to be as equals, restoration of all their confiscated properties, along with financial restitution. Not to mention the return of all who never made it back home... “The Sura have a lot to gain from an agreement with the Lyria Kingdom,” Thanir said, holding his right hand tight. “There have been rumors that they have grown their island and changed their power structure. The Nerasa Kingdom is sniffing around them and may attempt a soft annexation. However, Sura Island is still part of Lyria; any annexation done by the Nerasa Kingdom would trigger a war. It is not something the Sura would want. Lean on that when you meet the new Sura Chieftain.” Find the cure for the child, and send them on their way back home...this isn't something easily fixed....
  19. drsawzall

    Chapter 15

    While it wouldn’t serve the story, Calder and his four goons would never left the property…A sudden case silver coated lead poisoning would explain why…. I thinking he’s a tad too overconfident, and that will be his downfall…and he should be put on the defensive ASAP… God forbid Calder hurt or harm Xavier…not sure he’d live long enough to regret it..
  20. Don’t believe him dear author, I have heard he has dropped trow after the wine has been served and two chapters in…
  21. Well, that was a surprise and there will be consequences for all involve in this circle!
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    Chapter 14

    Therein lies the rub, what most actors lose or forget.. I wasn’t acting,” I said quietly. “I know.” She turned to me then, her expression unreadable but not cold. “Don’t lose that,” she said. “The industry will try to take it from you. Protect it.”
  23. Oh boy…nothing like brotherly love…
  24. drsawzall

    Chapter Five

    Cole…call me, 555.444.6969
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    Chapter Five

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